Unfortunate Love (MG-RN) Part 5 30/06/13 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@cutestar12: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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awesome ff
maan n naina's engagement 😲
naina went to get parcel n is later found unconsicious
geet n maan find her n geet is stabbed when maan goes to get the car
geet in coma n maan feeling as if his world has stopped but why???

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awesome ff ... interesting one !!!
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awsum start
please pm me when u start he next part
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Part 5

Dear diary


Aaj mera 2nd year ka pehla din hai collage main

Flash backs

Geet: hai baba ji mujhe aaj dadt nahi khani hai plz muj... Naina!

Geet turns around and finds Naina standing in the same place where she was 2 minutes ago busy fixing her hair and make up while stairing at herself in the mirror

Geet: Naina daar ho rahi hain jaldi challo

Naina ignores geet as she scans the area in order to find a washroom in order to fix her hair as soon as she layes her eyes on it she runs towareds the doors

Geet: Naina!! kaha ja rahi ho humari class toh kahi aur hai

Naina: muhje pata hai maine upne bal theak karne ja rahi hun

Geet: lekin tu...

Naina: tum jao meh ati hun

Geet: uff chado

Geet realises shes getting late and quickly tunrs around to go to her class she manages to hold her 3 heavy books in one hand a bag full of notes and more book on her other shoulder and glares at her watch while in a hurry she bumps into someone droping everything on the floor

Geet: hai baba ji deko sub kuch ghera dia tum dekhe ke nahi chale sakte ab tumhari vajese main dadt khaun gi tu...

Maan: oii behen ji (geet neals down to grap her book) mujhe koi shoke nai hai tum se takra ne ka aur andha kisko bola huh tum upne iss cheap ghari ko dekne me busy thi

Geets eyes and mouth were wide open

Geet: behenji? Mein koi behenji vehenji nahi hun aur meri ghari sasti zaroor hogi lekin tum jaisi faltu nahi hai

Befor he had a chance to blast on her she quickly runs from there

Maan: (shouts) faltu kise kaha

Geet : TUMHEN!!! (in a very faint voice as shes quite far away from him)

Maan: (unable to say anything in return, opens his eyes extremely wide and talks to himself) mujhe,...mujhe faltu kaha use to meh nahi chorunga

Just as he turns his eyes lend on a beautiful girl with light brown eyes rosey red cheeks and baby pink lips maan was unable to look way as he was mesmerized by her beauty as he can see her approaching towards him he fixes his hair and cloths ready to trap her with his charms

Maan: hello beau...

As he was in the middle of a sentence she ignores maan and heads towareds her class maan stands in the same position wondering what just happened as he turns around he see is best friend staring at him with a huge smirk on his face

Maan: kya hai tum mujhe aise kyu ghoor rahe hon

Adi: hehe tum jis ladki ko ase hi jo ghoor rahe the na uske spne dekhna chod do

Maan: kyu?? Mera matlab hai konsi ladki

Adi: wohi jo abhi anhi yahan se gayi uska name hai Naina aur voh baki ladkiyo jaisi dikthi zaroor hai lekin who asi vasi ladki nahi hai aur tumhai type ki tho bilkul nahi

Maan : kya matlab hai ki vo meri type ki nahi hai

Adi: use tumhare jaise ladko bilkul pasand nahi hai aur vaise bhi uski silf ek hi dost hai aur jub tak tum ussai dost nahi karte tum Naina ke sapne dekhna band kardo

Maan: stands there with his confused look whispering

Geet? Ab ye geet kon hai or main use dosti kyun karu ?

Adi: looks at maan nods his head and smiles ab chalo dar ho rahi hai

And they both head towards there class

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Edited by cutestar12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5
nice part...
Naina has attitude...
cont soon dear...

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