Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10 - Page 48

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Kaash hume ek epilogue bhi mil jata... Any chances veeru :-D

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Allrite Veeru let me come out 4m d trance of ur OS First... I knw tu gussa hai datsy i didnt replied ur pm becoz i wanted to read nd comment first

yaar sachi me mere paas words nhi hai ye bayan karne k liye k mujhe ye os kitna acha laga hai... I was lyk in sme other world wen i was reading... I had felt each nd every emotion of both Maan nd Geet as if everything was happening in front of my eyes... I smiled widely wen i read their cute-sweet moments, i cried nd was angry wen i read geet's past, i was overwhelmed wen i saw maan's selfless nd pure love nd u wont believe it bt i m actually blushing after reading dere SR wali lines... In short it was beutiful, mesmerising, fabolous, enchanting, awesome, serene, marvelous etc etc OS! oh! I dnt have any more words to tell hw mch i love dis OS...

Yaar veeru hats off to u yaar... I mean its difficult 4 us to write nd show each nd every emotions thru words nd tune to sab kuch poem k thru dikhaya hai dat to so beautifully... I seriously bow down in frnt of u... Tune sachi me dil khush kar diya... A big big big bone crushing hug to my Veeru 4 giving such a wonderful OS... LOVE YOU LOADS!!!!

Ritzz...
i knw... m stupid.. mad... i am jz sooo late to comment...

but babes.. this one is unique in its own...
masterpiece by you...
srsly... its emotional vry vry vry strong and an absolute delight to read...

i loved hw u showed... they began apart n finally are tgthr...
its tough to bring it out in petry n i knw it...

love you darling...
u absolutely rock my GF... 🤗

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Ritzz...
i knw... m stupid.. mad... i am jz sooo late to comment...

but babes.. this one is unique in its own...
masterpiece by you...
srsly... its emotional vry vry vry strong and an absolute delight to read...

i loved hw u showed... they began apart n finally are tgthr...
its tough to bring it out in petry n i knw it...

love you darling...
u absolutely rock my GF... 🤗

Originally posted by: PariNain

Finally I am here to replace R tag with my official comment
I knw I am late actually tooo late
but Paroo Yaar I am ready for the punishment.

Jo saza dein gaye woh sar jhuka k qabool
hum ne ishq se pehlay Bandgi seekhi hy

no back to update
wow paroo that was juat wow
I am lacking of words for describing it
it was just a fantastic representation of their emotions
I read it again for the comment and I am still in the world u created around me through ur beautiful poetry
amazing I love the way Maan tell her how much he love her and how her past does not affect him a bit.
I love the part where u described their Marriage
finally they are one
and abt poetry that was full of emotions and seriously gal why did not u chose literature
u were perfect for it
u have a natural talent
don't waste it
luve u
and I hope u are not angry on me
I am crossing my fingers

P.s forgot this 😉
Khuda karay zor e qalam aur bhi zayada 😊

@mishtiritu: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

Thank u soo much for the comments...