FF: Forbidden!! - last prt on pg 74

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys i was gettin really bored so i decided on writing a fan-fic again and this time i promise i'll not leave it in the middle but finish it off like my other 2 ffs. Here is the introduction to my new ff- "FORBIDDEN" if u like wat u read i'll continue with it and post the 1st prt tomm. oh!! and this is not like the original serial its a very diff. story but u'll come to know that as the story progresses

FORBIDDEN- AN INTRODUCTION

JAI WALIA - He 35 yrs old and is the eldest son of late Uday Walia, and had taken the full responsibility of his family after his father death, and has taken the family business to new heights, it is believed whatever he touches turns into gold, the walia's are the richest ppl in India, they are so rich that they have made a short of a city of their own it is known as the walia city. He loves his family more then anything in the world and would go at any length to make them happy.

PUSHKAR WALIA - He was 29 yrs old, he was the 2nd son of uday walia, he was easygoing and a fun loving person, his life became miserable after his marriage to pia shukla, he had made himself believe that he was madly in love with her and had gotten married to her and had later never regretted anything as much. His daughter Krishna was apple of his eyes.

JYGIASSA WALIA - She is 25 yrs old and has a heart of gold (doesn't play a major prt in this ff)

BILLO WALIA - She is the 2nd wife of Uday Walia, who married her after the death of his first wife and mother of Jai walia, she is the real mom of pushy and jigs. She loves jai like her own son but she never tried to take his mother's place, jai too loves billo like his own mother but calls her Massi.

PIA WALIA - She has only one motive in life and to be rich and secure and she succeeded in her motives when she trapped pushy in marrying her. She has no emotions of any short and is a accomplished liar.

KRISHNA WALIA - 7 yr old daughter of pushy and pia. She is an emotionally disturbed child and very sensitive by nature.

Finally BANI DIXIT - 29 yrs old, She is a very famous actress but unlike other actresses she is very simple and sweet and has a heart of gold, she loves everyone and hates no one, she even loves pia as her own sis, even though they r just cousins, bani had been orphaned when she was a child and had moved in with pia's family who had given her all their love and support and bani too had loved them dearly in return, and she is always there for pia and in her hour of need.

betw pushy and pia did not live in walia city but in mumbai, bani too lives in mumbai.

ok i think i have explained all the imp. Characters, although there might be some additions later.


INDEX

CHAPTER 1 PG 4

CHAPTER 2 PG 6

CHAPTER 3 PG 9

CHAPTER 4 PG 14

CHAPTER 5 PG 18

CHAPTER 6 PG 20

CHAPTER 7 PG 24

CHAPTER 8 PG 28

CHAPTER 9 PG 31

CHAPTER 10 PG 34

CHAPTER 11 PG 37

CHAPTER 12 PG 41

CHAPTER 13 PG 46

CHAPTER 14 PG 48

CHAPTER 15 PG 50

CHAPTER 16 PG 51

CHAPTER 17 PG 53

CHAPTER 18 PG 55

CHAPTER 19 PG 57

CHAPTER 20 PG 60

CHAPTER 21 PG 62

CHAPTER 22 PG 63

CHAPTER 23 PG 65

CHAPTER 24 PG 67

CHAPTER 25 PG 69

CHAPTER 26 PG 71

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cutie shruti thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great start atleast here jai h8z pia nd poor pushy pooch man feel well bad for him nd krishnaa sweet girl and atleast bani and jai talk lol itz great do continueee 😃
Edited by cutie shruti - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mind blowing makes me feel sad it reminds me of the old days of KS 😭 😭 😭 !!!!

please continue!!!

sharan XXX

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great start and looling forward to reading more of your work after 'only love'!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey minks that was awesome..
that sounds really interesting..
please post the first part soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nooooooooooooooo!!!! minks!!! i ws gona be first yaar!!!!!!! damit.... lol 😆 😆 😃 chalo... theek hai.... bt nxt tym... i will be first!! haahahaaaa!!! lol 😆 😆

yaar now ur gona hav to take bak ur thanks... all i did ws read it.... nothing els... 😃 😃

heehee... iv already told u wt i thought bt the last bit i dint read ws awesome toooo!!!!! wow!! jai reeli has some anger 😆 😆

bt jst incase i havnt told u yt - thank u for startin another ff!!!! 🤗 n i also forgt to tell u .... i love the name!!! its reeeli gd!!!! 😊
Edited by bollycrazy - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Minks,
Awesome start yaar!
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was brillant plz update the next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was an awesome start....but please do let us know why Jai and Bani started off on the wrong foot....and also how old is Jai...Pia and Pushkar....just to get an idea...Also does Bani stay at WM? Why?

Is there Rano and Jigs in the story? Well...sorry for the questions but I am just trying to get an idea of how this is going to proceed...
luv rivs
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful start.very interesting intro.loved it.cant wait to read more.plz cont soon. 😊

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