AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
OMG! Wonderful part. The last part took my breath away. He REALLY said that! :D :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
This is just amazing dear.so beautifully written.Luvd it yaar...mujhe bhi ache se likhna sikha do na😆
anyways luvd it...please do continue soon and pm me if u can
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
wow...amazing updte...m so speechless...luved it..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww..that was really very nice...
Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

This is beautiful... Actually both Asad and Zoya's eyes express more than their words...you portrayed their emotions so well...just loved it.

Waiting for the next part eagerly...


PS- the title is awesome!!!!



Thanks 😳

Yay! Glad you like the title 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Loved it.. Do continue soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Beautiful!

Waiting for next part! :)
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Oh my god! When's the next update!!???!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was BEAUTIFUL! I want next part now PRETTY PLEASE! i cannot wait yaar!:(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
that was an amazing update
very beautiful
i really enjoyed reading
and i get that Zoya is afraid that Asad won't believe her
but she really should tell him everything
because there's only so much pain anyone can bare
physical or otherwise
anyway nice update and please continue soon😊

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