SS- Waiting for You ❤️-Chapter-10 Pg26

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Note- Hi , dear reader This is my first short story. This work of fiction and its characters are purely my imagination.😊
I will be writing this story in 10 chapters . I shall update twice weekly .

What if the one you live for.. you breathe every second for'leaves you alone..to wait' an endless wait'It is often easier for those who leave but tougher for those who stay on' behind them..in hope of return of their love .. This story is about two characters Meera and Shekhar and their incomplete love stories' both waiting for their love' Meera's wait is endless..will shekhar end his ?

Prologue

"Tu mujhe chod jaaye yeh nahi ho sakta..

Meri baton mein tera zikr sada

Meri Yaad mein teri fikr sada.."

It was sunny Friday morning.. Meera was getting ready for the day.. She looked into the mirror..

Everything was perfect.. Saree that she wore was his favorite..She had put his favorite cologne. His favorite lip color.. same earrings that he gave her on their first anniversary.. He always loved her hair loose 'she kept her hair the same way the way he liked' Everything on her was his choice' and so was she' As she looked in the mirror, she felt his presence around as if he is watching her..She turned around but room had familiar loneliness..Silence that she had learned to live with..

Meera took her purse lying on bed and walked out of the room. Her Maa was waiting for her at breakfast. She knew it was Friday ..the day which gave meera a hope' only day in the week when she dresses herself up as an angel and walks out of her room..her captivity' Only day when Gayatri Devi , Lady of the house gets to spend some moments with her daughter in law..

"Maa, Good Morning "

"Good morning meera, you are looking beautiful.."

Meera slightly smiled on hearing the compliment. She took her seat next to her Maa and next few minutes passed in awkward silence as both took their meals

"Maa, I am going out today'I might be late ..Dont wait for me at dinner'"

Gayatri knew it was coming but now she had learned to live with this routine

"Sure dear, just take care of yoursel..Don't be too late..It is not safe at late hours"

Meera nodded as she got up and kissed her maa's forehead..

"Don't worry.. "

Gayatri smiled thinking about worries she had and infact is living with each day '. Wishing that meera realizes one day' that those who left them will never again come back'..never ever..

At the other end of city, Shekhar was getting ready for office' He knew'that she will come again in a hope and he will get some time to see her..sometime just to be with her

"Maa, I will be late today'Have some urgent work'Don't wait for me at dinner" said shekhar to his old mother who was busy in her usual household work..

"You will meet her today again right'. " asked his mother..

"I have to go maa'."He left her question unanswered.. He didn't know why he waited for this day.. in a hope..that someday meera will realise.

And then he left his home

[/NOCOPY]
I want to dedicate this story to my friends - specially to madhu(mpk2011) for forcing me to write story and then my buddy who has always stood by me- Jachu (blueballoon).Special shout out for my CC friends who encouraged and supported- specially Nandu n amrita *hugs*.
Plus to all my friends who came here and have been part of my IF journey.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

Four years ago

Meera a young enthusiastic girl whose life was surrounded with her friends and family…Being the only girl in her house, She was very pampered by her two elder brothers and her parents..Meera was the life in the house…Her chirpy voice and her laughter made every morning in the house a celebration….

"Meera , at least have your breakfast…" said meera's mother looking anxiously at meera who was busy in getting ready for her college. Meera knew She was already late and that was as usual..

"No Mom, I cant…. Shekhar would be waiting for me..He has to drop me college today..and you know how particular he is about time.. " Meera chuckled and hurriedly ran outside kissing her mother's forehead.

Shekhar was already outside meera's house. A serious man who knew importance of every minute in his life. He knew meera would be late as usual but he didn't mind waiting for her as she was his only friend perhaps and somewhere even more than that . They were both miles apart in nature but yet they knew each other so well. Even they didn't know when and how they became best friends. Though unlike Shekhar, Meera had many friends, she was an extrovert who loved making new friends but still Shekhar was someone whom she connected the most and knew that he is a friend that she can count on throughout her life.

Meera came running to his car and as she came a smile spread across Shekhar's face. Meera opened the door and sat in front seat nearly loosing her breath.

"I know I know..I am very late..I am so so sorry… " Meera looked at shekhar apologetically .

But Shekhar gave her slight smile saying "I don't mind waiting for you"

Meera laughed "Let's go before we get ourselves out of class today…."

Shekhar started his car and they drove to their engineering college which was quite at a distant from meera's house. On the way meera started her non stop talks on yesterday's events at home..the way she teased her brother Nikhil about his new girlfriend and how she imitated her dad reaction only to be caught by him later. Shekhar enjoyed this drive so much with her and her talks. He often felt like this journey never ends as these were only moments in his life where he could just forget all his worries of life, his responsibilities.He had a lonely childhood being the only son of his mother, his father had left them long ago and married again. What fun it was to have so many relations in your life , he learnt it from meera only. Soon their journey ended and as Shekhar parked his car, Meera ran in full speed saying -"Will meet you class, have to submit my assignment to physics teacher before she leaves for her class". Shekhar just sighed wishing journey could have been a little longer.

Meera was quite popular in her college. She was an all rounder- good in studies, good in cultural activities , a prankster and one of the prettiest girl in the college. No doubt every boy in the college wanted to be her friend.

It was first day of new semester. Meera and Shekhar reached on time. But as usual Shekhar took first row seat, meera as usual went backseat with her other gang. Everyone got the news of some new students joining as many diploma students joined college in second year. Four of Five new joinees were already in the class and Amit Sir , the class teacher had started marking the attendance and introducing them to the class .

"We have some new inclusions in the class from today , I can see those new faces. Welcome to class students, I was told they were 5 but I can see only 4…where is 5th one…."

There he was standing at the door.

"Can I come in Sir.. So Sorry for being late ..My train got a bit delayed.." a soft husky voice came from the door and everyone looked at that direction.

A young tall and handsome boy stood with a confidence on his face and a pleasing smile…

Edited by riti4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first!...



its a cute beginning... just like you dear...






first let me do some "opening ceremony"




hmmm... So, Shekhar n Meera are friends. didnt expect this twist when i read the prologue...
i thought, only Shekar knows Meera. cute story with an interesting flash back...😳

well written dear! so these two kept you busy these days😳

beautiful lines... "tu mujhe chod jaaye yeh nahi ho saktha"


i loved the banner too...

edited;

thankoos for the dedication dear...😳 🤗

you know, you are such a cute girl... sometimes we wonder how some one can be as cute n sweet like you all the time... n at times you make me laugh with your emotional approach to everything...
Edited by blueballoon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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niiice opening. intriguing, tense. emotional and i love love stories... looking forward. congratulations on taking the big step. you are brave.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpk2011





Lovely start Riti. 👏 A love triangle it seems. He loves her and she...😊.
Try increasing the size of the chapters, it is a treat to read.

Editwa!

Thankoos for the dedication dear



Waiting eagerly for the next emotional and intense chapter. There won't be any lack of emotions when Riti is there😊


Edited by mpk2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Riti..so u started finally..!!

Read it..!Loved it.!!😃Looking frwd to see how it proceeds..!

Thankoos for PM.!!
Yeh lo..meri taarf se...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How could I not support you on this venture? You must continue Riti.🤗
Very happy that you started your own story, you are indeed a brilliant writer!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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riti,

you are turning out to be a good story teller. prologue is good.
will cme back to make more comments


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Posted: 12 years ago
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riti thnx for the pm🤗 i have been following your post from ipk days. you have such a good knack on writing. there is a place in my chotu sa heart to write stories but it always get stuck in mind and difficult to explain in words . i hope i can learn more from you if i get time from my busy life😆
regarding this starting awesome. loved it😳 i love stories on friendship😃 waiting for more establishment of characters 😃 starting was just pleasurable to read.
pm me for further read😳
Edited by sonapri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueballoon

me first!...



its a cute beginning... just like you dear...






first let me do some "opening ceremony"




hmmm... So, Shekhar n Meera are friends. didnt expect this twist when i read the prologue...
i thought, only Shekar knows Meera. cute story with an interesting flash back...😳

well written dear! so these two kept you busy these days😳

beautiful lines... "tu mujhe chod jaaye yeh nahi ho saktha"


i loved the banner too...

my first reader... Aww thanks jachu...well even i dont knw wat i plan with the story...😆...lets see...
yeah they kept me busy today...
I am glad u liked it..😊

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