TR os ~ mausam hai bada quatil ~ {dare complete} [

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi my pandas and monkeys...here i m with an update...enjoy...actually is me ss bhi hai so ss romance me zyada likh nahi payi...but i try my best...actually i want to write a short os...but ye to lamba ho gaya...chalo koi baat nahi...plz like and comment.

this is my gift for my sweeties on their bday...taareylive[yashi jaan] and Nsohi[niks darling]...enjoy my soulmates

Dare by :shivi77{my choti}
Song :mausam hai bada quatil from chup chup ke
Concept :new

Reyam were sitting on the bed with their hands on their cheeks.

"bhai..."said rey

"hmmm..."answer swayam...

"bhai kuch kehna hai aapse..."said rey...

"ha bolo na..."said sw

"vo taani ke bare me..."said rey and swayam's eyes popped out...

"what uske khadus ladki ke bare me kya baat karni hai???jab dekho tab to tere sath ladti rehti hai miss ladaku khadus."said swayam...

"bhaiii...dont say anything about my taani"saud rey and swayam stand up on the bed...rey too stand up...

"kya hua???"ask rey...

"phir se bol..."said swayam...

"kya hua??"repeat rey..

"are vo nahi...us se pehle jo bola vo..."said swayam...

"taani ke bare me..."said rey...

"nahi nahi...us se pehle..."ask sw..

"kya kaha mene??"ask rey..

"are vo...meri taani...""said sw

"what teri taani...i mean aap aur taani...nahi esa nahi ho sakta bhai...me taani se pyar karta hu...aap...aap usse bhul jao..."said rey...

"what means tu taani se pyar karta hai???"ask swayam...

"ha aur aap us se pyar nahi..."rey was saying this just then he heard...

"aahhh...aaahhh...rey...ye tune thik nahi kiya...meri taani se tu pyar kaise..."sw said putting his hand on his heart and act as he feel heartattack and he fell on the bed...

"bhai...bhai...kya hua???ask rey worriedly..."bhai..."

Suddenly sw open his one eye and then stand up and burst out laugh..ing..."rey...tera chehra dekh...omg...dekh dekh...mirror me dekh...yaha aa..."swayam drag rey in front of the mirror and laugh...

"very funny bhai...its not a joke..."said rey ...

"ok ok...sorry...ab tension mat le...me taani se nahi sharon se pyar karta hu???"said swayam...

"what??"said rey and start laughing...

"what what???is me ab has kyu raha hai??"ask sw.

"abhi mujhe keh rahe the ki me ladaku ladki se pyar karta hu...aur ab aap khud hi maha ladaku ladki se pyar karte hai..."said rey...

"ha to...pyar...to ho jata hai...aur i know ki hum dono ki banti nahi but i love her yar...aur tu bhi to ladaku se pyar karta hai..."said sw

"aur aap maha ladaku se..."said rey...

"achha ek baat bata agar vo log humse pyar nahi karte honge to???"said sw

"what???plz bhai aap ye purani hindi filmo ki tarah negetive mat socho..i m sure taani bhi mujhse...u know..."

"ha i know nafrat karti hai..."

"ha...what no...vo mujhse pyar karti hai.."said rey and throw a pillow at him..."sharon hate u..."

"what??no she loves me??"and swayam also throw a pillow at him...

Both were wondering what would be girls' feeling unknown to the truth that shani also love them but their love hate relation ship is so unique ...they both didnt said anything to reyam but shani know that they love reyam...

"ok ok...rey sun...ek kam karte hai...jake unko bata te hai...what say???"said sw

"what??aap pagal ho gaye hai kya bhai???taani to mera murder kar degi...vo to humesha mujhse ladai karti hai..."said rey...

"sharon bhi..."said sw...

"but rey...abhi nahi to kabhi nahi...lets do it...aakhir hum bhi mard hai...aur hum kar sakte hai..."said sw...

"yes we can do it...chaliye bhai hum propose karne jate hai..."said rey...

"propose karne jate hai..."said sw mimiking rey..."esa bol jang pe ja rahe hai...bachenge ya nahi pata nahi..."

"ha...right bhai...agar taani mujhse pyar nahi karti hogi to...nahhhiii ...bhai...esa nahi ho sakta...bol do ki ye juth hai..."

"rey rey...abhi tak esa nahi hua hai bachha...pehle jake kanya(girl) se apne dil ki baat to batao...phir ye dialoguebazi start karna..."said swayam...

"ha ha...aur aap bhi..."said rey...

"ha me bhi...ok dekh abhi mausam bahot achha hai...sahi time hai...chalte hai phir???said sw...

"ok...lets go"said rey...

Both reach near the door...

"ek minute rey..."said swayam...

"ha..."said rey...

Sw hug rey and said"kya pata me zinda wapas aaunga ya nahi...aakhri bar gale mil le bhai..."

"ha bhai..."and rey hug swayam and then both went to their girl's home ...

Rey reach at her home and peep in through her window...he enterd in tiptoed...he was walking and looking for taani...

Suddenly he look straight and he saw soneone...

"aaahhh...aaahhh...bachao...bachao..."scream rey and start running...actually he saw taani...she just came out of washroom and her face was coverd with face pack...

"bhoot...bhoot...taani...bachao..."rey was running in the hall...

Taani ran after her and said"rey...rey ruk jaiye...rey..."

"oh god...tum mera name kaise janti ho chudail...dur ho jao...jao...plz mujhe chod do..."said rey hiding behind the sofa. ...

"rey ...rey stop..."said taani ...

"are mujhe chod do...meri to abhi shadi bhi nahi hui..."said rey...

"rey me taani hu...taani..."shout taani and rey look at her...he went near her and look carefully...

"oh ya...tum to taani ho...right..."said rey and give a weak smile...

"chudaila...me chudail...hai na???"said taani angrily...

"nahi tum nahi ..me...me chudail ..me bhoot...me gadha..."said rey...

"achha...abhi batati hu..."said taani and run after him...she took a tube of facepack..."me chudail...hai na???"said taani and apply the facepack on hus face...meanwhile rain starts outside...

Swaron:

Sw was at a distance when rain start and he drenched in rain...he rang the door bell...

Sh open the door..."tum???tum yaha kya kar rahe ho???"ask sharon...

"well...u can see i m wet...so me yaha aa gaya...mera ghar thoda dur hai..."said sw

"ok...come in"said sh and sw came in.

"coffee???"ask sh

"ummm...no thanks..."said sw...

"ok..."said sh and sat on the sofa.

"so tum kaha ja rahe the??"ask sharon...

"vo me...chuha..."

"chuha...aaahhh...kaha hai????mujhe bahot dar lagta hai..."said sharon and stand up on a sofa.. .

Sw laugh and said"are wo me...me...to ye keh raha tha ki me chuhe ko marne ki davai lene gaya tha...ha...but seriously...tum ek chuhe se dar gai????hehehe..."

"oh...to ye mr. Swayam mujh pe has raha hai..."thought sh and scream "chuha...swayam tumhare piche chuha..."as sw heard her scream he ran and stand up on the sofa..."chuha...kaha hai???hey bhagwan mujhe bada dar lagta hai..."said sw and look at sharon who was laughing holding her stomach...

"sharon..."sw glare at her...

"mr.fattu swayam..."said sh and start running...sw ran after her..."ruko sharon abhi batata hu...ruko..."

Taarey:

"hehehehehe...omg rey ...see your face...see fast ..."she turn him to the mirror...

Rey look at his face and laugh...bcoz taani was laughing and he felt good when she laugh bcoz of him.

"are rey...ek minute idhar dekhiye..."said taani and rey turn.

Taani went closer to him and pull his nose..."aap ki nak bahot hi cute hai rey..."said taani and giggle...just then a thunder cracked and taani hug rey tightly hiding her face in his chest...

Meanwhile at the same time swaron were running and after hearing thunder they both stop at their place...

With taarey:

*starting music*

Rey was shocked by taani's sudden action...but he felt so happy that his lady love is in his arms...he wrap his arms around her protectivly abd put his chin on her top of head and pull her closer...taani was hugging rey...she was enjoying...first time she hug rey and that too so tightly...another thunder cracked and taani tighten her grip...

Mausam Hai Bada Qaatil

Rey start singing...

Kho Jaaye Na Kahi Aawara Dil

He broke the hug...

Mushkil Hai Badi Mushkil

Swayam start walking toward her ...

Kho Jaaye Na Kahi Aawara Dil

He sang this line looking at sharon...

Naa Kahi Sukoon Hai Na Kahi Qaraar

Rey hold both her hands and then push her and by holding her hands he pull her toward him...


Kiska Mujhko Intezaar Hain

Taani came crashing to his chest...

Mausam Hai Bada Qaatil

Sw came almost close to her...but she turn around to hide her feelings...

Kho Jaaye Na Kahi Aawara Dil

Sh start walking but sw hold her hand pull her and twirl her like couple dance...

Chaand Ki Haseen Chaandani Mein
Jhoom Loon


Rey was doing some funny steps when he notice taani's face was clean now..because of hug her face cleaned by his shirt...she was looking so beautiful...


Madbhari Khili Roshani Mein Jhoom
Loon


He pull her and clean his face with her top...taani push him and start running after him...rey ran outside of the house and enjoy the rain...

Chaand Ki Haseen Chaandani Mein
Jhoom Loon


Rey was dancing and calling taani outside but taani doesnt like rains so she stand near the door and rey was in the garden...


Madbhari Khili Roshani Mein Jhoom
Loon


He came near her and drag her with him...taani was pulling herself and rey also pull her...but rey was stronger so she fell down because of his pull...

Ishq Na Sahi Aashiqui Mein Jhoom Loon

He sat down and give his hand to her...but she stand up...now rain start pouring more heavily and taani like it...she spread her hands and twirl in joy...


Bekhudi Kahe Bekhudhi Mein Jhoom Loon

He saw her enjoying the rain and brush his palm in his hairs...

Chahat Ki Sahi Mehfil

He went in front of her...

Kho Jaaye Na
Kahi Aawara Dil


He and taani both start dancing like shahid and kareena danced in the rain in song tumse hi.

Mausam Hai Bada Qaatil

Rey was staring at her while dancing...she was enjoying alot...

Kho Jaaye Na Kahi Aawara Dil

He stop dancing and just stare at her...

Har Taraf Yahaan Bahaar Ka Sama

Sw make sh dance with him...

Dhadkanon Pe Hai Khumaar Ka Samaa

She was trying to free but sw doesnt let her to do this...

Hai Zara Zara Qaraar Ka Sama

Sharon smile looking at him and she drag her outside...sw sang this line and hold her hands.

Aayega Nahi Phir Yeh Pyar Ka Sama

He gesture her to dance with him...

Lamhon Ki Jawaan Manzil

Sw dance some funny steps...

Kho Jaaye Na Kahi Aawara Dil

Sh laugh looking at him...


Naa Kahi Sukoon Hai Na Kahi Qaraar

Sharon dance around him making him stop dancing...


Kiska Mujhko Intezaar Hain

Sw sang this line looking at her...

kiska mujhko intezar hain

Rey sang this lines looking at taani.

Mausam Hai Bada Qaatil

Reyam sang this line lost in their lady loves.

Kho Jaaye Na Kahi Aawara Dil

Both were looking at their dancing lady loves...

Rey was staring at her and taani notice this...her cheeks become creamson red...she turn to go inside but rey hold her wrist...

"jan na nahi chahti me yaha kyu aaya tha???"ask rey...but taani nod in no...

"but me batana chahta hu..."said rey and went closer to her...he put his hand around her belly and from another hand he remove the wet strands of hair from her face...

Swaron:

"aacchhuuu..."swayam sneez and sharon become worried...

"oh god sw...chalo andar chalo..."sh drag him inside...she give him a towel and make two coffees...

"have this..."said sh offering him a coffee...

"thanks...vo kya hai na...rain ko mujhse alergy hai..."said sw...

"oh...achha...what???emrain ko tumse alergy hai??"ask sh

"oh no...i mean mujhe rain se...dekha na mujhe ye zukham...aacchhuuu..."swayam sneez again...

"oh god sw...pehle khud ko dry to karo ...tum to vo bhi nahi kar sakte..."saying this she atart drying his hairs...when she done...she found him staring at her...she lost in his eyes...

Taarey:

Taani shiever with his touch and close her eyes...rey saw this and think."rey...yahi sahi moka hai...googly ball pe chhakka(sixer) mar de..."

"vo taani me tumse kehne aaya tha ki ...i...i mean...me...tumse..."

"aap mujhse..."ask taani...

"me tumse..."said rey but he didnt have courage to said further lines...

Taani turn and said"to aap mujhse ladai karne aaye ho right???

"ha..." after two seconds "what...no...me yaha ye kehne aaya hu ki me tumse..." but he cant complete...

"offo rey...said fast...kya kehna hai...

But instead of say something...he lost in her oceanblue eyes...the water of the rain was kissing her face...then her lips...he feel jealous of the rain...

Swaron:
Sh lost in his eyes...swayam now completly come to know that she love him...

"u love me right???"ask sw...

"yes..."said sharon but when she came to her sense ..."nooo...no..."said sh and stand straight...

Sw stand up..."tum mujhse pyar nahi karti...to kis se pyar karti ho???"ask sw

"chuha..."ans sh looking at a rat behind sw ...

"what tum chuhe se pyar karti ho???seriously...chuhe se????"said sw

"uf o dumbo...see behind...there is a rat..."said sh

"oh please...i m not a fool jo dusri baar tumhari baat me aa jaunga..."said sh

"no sw seriously there is a rat..."said sh

"sach me???"said sw and look ehind and there is actually a rat..."aaahhh..."swayam scream and start to run but he collide with sh and both fell on the sofa...sw on top of her...

Taarey:

Taani again notice him that he was staring at her...she quickly went from there and came with a table and a pooh teddy bear and set them in front of her...but rey didnt realise anything...she went behind him and said"u r in love right??"

"yes..."said rey...

"to aap jise dekh rahe hai aap us se pyar karte hai???"

"ha...said rey...but suddenly he came in to his sense and look here and there and found taani laughing at him..."u love winnie the pooh..."said taani...

"no way...i dont love pooh...its my fav cartoon u know...but i love...i love..."

"u love..."said taani and take a step forward..."u love...winnie the pooh..."again taani laugh...for two seconds he lost in her smile but then came back to his sense...

"no...i...i..."but rey cant...

"oh god...plz help...kaise batau taani ko...thought rey...

"u love..."taani came almost close to him ...and rey take advantage of this and pull her holding her waist and sealed her lips with his...smooching her lips and tasting the sweet taste of her lips...taani was too shocked because of this action...she cant able to move also...she stood there like a statue and rey was kissing him...when taani felt short of breath he broke the kiss..but he didnt seprate his lips from her..."i love u..."he said in his husky voice...taani felt like she got everything she want...her rey was saying that he love her...when taani didnt say anything he start to taking steps back...but taani grab his coller...pull him and kiss him pouring all her love in the kiss...soon both lost in the kiss...rey pull her from her waist and taani wrap her hands around his neck...rey was so so so happy...he nibble her lower lip and try to enter his tounge in her mouth...taani open up and his tounge is nowplaying with her...both can feel the sweet taste of rain water ...but the taste of their lips is more sweeter than the rain water...bith kiss each other passionatly...they broke the kiss when they feel short of breath...

"i love you too..."whisper taani because she is not in the state to speak properly...her breath was so heavy...

As taani said this rey hug her tightly...he took her in his arms and both twirl in the rain...

He put her down...

Swaron:

"u love a chuha...seriously sharon???"said sw...

"uf o...i love u stupid..."said sh ..

"what...phir se bolo...???"said sw...

"i love u stupid...ab plz uthoge...mujhe thand lag rahi hai..."said sh and sw stand up...he look at her...

"what.."ask sh...

"i love u too..."said sw and pull her in a tight hug..."tumhe thand lag rahi hai na???stay in my warm arms...u will feel my warm love..."and after this sharon too hug him...

Taarey:

"sachhi...u love me taani???"ask rey...

"ha baba...agar pyar nahi karti to aap ko ki..."she stop middle at the sentence...

"to tum mujhe... Kya taani???"ask rey...

"wo...me aap ko...kuch nahi...kuch nahi..."said taani looking down...

"oh gosh...u look so cute taani..."said rey and pull her in a hug..."i wonder taani...humari wedding night pe tumhara kya haal hoga??"

Taani slightly hit him on his chest "stop it rey..."said taani...

"i cant..."said rey pressing his body against her in the rain...

Both couple were hugging each other...one in the love rain and one in the love air...

~END~


I hope choti this is up to your expectation...plz batana kaisa laga...i try comedy first time in os...plz frankly batana achha ya bura...enjoy my lovely trians.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg pari i loved it so much , firstly reyaam talk was superb 😛

an taarey room scene was so funny 😆😆

and their rain scene omg kya kah too hot😳😳😳

awesome os loved it so much😃😃
Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...!!!!! so cute really awesome os..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was an amazing OS, Di...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was such a cute OS Dii !!! Oh My God the boys are really Fattu's ... And The song was also really cute ... I really liked it !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahaha akhiri baar hug karle...!!! M rolfing on this line loved it dipu di...all I can say is awww 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVELY OS...
hehehe..aahkri hug...loved reyam talk
chuha part was funny n cute
haye my taarey loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS Dips, aww Reyam is so shy to say I love u to Shani lol
I love their confession
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Cute os dipu loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...
reyam convo at d begning ws hillarious...

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