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Super duper story
Though it was quite scary and confusing at first but you made the ending perfect by making them together...Thanks alot for that

Loved the way how ghost said chep i didnot knew that they use this type of languages too 😆
And viraat maanvi angels perfect as ever

nice part finally both are together now and he success his work and save kid nice end

Preity wonderful...
Last part was bit scary...for me... 😭
But story is lovely...

awesome

preeto that was superb update. 👏 the way u portrayed everything was so beautiful nd i just loved it. So bidehi was manvi nd she had died. Finaly virat succeed in his mission to save the kid nd the end was beautifully written virat also died for manvi nd met her in heaven that's true love 😳 preeto mujhe nai pata tha k tu itni darpok hai 😆 thanks for the pm

So sweet.. Just amazing. Virman romancing in afterlife..

Hehehe.. U r so darpok.. Dar ne ka nai.. Bhoot pret nai hote..

Really awsum story...
So touching...
U r a great writer... 👏