THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 102

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

update comment on 136 :)

Originally posted by: dqno1

Itna sookha...

ek shaiyari deni chahiye thi na...

mujhe pata hai...

sauteli samjhing...

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

sookha tha

mumma *wailing on Nauri's shoulder*

Originally posted by: dqno1

Nauri ka ya tera comment without shaiyari is considered sookha...😲

Avi will rooth until she gets a Madhoya style arz...😃

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

arz kiya hai...

curd rice ke saath mujhe pasand hai aam ka achaar,

curd rice ke saath mujhe pasand hai aam ka achaar,

aur har baar mein phass jaati hoon with Avi's emotional atyaachaar!

shukriya! shukriya!

Originally posted by: dqno1

👏👏 Sending khatta neem ka achaar along with my atyaachaar...😆😆

Bohut Khoob!

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

haawww. Babaji aap dekh rahe ho na

Originally posted by: dqno1

😆😆

🤗

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

res

EDIT:

Ah finally i am here... two updates aur naya daga kholne ke baad

i know saying sorry would be meaningless... aur pata nahi tum mujhe apna maanti ho ya nahi... haq nahi jata rahi ho na 😕

Sauteli kaha hai toh nibhaungi na...😲

anyways i wont say anything because i know i am at fault...

Ch17:

it was completely fresh from Geet's side. reading a story from a character's point of view always makes me wonder what the other characters are going through and you have fulfilled that void 😃 the trip in Geet's eyes was completely different. i loved her drooling sessions as well as shying sessions 😆 and that little dance she did when she thought nobody was watching 😳

I love writing her part... jhalli comedian mixed...😆

the cherry on the cake was the ride back. what better present could there have been than sitting with the love of your life in your arms. contentment was reflected in me too when i was reading it 😃

lol i wonder what will Geet do when she learns it was indeed her knight in shining armor who sent her the notes. ek jhappi se kaam nahi chala sakti... ek pappi bhi chahiye 😉

Babaji... Maan ke sapno mein hoga ye toh. Avi ki Geet uski tarah hai. Aise kissi ko chance nahi degi, shareef hai...😉

Ch18:

oh no the cool guru Dev has become irritated and angry young man. Dev babu kyun Maan's post churaing re? 😕😆

haha he is really being fed too much sweet from Pari. lol too much sugar is poison indeed. i so could feel the choking and suffocation from Dev's side. i have met a few people who are so damn sweet yet so irritating. and the bad part is they aren't really at fault magar i see only what is wrong

taming of Dev indeed 😆

Abhi aur hoga... Dev is too cute for his own good...

aaww now that i-star's brightness has gone down, Dev has lost his way back home huh 😆 his restlessness and guilt was aptly portrayed.

Thank you haiji

loved both updates.

i was a fan of SRK up until K3G. after that i kind of sat back and didnt watch that many movies of his. i havent listened to the songs in Veer-Zara expect of main yahaan hoon wala. shall listen later. abhi work pe hoon 😆

cannot wait to read more 😳