THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1

Yaayy!!
Congratulations Angel...🤗 5th thread... 👏 ... (someone wanted to discontinue ... don't ever even consider it... ) 😊

Many more threads will be added soon... as we will get more deeply connected with the Locket ... 😳 😉

Walk in the clouds… The title itself speaks of serenity & beauty. You did justice to it in the whole update. The music selection was bang on… It reflected the whole feel & soul of the part. I must say the music that you add in each part is so apt & all of them just make it to my playlist. Khamoshiyan jo inke darmiyan thi who gungunane lagi…. Itni madhur bangayi ki ek muskhurahat ne saari tanhayee mita di…

Kabir…. Hmm new character, Very interesting! I would not want to typecast him now… and just view him as someone who has had wrongly perceived people through his own lens of insecurities. He feels grass is greener on the other side …. Just as defence mechanism to safeguard self from accepting his own complexity he faces day in & out.

Dear Diary opening innings was during this trip…😊. He is so apprehensive & unsure that he doesn't mention her name. I liked the way he started writing it, he actually spoke to it as a friend would… as that's what a personal diary is. He misses his Mom so compensates it with this diary writing speaking his heart out here. He notices minute details.. And makes it a point to be aware of her likes & dislikes under guise of accompanying the group.

Geet's order of the sandwich… spicy with crust cut out & diagonally half one, speaks a lot of her nature & traits.👏

This part made me adore Maan for various reasons. I know he behaved like a khotta by assuming stuff… but then he was blinded by his own fear of rejection, insecurity & apprehension of being misjudged as he doesn't open up much to others so whether she will understand him as his mom used to. What made me like him so much were…- his want for Geet & him to become someone in future like his parents… That shows his purity of thoughts & also depth of his feelings. Also how in spite of all that he misinterpreted & was angered yet he didn't leave her alone to face her battles, he was there for her whenever needed. 'Main tumhare saath hu.. daren ki zarrorat nahi..' he distracting her & diverting her fearful thoughts by stating facts of the place. He saving her form those drunk boys… & also promising self of never to drink just because she couldn't bear the smell… speaks a lot about this man… can I have him for me …. Clone bhi chalega…😳😳

Also loved the subtle intimacy on the cable ride & also while sightseeing … all of which perceived & experienced through high on alert senses.😉

His regret on knowing his misinterpretation of her expressions & then later fear of losing her by his deeds of misjudgement was all overshadowed & washed away by her that one shy smile… Beautiful!!

The promise of walking on the same path makes an appearance again… I liked that he has made this advice one in his conscious but then tends to forget it but then still works on it.

Continue when you can… Special thanks for updating even when it's such a hectic time for you with work, family & all of us behind you for updates… Thanks so much for such beautiful part… 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: heytal

Congrats

🥳

Kya iss trip mein hume yeh milega😳

Originally posted by: Onir

Yaayy!!
Congratulations Angel...🤗 5th thread... 👏 ... (someone wanted to discontinue ... don't ever even consider it... ) 😊

Many more threads will be added soon... as we will get more deeply connected with the Locket ... 😳 😉

Congratulations Avi! The opening of a fifth thread shows how much this story is loved! 😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ha ha...

Sorry to disappoint...