The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...Shayam Jha without him things were spiceless in ipk actually.
Sheetal will never ever disappoint us showing her wild and most STUPID ways to get things done, like really... she thought drug him and he is yours... is she that DUMB?
Arnav had designed the 'AR' logo himself, no wonder it is as dashing as him.
I am really proud of Mami here, she was so selfless when it came to their business, she didn't even think once to let go her only and most beloved possession... gold.
And there enter the most beautiful girl with dimple cheek Miss Lavanya my favorite one in ipk, and she was the one who call him ASR.
Finally he is back to india hush...the wait was really too much for all even me.
Chapter was amazing with two amazing entries LA and Shayam.
Loved it Helee.

Edited by ashw99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
He got rid of Sheetal but ran into Shyam Jha.
What do I say ! Evil k badle evil...???? waiting to know more about this Shyam.
Continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 part
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, that was a amazing and awesome update, written brilliantly.

I can't believe sheetal drugged Arnav and poor Arnav had been feeling so guilty, thinking he had used her, I'm glad Sharvan found out the truth.

Loved the encounter between Lavanya and Arnav, there first meeting was lovely. Also I totally agree with you I felt that Lavanya was a kind hearted person.

Wow loved the way the family greeted Arnav that was just superb and absolutely classic,

So Shyam has made an enter, hopefully he was a decent man at the start.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was great!!! So, Sheetal-the-with(not to say b**ch) had drugged my man???Wish her a torturous trip to hell!!!!!!The man ain't gonna love ya however much effort you thoko darling!!! Like I told the previous gall, he's for Khushi and Khushi only!!!!
I feel sorry for bechaari Lavanya tho... However she might have been to Khushi in the beginning, She changed after that... Poor her she went thru so much only for ASR's family to accept her as a Raizada bahu, and just when she succeeded, she realised that Arnav had fallen for her Chamkili... And yet, she gave up on him... She was so sweet... <3
Great update Heleeji! I'm waiting for the next with a lot of besabri!!!
Hum aapse bohot bohot bohot pyaar karte hain! 😆
Jai Devi Maiyya ki! [ROFL]
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved that drug wala twist helee...u r genius...
here comes lavanya...
what a grand welcome by family...loved it...
shyam manohar jha😡
continue soon n thnx for pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just got time to catch up on the last 3 chapters
I must say i loved them all
So Sheetal drugged and aww his friend died :(

oo i like how you added Lavanya she seems fun!
Hopefully Shyam Jha won't be a freak in your story

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful part.
Arnav is back.
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was one fantastic update, really liked the approach you took as far as Sheetal's track is concerned. Overall a super duper awesome update, loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yar...poor arnie...faced betrayal from 3 girls...

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