The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@chibisuke

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely start

continue soon

thanx for the pm

Twinkle

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Ok..!! I'm really exited to read it further...!! Ramdulari Sharma Manorana's sister...& NK's mother...Both mother & son has same type of names..she is ram ki dulari & he is nand ka pyaara...!! Is khushi also gonna be there...she is not in the CS..!! & i've also a life & death exam coming up...!!

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

If khushi is not there in the story then i'm much more exited to read it...as it will 1st story without khushi..!! that i'm going to read...!!

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@.Boss.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Very good start!

Waiting to read more!

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome prol😊
continue

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

this is a theme that hasnt been explored before !! 😳 good one dear !! 👏

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice character sketch and prologue waiting for updates thanks for pm

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

nice Character descriptions 😃

n lol don't mind abt the life and death exam and ur strange urge to write.. for some weird reason that happens ALL the time!! i guess a classic case of forbidden fruit 😆

nyway best of luck for the exams n will keep an eye out for the updates 😳