POWER OF LOVE!!! (ak)new upd pg 19!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART ONE

kripa walks down the stairs with her luggage........ she doesn't turn around for a min....when she reaches down... she comes across dadi...... kripa hugs dadi....

k: i am sorry dadi....... mein apna promise pura ahi kar paayi...... i have to go....

d: nahi beta...issmein teri koi galati nai....galat meri thi ki meine socha...mera pota sudhar gyaa hai...... par beta he really loves you.....

k: mein jaanti hu dadi..... he loves mee.....aur jitna woh muhse pyaar karta hai....usse kahi jyaada pyaar mein usse karti hu par..... usske dil mein itn nafrat ghul gayi hai ki....... uss nfrat ke saamne mera pyaar to kuch bhi nahi hai dadi..... aur.... aur(she touch her stomach...) mein nahi chahti ki mera hone wala bachha par usska saaya bhi pare...

d: beta tune hamesha se meri baat maani hai..... jindagi ka itna bada phesla ki tune sirf mujhe khush dekhne ke liye....--

k: kyunki aap hamesha sahi hai dadi.....aapne agar meri shaadi nahi karwaya hota to shayad mein kabhi nahi samajh paati ki sacha pyaar kya hota hai..... mujhe itni khushi kabhi nahi milti dadi....

d: tujhe lagta hai naa ki meri har baat sahi hoti hai...to sunle...... pyaar ka shakti bahat badi hoti hia....... its powerful than any other thing...... agar tum dono ka pyaar sacha hai to tumhaari pyaarki shakti tumhe ek doosre ke paas kheechke leaayegi beta.......

k: i hope soo dadi...... mein ab chalti hu.....

they hug once again...... and kripa leaves....... when she goes outside..... she looks one last look at the house...... she looks at the balcony and see angad standin there with tears in his eyes...... she turns around and leaves....... angad forwards his hand to stop her but she was already gone....... after a while he realizes that he just let his love go away... his wife... the only person besides dadi who actually cared for him....loved him more than anything.... tolerated everything......left the whole world just to be with him...... he ran outside the house..... it started raining...... he looked everywhere but dint find kripa anywhere....... he fell on his knees adn

a: KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!

kripa was at the airport...... she sat there remembering every moment she spent with anagd........ the way he loved her....care for her....pamper her..... and how he couldn't tolerate anything against her........ her thoughts were interrupted by the announement for her flight.......... he sat in the plane as it flew away.......

we see a split scree.... angad crying in the rain and kripa by the plane crying......

Edited by MUNNIBABA2007 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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kinda sad!!!! 😭 but sounds interesting, continue soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds really good 😊
great part 👏 👏
but it was really sad it sounds like it is the ending not the beginning
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omgg!! that was beautiful! wonder wat happend

continue soooooonnn
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART TWO

ok soo you guys might be confused....huh what is this?? kripa is leaving the house....but who is kripa???? and who is angad??? why is she leaving??? what promise did she make??? hmmmmmmm...... let me answer these questions...... well who am i???? i am someone who has a very big part in this story....but i will enter later... this whole story began a a few months ago.... welll i think somewhat like 6 months ago........

kripa knew dadi since childhood and she respected her more than her own parents....... she could never deny dadi's order..... angad..... hmmm angad was kind of werd..... his parents died when he was just 4...since then he was raised by dadi..... he had feelings for krpa...... actually he really loved kripa but he was harsh on her cuz he wanted to hide his feelings..... kripa had always hated angad because of his behaviour towards her.... only dadi knew abut angad's love..... and there was a dark truth about angad which kripa knew sooo she was scared of him......

soo lets rewind to that time....... six months earlier.....

" DADI!!!!!!!!" kripa came into the house in her skates....... and landed on the couch....she opened her skates and called out for dadi again...... finallly dadi came out......

d: kya hai kripa?????

kripa ran to her......and hugged her......

k: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO THE DEAREST DADI IN THE WHOLE WORLD......!!!!!
d: thankyou beta.....
k: ab boliye....aapko present kya chahiye?????
d: bas tumhaari khushi.....
k: meri khushi???? nahi yeh to bahat hi asan sa gift maaga aapne....kyuki mein to hamesha hi khush rehti hu..... ask for something tough......
d: uff beta...meri koi umar nahi hai apni bachhise gift maangnekka.....
k: what do you mean.???? abhi aap itni young to hai....
d: ha ha..... achha jo mein maagungi tu mujhe degi???
k: of course....aapke liye to apni jaan haajir haii yeh present kya cheez hai......( she said in a filmi way)

voice: ohh miss nautanki.....

kripa froze..... she gulped and slightly tunred around..... as she had thought it was grumpy...(thats what she calls angad)

d: angad beta....

angad came upto dadi and hug her....

a: happy birthday dadi......
d: thankyou beta.....
a: ok ab boliye aapko gift kya chahiye.....???
d: arre waah aaj mere dono bachhe mujhse gift ke liye keh rahe hai..... jo maagungi doge tum dono...???
ak: of course.....
d: thik hia to SHAADI KARLO....
ak: WHAT!!!!

kripa walks upto dadi....

k: mein iss grumpy...i mean angadse shaadi nahi karoongi......

she glanced at angad he dint say anything.....

d: par beta----
k: par war kuch nahi...... i will not marry him......
a: dadi chhodiye naa..... forget it ok..... kuch aur maanglijiye.......
d: angad beta....kab tak chhupayega tu????
k: chhupayega???kyaa????
d: yahi ke---
a: dadi plssss.....
k: yahi kee????
d: ...ke angad tujhse pyaar karta hai....

kripa felt as if the sky had fallen ....... she started laughing......

k: anagd aur mujhse pyaar????..... that'lll happen after the pigs start flying......
d(serious): nahi kripa.....woh sach much tumse pyaar karta hai.....

kripa knew when dadi is serious....she is serious..... she looks at angad who had his head down and eyes lowered...... dadi felt she had to leave them alone soo she excused herself...... angad adn kripa sat in silence...... then kripa slowly walked up to angad..... adn stood infront of him.....

k: kya yeh sach hai????
a: huh??
k: i mean dadine jo kuch bhi kaha....kya woh sach hai???
a(nodded): yes.....
k: to kaho naa......
a: kya????

she lightly hits on his head.....

k: stupid..... wohi jo log kehte hai jab pyaarka izhaar hota hai......
a: i......i...
k: i what????
a: i love you......

kripa just hugs him....... she knew she dint love him but...... she, for the first time, saw innocence in his eyes....and saw true love..... soo she couldn't help herself and hug him.........

a: tum bhi kaho naaa....
k: kyaa????
a: i love you.....
k: mein kab kaha ki mein tumse pyaar karti hu....i dont love you......
a(disappointed): ohh...
k(smiles): i love you toooo.....

angad's heart starts jumping up and down....... he hugs her more tightly.......

k(thinks): i love you too angad but i am not in love with you....... yeh dil kissi aur ka ho chhuka hai.... mujhe nahi lagta yeh tumhaara hopayega....... i will try my best to be yours.......

but she still hugs him and cries silently...... just then her cell rings...... they apart and kripa sees the caller's name....

k: ohh shit!!!! phirse late.....

she goes to the door and then turns back.....

k: bye sweety.....raatko dinner mein milenge......

kripa gets her skates and goes off......

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kripa hurries into a cafe........ she see prithvi sitting there playing with his cell....she goes to him......

k: hey buddy....sorry late hogayi.....
p: woh bhi pure adhe ghante......
k: haa woh.....actually i need to give you some nws....
p: good or bad???
k: welll..... its good news but tumhaare liye bad hoga.....
p: o....k...shooooot
k: umm meine shaadi ke liye haa kardi hai.....
p(excited): wowwwwwwww really....congratzzzzz..who's the lucky guy????
k: umm angad.....
p: WHAT!!!!! ANGAD???ANGAD KHANNA.???? THAT *****.... YOU'LL MARRY HIM????
k: prithvi chillax.....
p: how can i??? you are marrying angad khanna ....that freak and youre telling me to relax......??? huh...i cant believe you.......
k: prithvi dekho........
p: kaho....
k: look i saw innocence in his eyes....i saw a really good person inside of him..... aur woh...woh mujhse bahat pyaar karta hai.... mein usse sudhar sakti hu prithvi.... tum hi to hamesha kehte ho naa...... the power of love can do anything...... soo i want to try it........ plsss for me....for my sake..... will you accept this marriage????
p(deep breath): i guess you're right...... but first promise mee....... promise mee... that if he goes crazyy again you'll tell me....aur agar koi bhi problem ho to bhi tum mujhe bataogi.......

kripa nodded.....and they both had food toegther.....


soo you guys must be thinking who is this prithvi guy......hmmmmmmm he is kripa's best friend cum bother....... has been with kripa since they were small babies...... loves her like a sister.... hates angad...... is married to alliyah...... and stop thinking of who i am cuz i told yaa i will be entering the story later.... then you can know who i am........and trust mee noone can tell you this story better than i do.......

Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think the per son is josh or alliyah am i right or am i wrong
👏 awsome part '
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Posted: 19 years ago
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only one comment i expected atleast five of them....... 😭 i am sooo sad...... if you guys dont like it then plssss say you dont...i willl not write anymore......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome story! please do continue...and i just cant stop wondering who u r in the story 😉 😆 cont soon!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PROMO

soo ab aap logoko pata chal hi gaya ki angad aur kripa ki shaadi ki baat kaisi hui.... now exactly one month later.... on the day of wedding... let forward to that time adn see what happens...adn plsss watch out for the second day i mean the next day of the wedding....a very big thing is gonna happen.... which willl tell you what kind of person angad is...and why did i call him weird??? and why did prithvi have a problem with kripa marrying angad khanna.???

Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooooooooo

this seems so kool.l i like how u wrote it..

continue sooooonn

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