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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

de first of all sorry 4 late cmmnt

story mast hai yr eding is superb

thanx 4 pm me

love u de

u r best who write on ariya

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beatrice_89

@beatrice_89

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

great update beautiful climax. confession was really well written.

thanks for pm

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Awesome update..
😊

wow di , itna lamba tha ye.. 😃
so arjun n riya both don't want to go to the party 😲

but sam n siya make them go..

Then riya n arjun , jealous..
Great..

Tht guy n tht girl..
Arjun punch pe punch maar raha tha..

bt sam want to stop him..
Why.. 😲

he he he he
phir pata chala ye sab planed tha..
Sam n siya ka..

Sam proposed her wow.. 😳

then ariya ..
Great..
Kya propose kiya arjun ne..
Wow..

N riya she was so desperiate fr the kiss...
😳 😳

lovely ending..

Thanks for pm..
👏 👏

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

awww that was such a sweet and cute ending...!!!

lol kya plan bnaya sam aur sia ne...!!! issi bahane ariya mile to sai...!!!😉

sam sia ka proposal was very sweet...!!

and ariya kiss was hot... love the way riya described the kiss...! she so badly wanted to get kissed by arjun😆

loved it...!!!!

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

ThanKs for the lvly comments frs...
n reading this story...
pv frs n reader...
piya

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

di don't remember comment kiya ya nhi... 😕
agar nhi kiya toh yeh raha... 😉
love awesome update. ...
ariya n Sam siya gr8. ...
love that pool scene. ...
their last kiss omg such a funny arjun didn't kiss her back 😆
riya is making him to kiss her...lol 😆
for u di...
👏 👏 👏
awesome awesome great
last but not least gr8 work