OMG!!!!!
dat was fabulous!!!
how come u converted 'watever dat supposed to be romantic' to 'bloody dangerous'????
karan,,, he's so dead!! as he said ''she is already mine with her soul and body'' in the last update, he said 'body' in a low tone right, so dat was it, dat monkey has lied... but dat has lead to mannu's dis state..
the beginninig, sanjay giving karan a shot was splendid!!
next, manvi & her attitude, wen virat came to her & insisted her to come, she is completely aware of his rage, anger & red eyes filled with horror,, but this girl, knowing all this running inside him is just sipping her juice as a gesture??? from how on earth did u design such a character??? was so rocking!!
and again, wen he wanted to deal with her, she was so innocent & confessed him dat she wont annoy him any more?? wow!! she's really an innocent angel!!
now one thing for sure Karan is out of her life!!
I'll call u more than brilliant for coming out with something like this.. i think this is enough for manvi to get rid of karan, to hate him forever.. now i dont know if this is correct, but if this is wat u are planning den its my duty to 'salute' u.. u showed him as character who didnt want to leave her wen she's married, u showed us his love for her is true,,, so getting rid of such a person from manvi is a tough task, but the very way u mentioned, i must say its a damn clever move & u nailed it!!!
AND if this isnt wat u are planning, forget watever i told above :p
virat here, his only intension is to wipe away some one else's touch on her?? wow!! he's really a monster lol..
how can he be so possessive, rude, angry & at the same time hot??
mahn he's awesome!!
manvi is really a brave girl,, the way she is fighting against him, she doesnt loose her self (ofcoz how can she, the atmosphere is so dark for her) she fights though she knows she's dealing vt a man like virat.. awesome!! wen she got the shock of her life, wen she came to know dat he's doing all these becoz of karan's cheap words, her state was so originally described, i cud see the horror in her face
and dats it, wen she told ''I am untouched!!!!!!'' dat was the moment, that was the peak of the update.. just a sentence, it created guilt, shock, anger, frustration & a murderous state in virat.. wow!!!
all i can tell is, next update is gonna rock MORE
(sometimes karan is dead in his hads if u did so, den i'll consider it as u fulfilled my wish :p owkaii he wont go to dat extent..)
basically a rocking, firepact update giving high hopes for the following..
get going!!