ArShi FF: Thread 1 My Existence (Ch.11 Pg 49)

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

loved it a truly beautiful story...very impressed with your writing style...keep it up

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soophie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Hey accidently found this ff n loved it

Its beautifully written..their all emotions pain happiness...their friendship,love,betrayl ...everything looks so real
Continue soon
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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: rockprincess123

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You know what, internet sucks! When you update things twice and it STILL does not even try to show up, a girl gets real mad!!!

Real sorry dear, even dear Amina had asked and I did just that but internet doesn't seem to be my friend anymore 😡

Ergh, I am going to try one more time and if it still doesn't work, then I am going to find a wall... draw a sign that says "bang head here"... and then you guys are gonna cover your ears real hard!!

~~~~~~ << TRYINGG...

Yayyy, it worked! My head is saved! :)) xxx
<div>About time too, that sucked!

Thanks alot for doing this yar...
Love you ❤️ alot for this...
I'm glad that your head is saved... 😃

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ASRphanki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

M glad i found dis ff..
Lovd the potrayal of u r story...
Do pm nxt whenever u update..

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Mahnoor this is such an awesome piece have read till part 4 and it didnt seem like its your first attempt. You are so good at this Noor u really are! The pain I felt for Khushi when she was at her father's grave and everything,the sisters bond and Khushi and Arnav's bond. Arnav wasnt in position to deny his parents plus yes he was so excited to go to abroad as it was natural at his age but his feelings for his friends were present even at that time. loved the way Arnav vowed that he will make Khushi Kumari Gupta Khushi Singh Raizada... now we have to see how will he do it as he will have to face the hurdle of his father in achieving his aim. looking fwd to read more and yes will comment after some time on chapter 5 and 6 *Hugs* keep the good work going Noor loved it👏

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Awesome story n read all chapters in one go n loved it..eagerly waiting for next update..please pm me..

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Atyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

I have been stalking this FF since it began & have been a silent reader since then, waiting for the story to unfold a bit. Now that it has; I must say, you have done a brilliant job presenting the story so well, seeing as this is your first. Absolutely marvelous. 👏

The story line is very gripping as well. Will be looking forward to your next updates & wish you the best!

Coming to the story, I wish to know does Kamini & Yudhistir feel any guilt for being the cause of Shashi's death? Will be very much looking forward to the time when everyone will come to know the circumstances under which Shashi Gupta died & the impact it will create in everyone's relationship.

Till then, will wait.

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Loved your FF! :)

The story is quite gripping!

would love to be a part of this journey! :)

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ziya-farhannish

@ziya-farhannish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

that was two awesome updates and did you give him an entry or what?👍🏼

i absolutely love seeing so many sisters since i myself belong to a complete brothers group! i can almost hear the screams and giggles in the house!

well.. however handsome or loving daughters type this yudhu may or may not be, the only memory of him in my mind is shashis pleading to him.. and i dont like him one bit!

phew..that could almost be my longest comment on an IF post other than my updates! 😉😆 i wonder how you people do it!

update soon!😊

Edited by ziya-farhannish - 12 years ago