ArShi FF: Thread 1 My Existence (Ch.11 Pg 49) - Page 33

Oh, this one was spooky. Your writing never fails to stir those right emotions.

Okay.. What was this? So spooky and gooseflesh rising! I knew this couldn't be Khushi. Someone was having a really rough nightmare. So, it's Kamini.. Kya description hai yaar! I recall I've used the same lines over and over again in your FF failing to capture the emotions felt in words.

Now, after all these years, the conscious that she was trying to keep at bay, trying to suppress its voice and duck it whenever it tried to raise its head to make her repent her actions for betraying a brother, his love and affections. She knew she was on the wrong yet she managed to quiten the guilt that she knew would awaken in the aftermath of her scruples dominating if she let it. That's why she ran. Ran from it. Has been running till now but at last has been caught by and forced to face what she did. And tried to leave behind. And the both ran. She ahead and the wee small voice following close. The result of the chase however is different this time. She's tired and weak. She can't do it anymore and slows down. And the superego is strengthened by her falling weak, it's determination now more firm than ever to redeem her of her actions. To make her realise and repent maybe? But for that it has to catch her and caught her, it did. At last. No more running.

Shashi's last moments in her arms and then the burning sensations felt beneath and within her should give her a good understanding of how she would have to pay. Brilliant work on this update, Noor! You do it each time and surpass your set records and well.. I'm proud of you. Really! 👏

Now I think it's time for Khushi to make an entry in her life. Via Arnav, of course. She'd face those demons again. And we'll get to see if the nightmare she had made a positive effect on her or not. If she tries to make amends, good for her. If no, she doesn't know her son is strong willed and would make Khushi his even if it's not liked in the family, I don't know why, I'm hoping for this. So let's see who's the easier one to forget. Yudhishtir or Kamini? To let Khushi in their lives and their son's. Who'd be stubborn and be a hindrance for the same? Jaanne k liye dekhte rahiye, 'My Existence' ke following updates! 😆

loved it

thanks for the pm