Ariya SS: Eternal Love -Tere Ishq Mein(P-50/U-4)

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Hello All Ariyians Pankha!🤗


yaar full forum me itni Ariya story hai ki 😆
kuch samjh hi ni aa raha tha ki kya likhe?
but kuch frds ki demand pe 1 OS likh rahi hu😳
hope u like it.😃
bakhs dene ry baba! if i hv any mistake in this.😳


start karte hai Ariya ki show me jaise bonding thi
same ab tak vahi hai isme bhi but ab thoda usse aage ki story...

everyone busy is in etf office :
Rathore: agar tum logo ka kaam ho gaya ho to ja sakte hoo!
shree: Sir, thoda panding work hai, usye karke chale jayege...
rathore: ok! mujhe 2-3 din ke liye Delhi jana hai kisi urgent work se soo tab tak tumhe Ravte lead karega, ok!
shree n chotu in shocked ...lol😆
chotu to shree: kya yaar! rathore sir ki jagah kabhi Arjun sir ni ja sakte kya Delhi meeting me?😆
shree: chotu ka dimag chota hi rahega , chief kayon hai? to obviously rathore sir hi vahi jayege na, vasie bhi agar vaha kisi ne kuch aisa-vaisa bol diya aur arjun sir ko gussa aa gaya to... home minister ke sath-sath kayon kaha gayab hoga , pata bhi ni chalega! aur phir rathore sir kya javab denge apne uper valo ko?😆 😆
ab ye baat tum samjhye ye samjhun!! 😉 😎
Chotu: samjh gaya ...u r r8 ! maine Salmaan ki Garv movie dekhi thi, hilla! arjun sir ne bi vaise hi dhamaka kiya to vaha! 😆 Aai sapath!! etf ka kya hoga phir ? jane de ry baba!🤣
next morning:
Arj to all: let's go to the disco !😉
riya to Chotu and shree: Disco!! aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai? , ye arjun sir ko disko ki lat kab se lag gai? 😉 😆
chotu: jab se tumhe dekha hoga...lol😉
riya: shut up chotu!
Arj: agar tum logo ki gup-chup bate khatam ho gai ho to chale!😡
shree: sir , koi party hai kya vaha?😕 😆
Arjun glared at shree: ha ! rathore ke jane ki khusi me hai, chalna hai..
wt d ? ye etf office hai, koi fish market nahi, samjhye ya samjhun!!
riya: chale guys ...party me!😆
chotu: yaar ! ye insaan kabhi sudhar nahi sakta...🤣
(in disco) arj to all: mujhe information mili hai ki sik ka 1 khas banda yaha aaya hua hai, hume usse dundna hai, aaj vo kisi bhi halat me bachna nahi chahiye! be careful ...ok! (here is a song playing )

teri ankhiyo ka war jaise sher ka shikar
tera husn dhuedar jaise jalta sigar
teri ankhiyo ka war jaise sher ka shikar
tera husn dhuedar jaise jalta sigar
tere pyar ka nasha kabhi aar kabhi par😉


tu jo na ho mere ru baru
bin tere jine se mai daru
hai yahi tamannna meri
bas tere liye jiu maru
tera hua jo didar baje dil me sitar😉
tera husn dhuedar jaise jalta sigar
tere pyar ka nasha kabhi aar kabhi par
tera pyar pyar pyar hukka bar

jage hum yuhi rat bhar
hai hawaao me aawaragi
ye kasis ye diwangi
hai tujhi se meri trishngi😃
hai junun sawar mai to bhula sansar
tera husn dhuedar jaise jalta sigar
tere pyar ka nasha kabhi aar kabhi par
tera pyar pyar pyar hukka bar😉
(arjun looks at her and in deep thought)

riya ne informal dress pahni hui hai suddenly 1 boy ki najar riya par padti hai aur usye dekh kar vo dirty commt karta hai: kya cheez cut piece !
Arj vo sun leta hai aur us ladke ko sabak sikhata hai aur kahta hai ye cheez meri hai , samjhye ya samjhun!!😡
aur riya se kahta hai ki wt d hell !! ye kya pahna hua hai tumne ? itni bi akal nahi hai ki ladkiyo ko kis type ke kapde pahanne chahiye?😲 😡
riya: sir , aap hi ni to kaha tha ki hum disco me ja rahe hai aur usse shuq nahi hona chahiye!😆
arj: ha maine kaha tha , but uska matlab ye nahi tha ki tum kuch bhi pahanogi..huh!
riya: ye to apna-apna dekhne ka najariya hai sir, isme meri kya galti hai? kuch logo ki najar me hi khot hota hai!😊
meri is dress se aap par koi effect pada!( arj glared at her)... nahi na!! that's it. 😃 😆
Ariya ki sare movement par humare 2 detective Shreetu ki humehsa badi-2 najare hoti hai...lol
chotu: hilla!! shree...ye bomb aur patakha get to gether kitne acche lagte hai ry! pata nahi arj sir ko riya jaisi ladki ko dekhkar bhi kuch kayon nahi hota?😆 😲 😕
shree: kayon sa kuch? 😆
chotu: kuch-kuch vala kuch! i mean kuch-kuch vala love🤣
shree: Oh! mujhe laga ishq vala love!🤣 kayoki vo arjun hai mere bhai! SRK nahi jo har vakat romantic station pakade rahe! aur vaise bhi arjun sir romantic mood me kaise lagege? 😆 rahne de tu zayada mat soch, u know ye tera kaam nahi hai na!
chotu; kayon sa?
shree: sochne ka!...lol 😆 😆
and etf us criminal ko pakad leti hain aur investigation ke liye interrogation room le jati hai after then riya ko call aata hai aur vo thodi nervous ho jati hai , arjun ko ghar jane ke liye kahti hai, arjun notice karta hai ki riya tensed hain.😃
arjun to riya: mai tumhe ghar chod du!
nahi main chali jaugi, its ok and thanks!😊
riya in her home: maine kaha tha na ki tum mujhse dur raho, phir baar-baar kayon chale aate ho meri zindgi me!😡
tumhari vajah se pahle hi sab barbaad ho chuka hai...aur ab kahne-sunne ko raha hi kya hai humare beech...bahut ho gaya ...tumhari vajah se maine apne parents ko kho diya 😭, maine apni life orphan me gujari, sirf tumhari vajah se! 😡 😡issye pahle mai kuch ulta-seedha karu...niklo yaha se!! get lost!!!!!!!!😡 😡 😡
that man: lakin mai tumse bahut pyar karta hu, aur tumne mere mana karne ke baad bhi police force join ki, why?😕
riya: bcz nafrat hai mujhe tum jaise logo se, mai abhi arjun ko call karti hu!
arjun: riya hadbadi me apna phone bhul jati hai jab vo fresh hokar office ke washroom se nikalti hai soo vahi vapis karne aaya hai ...

riya: main abhi bhi kah rahi hu khud ho kannon ke havle kar do! sayad tum zinda to rahoge varna arjun ke hath lag gaye to vo tumhe chodege nahi!!!!!
that man: arjun...arjun...arjun! aur kuch dikhai nahi deta tumhe!😡 😲
arjun us aadmi ko vaha se nikalte hue dekh leta hain!
riya: arjun sir...😲
arj to riya in angrr: kya hua riya shocked laga mujhe dekhkar!😡
riya: no! no sir but aap is time yaha!
arj: tum apna mob bhul gai thi riya, btw tumhare kisi khas insaan ka phone aaya tha but mujhe vo voice inti jani-pahchani kayon lag rahi thi, mere baat karte hi phone cut kar diya! aur tum kafi pareshaan lag rahi ho! kisi ko maine yaha se... i mean itni raat ko jate hue bhi dekha..jaan sakta hu kayon tha vo?😕 😲
riya: vo...vo ...vo sir koi nahi tha , aapko koi galatfahmi hui hogi

arj: mujhe koi galatfahmi nahi hui hai riya, maine tumhe kya samjha aur tum! same on u!! aaj tumse is phone ke sath apne dil ki baat batane bhi aaya tha but accha hua ki pahle hi tumhari asliyat mere samne aa gai...maine tum par itna barosa kiya aur tumne chi...😡 😡 😡
riya: aap mujhe galat samjh rahe hai sir, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jo aap samjh rahe hai
arj: to samjhao! ki kya rista hai tumhara uske sath...bolo riya , mai janna chahta hu ki aakhir sik ke sath kya rista hai tumhara (arj is out of control in full angrr)
riya: mera kisi ke sath koi rista nahi hai sir, jiske sath tha vo khatam ho chuka hai😭
arj: matlab tumne mujhe, rathore aur shreetu ko aajtak dhoke me rakha...haa
riya: no sir, maine kisi ko koi dhoka nahi diya hai
arj: to phir batati kayon nahi, kya lagta hai vo tumhara...just a min! kahi tum uske liye kaam to nahi karti 😲 😕


precap:- arj is in full angrr
riya ko push karta hai aur riya ko chot lag jati hai



sorry guys m very lazy in writing 😳
sooo aaj ke liye itna hi
baki baad me if u lyk it😊
nahi to scrap me daal dena! ok😳







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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start piya 😆 loved it
rathore going to delhi for some urgent work
choree's conversation in the beginning was funny 😆
arjun took them to disco 😆
love the way arjun samjhaofied that guy and said yeh meri hai 😆😳
kuch kuch wala love 🤣 choree's conversation was hilarious in disco 🤣
omg sikander is riya's brother 😲 very interesting but only you can make him riya's brother 😆
riya lost her parents because of sikander 😭 and glad she hates him
oh no arjun is misunderstanding riya :(
thanks for the pm
please continue soon

P.S. : sikander is your husband toh that means you are riya's bhabi 🤣😆


Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES/UNRES

wow!!nyc one...precap all the more interesting...update soon :)
Edited by --ARIA-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sik is bro of Riya
Whttt
Kya os likha it is tooo gud dr
Shree/chot ' convo awesome
Update soon
Awesome,wonderful work dr
Thanx4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part
wow sik is ria's bhai
cont soon plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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kuch kuch wala love 🤣 hahah that was a good one 😃
and shoot Sikander Riya ka bhai 😲
quite interesting 😛 do continue soon please 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
nice start
waiting for next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haye piya
good good
kaha tha na ariya try karna chahiye...lol

dekho kitne like milte hain ab okay😉
loved it yaar
its hillarious.
Shreetu lol..
Kuch kuch wala love..ha ha
very funny.
And that man sik😲😡
riya ka bro
*shocked*
arjun riya ki baat kabhi nahi sunta yaar..
Pics added awesome..muha love u.

And update ur ss soon .
Waiting fr tht.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


Haye piya
good good
kaha tha na ariya try karna chahiye...lol

dekho kitne like milte hain ab okay😉
loved it yaar
its hillarious.
Shreetu lol..
Kuch kuch wala love..ha ha
very funny.
And that man sik😲😡
riya ka bro
*shocked*
arjun riya ki baat kabhi nahi sunta yaar..
Pics added awesome..muha love u.

And update ur ss soon .
Waiting fr tht.


ha maine 3no pairing try kar li
hehheheh
unme 25 se jyada like ni aaye
commt aa jate hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update di.
You are such an good writer.
Please make as an ss.
Omg sik is riya brother.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
Ariya rocks.

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