MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 6

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

The feel of losing her made him realize how much important she is to him
He realized his love

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ritvi_mg

@ritvi_mg

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

amazing part

so bullet kisi ko nhi lagi bas geet ko thodi si jayada chot lagi hai aur maa ka hand hurt hua hai...nd so our maan is in love with geet nd he accept it ...

thanks for the pm

update soon

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598253

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Posted: 10 years ago

add me to ur pm list

superb work dear

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Geet saved him...

he is in love with her...

waiting for the moment when they will come to know that their family is planning to marry them with each other only...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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ritvi_mg

@ritvi_mg

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

waiting dear

when 'll u update

update soon

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

Senior Member

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

PART 11

Geet was un-conscious coz of seductives given 2 her.
Maan was very happy dat his geet is all fine & is back to him.
Maan entered opd were geet was sleeping.he took her hand in his hand.
Maan:geet u no..I was so scared wen u were bleeding & wo wo...tum behoo...behoosh ho gayi thi...uff...but nw I m very happy u r fine & u r with me...geet 1ce u get u sense back I will tell u every thng what I feel for u...u r mine & I will surely make u mine...
Bt for dat I hv 2 be sure dat evn u feel sumthng for me...hmmm...galz were never question for me...bt geet u r a huge question for me...

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa
Kyunki tum hi hoAb tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum ho...

(Guyz play dis in back ground & read the coming post plze...)

Maan cared geet a lot...what she eatz...what she wants.
Maan use to feed geet as her hand had fracture...& she was lefty...
Geet:maan see na itz so fun na I don't hv to do any thing everthng u r doing...
Maan:hmmm...yup
Geet :hv u notice dat we both hv got fracture on same hand cool na...
Maan:aacha mujhe tua pata hi nahi tha...
Maan gave her a teasing smile...
Geet:maan...I hate u...
Maan:like I love u...
Geet blushed & finished her soup...showing tough to maan...

Tera mera rishta hai kaisaI

k pal door gawara nahi

Tere liye har roz hai jeete

Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina

Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi hoZindagi

ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui

ab tum hi hoTumhi ho...

tumhi ho...

Geet was reading a book...
Maan :geet u will get discharge tomorrow so all set r8...
Geet:set...ammm...nt really. ...wo packing tua ki hi nahi...
Maan:ok tell me what all to pack?
Geet:hmmm...ismey puchna kya hai sub pavk karna hai...wo dekho door key pichey merey tops hai fir washroom mey meri kurtiz hai aur ha merey chapals hai bed ke niche...dekh kya rahey ho jaldi kaam karo...
Maan: yes madam...
maan though arey yaar ye tua shaadi se pheley hi etne kaam kararahi hai pata nahi mera shaadi ke baad kya haal hoga...
Aabhi chal maan betey kaam karne laag ja...
While picking geetz clothes maan found geet lingerie...he taught to take chance..
Maan:geet what about dem...mey kaam karta ho inhe mey wash kiliye daal deta hu...hai na
Geet turns red she dem...
Geet:maa...maan nahi wo wo...tum uff hath math lagao...mene tumko sirf cloths uthane kaha tha...
Maan:par geet lingerie r also cloths na???
Geet: uff...nahi...tum jao...baad mey aana... jao...
Geet push him out of the room...
Geet smiles. ..
Maan again comes inside
Maan:wasey geet I don't hv any prob in helping u haan...
Geet:maan go...
Maan:ohkkn baba going...bt think abut it ok...

Tere liye hi jiya main

Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala

Saare ghamon ko dil se nikal

Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda

Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi hoZindagi ab tum hi ho..

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui aab tum hi ho...

Next day geet getz discharge & both goes to maanz house...as geet still had small cramp in her leg maan supported her by waist so she can walk properly.
Geet was very much comfortable with maan...
Geet use to talk to him & evn maan use to smile & no dusht danavgiri was der...
Geet talked to her mom & told datz she will need some time to think about marriage & she will stay in N.Y. for a month as she don't want to return early. ..
On whch her mom tried to explain her but geet is geet so her mom also left...
On other hand maan also did the samethng.
It been a week since dey are in N.Y
Geet & maan use to cook together & evn shop together...
Geet use to cook maanz favorite food maan.
She use to do all hubby wifey work...

Edited by nimi216 - 10 years ago

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

Senior Member

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Part 12 coming in few hrz...

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

wow awesome part

maan taking care of geet

in every way

n geet maan se kaam karwaeing hehhehe

not bad future mrs.msk

then maan teasing her

n both behaving life hubby n wifey :)

waiting for next

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

Senior Member

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

PART 12

Geet & maan where sitting on sofa watching some tv show.maan with laptop doing some work.

Geet:maan I m so bore kya karu...

Maan:geet yesterday I told u to final models u did dat?

Geet:yes...

Maan:hmmm...wen is d shoot?

Geet:coming Friday...maan I hv done all the work still u sadu u r d same...ufff pata nahi tumara kya hoga...

Maan:mera shodo tumara kya hoga jaada fikar karo...wasey mama ko call karo...frndz hai call dem...

Geet:hmmm...nahi ok we will go out...

Maan:no geet not today I hv some work to finish & it will take time...& it is vry imp..

Geet:dusht danav...mey jarahi hu...

Maan:hmmm...

GEet:hmmm...sirf hmmm...bye mey sach mey ja rahi hu...

Maan:hhmmm...

Geet:kati...bye...

She angrily goes up stairs.

Maan look at geet while going...

Sorry geet but what I m planning tonight is more imp & for dat u should b away from me...

He close his laptop & goes to room...

Geet was so bore that she slept reading some book. ..

Geet got up aftr some time...she lazily rub her eyes & went for bath.

She came out & suddenly her eye went on the table der was a gift with a note on it.

She start reading d note.

Dear sweetie pie...nahi sweetie jwala...( jwala mean volcano (

Hmmm...must b think na gift kyu...don't worry more to come for now open the gift.

Geet open the gift in hurry.

Geet:wwooowww...

There ws a beautiful white dress inside the box...

She quickly opened it & went near mirror to check out...

Geet:hmmm...nice choice...

She again went to keep d dress in box der ws a note...

Ms jwala plze wear dis & fast come down...babes more to come don't waste time...

Geet got excited & fast dressed up & did little make up...came down...

She came down bt der no 1 was der.. she came outside. ..

Der car ws waiting for her..

Driver:madam sir hv asked me to pick u.

Geet node & sat inside the car...

Aftr an an hr or so the car stopped geet came outside. ..

She saw around der were mountains all around & just a small house in front of her.she ran towards the house...

As she was moving her eyes went on a tent type thng...

She went near it it ws beautifully decorated with balloon & curtains.

Geet went inside...

Maan:geet hmmm...I must tell u u r looking fabulous. ...hmm lke super duper hotty.

Geet couldn't find were is maan she was looking here & der...

Maan:hmmm...koi fayda nahi geet...u won't c me...

Geet made a angry face & turned...

Maan:arey geet hmmm...wasey u look hot in such faces also...

Geet blushed...& turned

Geet:maan aap kahapar ho???

Maan:tumare pichey. ..

Geet turned & saw maan ws standing der spreading his hands...

Geet ran towards him...

Geet hugged maan...she was vry happy. ..

Maan was also happy.he cupped her face...geet I want to tell u some thing actually confess sumthng...

Geet node...

Maan:wo wo...geet I m nt gud with words bt I just want to tell u that ammm...I hv started liking u...infact loving u...

I want u to be with me everyday, every minute, evry second. ...

I want to hug u, kiss u, love u...I can't stay without u...

U no nw a days I also love ur nautankizzz...hahaha...

Geet made a angry face but den smiled...& hit maanz chest.

Maan:ouch...hmm wait...

Maan bend down on his knee he took geetz hand in his hand...

Maan:geet aaj se infact aab se kya tum tayar ho merey jasey sadu, dusht danav, ravan & kya...

Geet:boring...

Maan:haan boring ladke se pyaar karne ko...kya aapni saari life merey saat nibhaogi...

WILL U MARRY ME?????

(Guyz I m nt dat gud with hindi so ignore d mistakes)

Precap:think...wht will geet say...

Edited by nimi216 - 10 years ago

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

Senior Member

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Guyz next update only if I get some comment & likes. ...

As a writer I expect few...plze plze give me & take another update. ..😉

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