MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice!what a twist in d tale!n u r such a cliff-hanger dear! :)
I hope Maaneet r safe and sound...
Update nxt part soon! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
thnk u very much next part will b by tody or tomorrow
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read both parts
NIce going
BOth are falling for each other
I think geet is sbot
geetsmile thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome
loved it ur 1st attempt is awesome
maan n geet family wants both to be married
n here maan n geet too like each other
but maan's anger kabhi khatam nahi hogi
now both moving to NY
waiting for next n plzz pm me also
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome both are childish
get wear maan's tshirt n want in water
n then brought half of malll
n somebody wants to kill maan
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting dear
when 'll u update????????
nimi216 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ritvi I m nt well 4m last 2-3 days...so couldn't update will try my best 2 update as soon as possible. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 10

The bullet fires...
Geet:maaannn...
Geet pushed maan aside & falls down...
Geet: mm...maa...maan...
The bullet hits the elevator & glass pieces spread out...
Geets forehead hits the pole beside the life...& the forehead starts bleeding heavily...some glass piece were poked on her hand & skin & also on her forehead...
Here maan was pushed & to handle himself he put all his balance on his left hand...which got hurt internally...
Maan:aaahhh...
Maan got up balancing himself...
Maan: geet...oh no...
Maan:aah...
Rahul comes over der...
Rahul:sir...r u ok...sir
Maan:geet geet..
He gets up & ran towards geet he slide down he pick geet..
Maan:geet geet get up...geet geet...
Rahul: sir we should rush to hospital..
Maan: yes u r r8...chalo...
While picking geet up maan again fell pain in his arms...
Maan:aah...
Rahul: sir I think I should. ...
B4 he completes maan showed his hand 2 stop him over der...
Maan picks geet in his arms & carries her towards car..
Maan:geet plze utho...geet utho...
            Driver drive fast...
            Break the signals run run the car fast...
Driver: yes sir...

They reach hospital.
Maan:doctor. ..doctor. ..
Doctor come over there..
Doctor: take her to OT fast...she is bleeding a lot...
Maan:doctor plze save my geet. ..plze save her...
Doctor:we will try don't worry we will try r best...
            Nurse take him 2 OPD evn he hv got hurt...
Nurse:yes doctor. ..
Maan was been bandaged & he had to platter his left hand as it had a minor crack. ..
Maan couldn't sit at a place...he was so much worried for geet...he was feeling worst after evry pasting second...
Nurse came to maan.
Nurse:sir u hv to fill up dis form & sign it as patient would undergo a small operation. ..
Maan:yes give me...
Maan fill the form & give it to nurse. ...
Nurse looks at him...
Nurse:sir u r her husband...
Maan to avoid more confusion he just nodes...
she smile & goes inside. ...
Here maan was so confused he just sat on the bench & was thinking...
Maan prologue
Y I m worried 4 geet...y I can't sit at a place & relax...
B4 dis also I had seen so manu accidents & evn daadi hd a heart attack bt I was nt dis much worried den y today...
I no geet just 4m last 2-3 dys & I fell as if I no her since long time..y...y is it so???
Y can't I just inform her parents & go home & do my work...
Y...y I wrote on form that I m her husband or she is my wife...y I m so panicked. .
Maan wht is it...y r u so confused????
He saw his image in front of himself...
(GUYS her image is maan opinion speaking person & maan is same as b4)
MAAN:u...who r u?
Image: I m maan...maan Singh khurana...
Maan: wht nonsense...I m maan singh khurana.
Image: yes bt I speak ur heart & u speak ur brain
Maan:so...wht is my heart saying??
Image:hahahaha...oh maan...u r so confused...
            Maan maan maan...it is so simple if u r falling 4 sum girl den it means u like her or I can say u LOVE her...
Maan:no howz dat possible I just no her
Since 2 days u r saying I love her...datz nt possible...
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Image: hmmm...so some 1 is nt going to accept I think...
His attention went when the doc came out of OT...he ran over der...
Maan: doctor howz geet is she f9?
Doctor:relax Mr. Khurana ur wife is f9 we had 2 do a small operation as she was a hemophilia patients u should take her lot of care & see to it that she eats a lot & gain more platelet. ..as der was lot of blood loss...& u cn take her home tomorrow morning...we hv to check 1ce that he bleeding is stopped. ...
Maan:thank you doctor...thank u so much can I see her...
Doctor: we will shift her to OPD den u can see her...
Maan:thank u doctor thank u so much...
Maan was so much happy...he was feeling 2 jump...& dance...
He feel a hand on his back...he turns...
Image: maan now u r in love...hahhaha...
The image disappeared...
Maan:yes I m in love...
Precap: @mmm...thinking...

Guys I won't b able to update between 16th - 25th of may...so plze excuses me 4 dat...sorry. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow its gr8 part
loved it dear
soo maan realise that he loves geet
n now he will take care of her
me waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 9 and 10

both parts were awesome

maan loves geet

who is the shooter