A 12 STEP JOURNEY TO LOVE[UPDATED 10TH MAY 14 ON PG 47]

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A TWELVE STEP JOURNEY TO

LOVE
Hey guys u have supported me and loved me so much for Eternal Lovestory and Rubaru. Because of my schedules sometimes u all have to wait so long for the updates but still u all never thought of withdrawing the love and affection from my story so thank u again. Now before wasting anytime I will tell u why I m here so guys hold ur breath I m here with a new concept on taarey.
kya Taani aur Rey ekk sath one year spend kar payen gaye ?
aur agar kiya bhi to kya honge wo apne pyar se rubaru ?
yeh 12 months kya twist layenge inki life mein ?
this is the most special one gifted to me by nits aka NITS_VIRATHOLIC
awesome na !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Character sketch:

Taani Shekhawat:

A 24 year old only Daughter of a millionaire. Is best at whatever she does but the only problem is she doesn't do anything ????? Completed her college and does not aspire anything on the professional front because of onething she strongly believes in

" Dad itna earn kiya to spend karne wala koi to chahiye na !!!!!! "

Her day starts after 12 midnight and ends at 11 in the morning.

Always surrounded by guys who wish to do any thing for that million dollar smile.

Extra ordinary dancer and creates a style statement everyday . Partying with all is the mantra for her life so she present at all the page 3 parties and is often clicked with celebrities. Drunk and filled with thrill and excitement always. Strives to be different from the world at all stages.

A genuine person at heart goes to the temple every Monday and also goes to help the poor in a orphanage hiding from the entire world so that dazzling image is not at stake. Nobody knows about it except her best friend Sharon Rai Prakash who is again a dazzler by heart and lifestyle.

When these two beauties walk on the street then even the dust particles pause in the air and not fall on their shimmering skin and destroy its softness or beauty.

Luxurious cars and diamonds are her weakness. Love is undefined for her as she just believes in

"Pyar kar ke apni aur dusre ki zindagi kyun barbad karna "

Cant live without her friends who are a gang of 10 people who are highly privileged to be born with a golden rather platinum spoon but its not the same case when it comes to her family.

She talks to her dad only when she needs money to clear her shopping bills of Rs.25 lakh in a month.

They both don't agree to each others way of living so prefer to maintain a distance.

Reyansh Sinaghania: Is at the top of the list of the youngest people shocking the world with their Bussiness Stratergies. He is just 25 years of age but still his multinational company occupies the first slot in the best companies of the world. Never got subjected to fun and excitement as after his father's death he was left with all the responsibilities of his mother and younger brother Swayam Shingania.

Is a man of his words and commitments. His day starts with a black suit for a board meeting and ends too on the same note. Love is strictly a no so he does not pay an attention the girls falling for him with every step that he takes on the planet earth.

He is handsome hunk but never pampers himself to gain the extra edge over the others.

Loves his mom more than anything and can do anything for her.

Chapter 1

At the Singhania mansion , a white colored palace like structure with covering an area that could house a million. The entrance marked by the parking lot with all the Audis and Bentleys parked.

The garden with all the beautiful flowers added not only added to the beauty of the place but the essence of the rose petals made the place go divine.

The huge chandeliers and the spotless marble floor were all of the best quality exported from different parts of the world. The whole place had a touch of uniqueness because of the priceless antiques that were put on display. The place had a royal look and every corner was reflecting pity and spirituality.

The couch , the sofa set were all one of their kinds and the huge dinning table was too made up of the most precious and shinning wood.

Two legs descended from the endless looking plight of stairs. A young dashing man with his black suit and gel fitted hair was in view. He walked straight to the lady in golden Kanjivaram saree and bent down to touch her feet.

Rey: good morning mom .

Mrs. Rajshree Singhania: good morning my prince.

All set for the office.

Rey: yes mom all set.

Mrs. Singhania: beta if u have time can we talk.

Rey held her mother's upper arms and made her sit on the sofa and he himself sat down near her feet.

Rey: Mom aapko mujhse baat karne ke liye permission ki zarurat kabse pad gayi haan ?

Mom u are my life so just order ok.

His mom smiled and kissed his forehead.

Mrs. Singhania: beta you have fulfilled all my and your fathers dreams but never did you think about living for self.

A tear came rolling down her cheek and her face was getting red with every passing second.

Rey: but mom.

Mrs. singhania: No Rey today please tell me speak my heart out beta.

U have performed all your responsibilities with great dedication but never did u enjoy your life like the others of your age group. Your dad's sudden demise created a void in our lives but you with your hard work and dedication never let our lifestyle get affected.

Rey too had tears in his eyes, his pain was getting reflected on his face.

It was evident that he missed his father badly.

Mrs. Singhania : but now I have decided Rey that you have to get married. Since so long you are rejecting all the marriage proposals that are being offered but now nothing doing.

Rey wanted to stop her from discussing anything on this topic but he could not as the glitter and shimmer in him mothers eyes prevented him from doing so.

Mrs.Singhania continued with a lot excitement.

Mrs. Singhania: beta u remember Mr. Shikhawat our age old business partner.

Rey nodded his head to indicate that he did remember.

Mrs.Singhania: yesterday I went to his office and their while waiting for him I saw his daughter.

She was so beautiful that she could make the world fall for her.

Her eyes were like that of a kid and at the very glance I decided that she was perfect for you.

Then I even had a word regarding this to Mr. shikhawat and as he knows you u really well he just agreed to it.

She said it so cheerfully that it gave a big soothing effect to Rey.

But at the same time Rey was shocked and stood up with a jerk.

Rey: but mom you know I don't want to get married , in the phase of all these responsibilities I hardly have time for anyone . And marriage will just add the burden on my shoulders.

So mom please don't force me.

Mrs.singhania: she will not be the burden rather she will come as a relief in your hard hitting life.

Believe me son she is the perfect girl for you as I know Mr.shikhawat since very long and I m sure that he must have taught his daughter the best principles of life and living.

Rey: but mom what if things between us don't work out .

Mrs. Singhania :Don't be negative Rey she will be the saturation point of your life and things will surely be in order.

Please beta that's my last wish so I request you to please marry her.

Rey: mom please don't say all this I will marry her only for your sake but only on one condition that I will meet her before any proceedings and that too alone.

Mrs. Sighania: yes my son I don't have any problem with that and She hugged Rey tightly.

Kaka !!!!!

Kaka !!!!!

All the servants came running hearing Mrs.Singhania's voice.

Mrs. Singhania: Arrey kaka get sweets for all the relatives and friends, my son has agreed to get married.

And I will call Swayam right away from his friend's place. He will be too happy to know this.

And she rushed to the cordless phone planted on the side table.

Rey was standing still seeing all the activities going around him.

Rey: ohhh god.

I hope this girl understands what I will say to her.

An echo disturbed the peaceful surroundings of the lavish bungalow.

The voice was coming from the study of the modernly decorated house.

Taani: what the hell mom and dad what clause did u add in your will that if I don't get married to the person you want and when you want , I will not get any right on your money !!!!!!!!!!!

Mr. shikhawat: yes taani you heard it right the clause reads the same but in addition to it if you try to culminate your marriage before the term of one year then also all my wealth will go the trust.

Taani: but dad that's unfair ?????

She said rudely throwing the file on the floor.

Mrs. Shikhawat: unfair ?????

Do u really think so Taani ?????

We both work day and night for your comfort and you don't have time to even sit and discuss your life with us. We are just their to support your financial needs.

Every month the amount of your credit card statement goes up by 5lakhs and in spite of topping your college and being so talented you hardly put any efforts to establish yourself.

Mr. singhania: your mom is right Taani. You don't respect what god has given you at all. So what you just threw on the floor was our decision about your future that's very much final.

And moreover we have selected Reyansh Singhania to be the perfect man for you.

Taani : what ?????

That black suited corporate businessman ?????

No way dad I will never marry him. He hardly smiles when clicked on the newspaper's front page.

He is way to different from me so I will never meet that rotten egg fellow.

Mr. shikhawat: if thats your decision my child then we are also very much stern with the decision that we just made.

Taani was too angry listening to her parents words. So she rushed to her room stamping her feet with disgust.

She sat on the in front of the dressing table and wept badly.

Taani: how can they be so cruel ?????

Why the hell did they earn so much if they were not to do anything for their child.

Her face became red but suddenly the environment was still when she looked at her face in the mirror.

Taani: no Taani how the hell can you cry being in this problem, come on you are Taani Shikhawat the girl who is known all over for her no non-sense attitude .

So get up and make the things fall in your favour. Meet that guy and tell him that what he and his family dreams about is utter non sense and can be never possible.

She tried to regain her confidence and made up her mind to meet Rey.

Teaser:

Rey and Taani meet.

Rey: so, hum dono hi ekk dusre se shaadi nahi karna chahta but we will do it for our families and our personal profits.

Taani: yes dude.

We only have tolerate each other for a year and then we will be free like the birds (she winked); but remember this one year we will be away from our families in all the ways we can so that when we give our reasons about our relatiosnhip being a failure then they should trust us.

Rey: ya so decided we will be away from our families and we will spend the twelve months of our life in different different cities without poking or interfering in each other's life.

Taani raised a hand for a high fi while Rey neglected and walked away.

Taani: challo koi baat nahi Mr. Sadu tumhare sath mujhe world ki twelve cities dekhne ka moka to milega .

And she danced to express her happiness.

So guys this story is different as it will be a journey towards love but in a different way.

Ekk saal saath mein twelve cities explore karen gaye to kya relationship ki 12 needs ko cross kar payen gaye ?????

1.Acquaintances

2.Formal friends

3.Buddies

4.Best friends

5.Partners

6.posessiveness for each other

7.undefined relation bound with concern

8.Germinating love

9.shadow for each other

10.lovers

11.Couple

12.soulmates

Kya kya hoga iss pyar ki journey mein.

for all the fun keeping reading.

I WILL BE W8 FOR ALL THE LIKES AND PRECIOUS COMMENTS TO CONTINUE WITH THIS CONCEPT.😃

AND YES IF U R NOT IN MY BUDDY LIST ADD ME FOR ALL THE UPDATES.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
Chapter 3
Edited by shivi77 - 11 years ago
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res
😆 shivi my heart was beating fast seeing this.. i wanted to res the 1st post n my net was damn slow , but yipppeee done!!!!!
gonna read 😉

unres!!
actually shivi cant hold super duper excited , n i read only the character sketch now .. but wanted to comment😆.. u know i go mad sometimes in over excitement.. kk coming to charcter sketch .. taani's is so different from our d3 's taani and i loved it ...
attitude!!! but yet good at heart😊👍🏼. n taani n sharon are best friends!! again loved that👍🏼
n rey's cs- business man... mm angry types hai kya shivi???.. 😉.. n reyaam are brothers😛

mmm again Res!!!! gonna read rest!!😉😆

again unres!!😉😆
read it... mmm what to say , shivi darling reading the last lineof taani's dialogue in the teaser i said ..wowww!! superb !! shivi where in ur chottu brain do u hide all these ideas??? 12 months .. 12 cities .. n 12 needs for a stable relation n i am damn sure than u naughty, that taarey will be glued to each other so firmly after these 12 months .. its gonna be super duper exciting journey ...

now let me start again from first😆
the first part ie intro was perfect👍🏼.. could very well imagine the entire thing n then came rey's mom - rey scene ... n that was so beautiful😊... mom's worries about rey n him agreeing to marry for her happiness ..but shrewd business man!! his brain was working on how to get rid of the relation!!!
n then came taani n her parents part ,... mm i got her nature more clearly than in the CS!!! n precap.. after precap my mouth was full open.😲😆...that was when the actual concept got revealed na.. rest all i said in the para above ..

so as u see i liked it so much .. n now obviously next question is when will u update
ps:so this was your study for the whole weeks tests!!!😆 😆 sweetu ... come to scraps .. we will see there😆 😆.. such a naughty girl!!!!!!!!!
Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres.. shivvi excellent plot.. auweee 12 seas of relationship. i love the concept 12 phases of relationship, 12 cities... interesting..lol ''unlike poles attract''... am excited for tr's adventurous journey😊..
Edited by gowri_amy - 12 years ago
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res/unres

Yay padh liya finally😆😆and abb to excited too comment paagal ho gyi hun yaar ff padh ke tera😆😆 yaar shivi u are darling kya kahun sabse phele toh i was left dumbstruck jab yeh story dekhi ithought ekk aur nayi story vaise hi do story's itni superbb and yeh bhi meri fav list mein hi jayegi i know ...😳
And look i was right yaar tere dimaag mein itne mast mast ideas kahaan se aate hain yaar it was a totally hatke nd mazaedaar concept yaar itzz just superbb yaar matlabb i was like plzz yaar mujhe bhi batao how do u write so well..kuch bhi ho yaar i loved this ff concept very much yaar superbb CS amazing chapter 1 yaar nd dhaansu teaser totaally hatke nd unexpected...And taani aur rey yaar totally differnt hain i loved the two very much yaar mazae aayenge padhne mein it would be a thrill to read this ff for me sach bolun toh abb toh mein bhi kafie eagerly wait karungi for the next update yaar plzz yaar wait nai ho raha hai mujhe plzz jaldi update kar naa yaar...
🤗
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Omg this is amazing
Can't wait
Loved the teaser
Love the first part
Can't wait to read more dear
Already in love with this ff
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will be waiting ...😉n loved d 1st part
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res/unres

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as usual shivani, super duper amazing character sketch
i loved it dear , sounds really very interesting ⭐️⭐️⭐️
i am very excited , after all itni dhamakedaar story jo hai 😉😉😉
now chapter -1
it's just awesome , mind blowing as always , i really like d respect , love of rey 4 his mom , he is so sweet , how he touch her feet in d morning .i like it a lot dear ,
but after that a little emotional also

and taani , oh god this girl only wants money money money and her dialogue

No way dad I will never marry him. He hardly smiles when clicked on the newspaper's front page.He is way to different from me so I will never meet that rotten egg fellow.

🤣 so so funny rey - rotten egg fellow and hardly smiles and all
hehhehe
but koi ni ab taani hai na - she will bring colours and happiness in rey's life

finally they both agreed 2 meet each other 😉

now teaser was awesome
wow wow wow ooo band baaje leaao ., dhol bajao 🥳
taarey ki shaadi jo hogi as a first step towards their love


shivani now i can't wait 2 read this story further so u better update this very soon infact now 😉😉 as i am a little impatient that's why i resist myself 2 comment as i know that u always take so much time 2 update and i can't wait that much

so update it nowww varna main tujhe bahut pareshan karungi 😛

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome concept... waiting to see tarrey in different forms... eagerly waiting for next part update soon
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Oh Shivi thats really gr8 concept... CS are cool... Taani g are very different ... Storywise this is really very Alag ...Thanks and update soon sweetheart :)

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