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Thanks for everyone who ever commented and liked my updates till now.

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Thanks to all once again.

Recap:

I adjusted my curls n dress as normally as possible without showing the nervousness of being caught with HIS n my antics. After lots of teasing HE showed the awesome sign along with a flying kiss making me blush like hell. But we both paled out n froze at our places when pandit announced the ring exchange and mukund took my hand in his n there HIS hold on the glass tightened as if HE is going to break the glass with bear hands.

Part 28

That is what I feared. HIS extreme reactions n I hinted HIM of the promise HE made yesterday about not doing anything stupid through my eyes. HE immediately turned back as if not able to tolerate, see or bare all this. I could feel it from HIS posture itself.

I have no choice but to give my hand n waiting for some miracle to happen which will help me. I was brought back by the words of pandit..

Pandit: Beti, U should remove the ring u r wearing n have to put the new one.

The thought itself made my heartbeats stop. I can't remove this part of HIM from my fingers. At the same time I saw HIM turned back sharply with those words. Just as anyone of us react, everything happened so suddenly that I remember falling back with weight on me crushing me down n sharp pain on the left side of my body. I opened my eyes only to c mukund's face close to me lying on top of me. From corner of my eyes I saw HIM rushing towards me n pulling me into HIS embrace by pushing away the weight from me.

In pain n fear of not understanding anything going around me I cling to HIM as if my life dependent on it. Slowly HE spat water on my face n everything started to b clear to me. Now I remember what exactly happened. I was almost on the verge of breakdown with the thought of removing the ring which HE made me wear just morning n thinking of ways to avoid it. To make it more difficult the pain, hurt, anger n possessiveness on HIS face almost killed me n I turned my head other side n exactly at that moment saw some sparkles at the switch board n b4 anyone knew it fire caught the rope of chandelier tied on top of the madap where we are standing n was about to fall on mukund n in hurry I pulled him n fall back taking him with me.

Now I saw HIS face which was almost pale in tension n eyes tearing up. B4 I could console or talk to HIM I heard people talking about the incident. I knew what is coming up'accusation of me being the bad omen to the boy n his family. N engagement will b stopped. I am not worried about this but only feeling pain about family. I don't need to think about HIS thoughts coz it's clear that HE is only concerned about me n nothing else. But to my surprise or luck all were praising me for being the savior. Pandit said that they have ot wait an hr or so b4 they continue with ceremony coz of my injury n skipping muhurat.

That's when I saw my left hand bleeding n it need dressing that means no ring on that hand n this thought itself brought the smile on my face but I turned calm seeing HIM glaring at me. With this sudden situation no one r question our togetherness coz it's more like a helping reaction n everyone r ok with it. HE carried me to the adjacent room n made me sleep on the coach there. Someone brought the medical kit n HE almost snatched it from their hands n started dressing my hand. I felt a tear drop on my hand n HIM quickly rushing out from there n I know HE is actually crying. I soo want to go behind HIM n take HIM in my embrace but all the people there came n talked to me n ask me to take rest. N to avoid everyone I quickly closed my eyes n pretended to sleep.

Once I am sure of the clear coast I tiptoed n was ready to open the door when I felt HIM closing it from inside. B4 I could talk or say anything HE hugged me tight assuring everything is fine with me. I pulled out of the hug n kissed away HIS tears n spoke

Me: Cutie plz I can't c tears in ur eyes. U know big boys don't cry.

RK (snapped immediately n spoke with a cute pout): who the hell told this? What will big boys do when they feel like crying? We too need a shoulder to cry. It's not just the birth right of girls. We too have right on tears.

I pulled HIS cheeks n kissed the dimple n saw that slight pink of HIS blush n a drop at the edge of eyes. GOD one day HE will kill me with this cuteness. I never saw a hunk looking this cute blushing.

Me: ok sorry baba. U can also cry. But see b4 u blast on me let me tell u I can't leave a person to die when I can save him/her. Just that the fall was unexpected coz I tripped due to his weight n my imbalance.

RK: I know u did it out of humanity. Though I was more concern about u I can't blame u. but that doesn't mean I can't b hurt with this injury of urs.

Me: C the bright part here. I need not remove the ring of urs.

RK: If this is the cost of the ring I would've never placed it..

I simply closed HIS mouth b4 HE continue further n said

Me: Don't ever say like that. It really means soo much to me n it's not that big of an injury.

HE kissed my bandaged palm soo tenderly n sensuously making me forget every pain. HE slide beside me n made me sleep by hugging me close. After some time I find my mom waking me up for the ceremony n I searched for HIM but couldn't find HIM anywhere. Next everything went smoothly without much fuss n then started the dancing.

(chhalka chhalka re kalasee kaa panee

chhalka chhalka re o aankh naa manee) - (2)

maiya bole jaana nahee, bhaiya ko bhee maana nahee

baabul bole bas ek din kal kaa chhalka

gudda bole jaana nahee, guddee bole jaana nahee

sakhee bole bas ek din kal kaa chhalka

(chhalka chhalka re kalasee kaa panee

chhalka chhalka re o aankh naa manee) - (2)

Trish along with the girls there started dancing pulling everyone to the dance floor. She is teasing me by hinting the guy beside me but all I could c was HIM only n HE was smiling n I can guess we both r sharing same thoughts. Everyone around us were almost doesn't exist for us. We r talking in our own language of eyes n silence n the best part is we r understanding it perfectly.


baabul aa chhoda teraa anganaara ha

anganaara anganaara ha chhoda teraa anganaara - (3)

anganaara anganaara chhoda teraa anganaara, chhoda teraa anganaara

abb kee jo ghar aayegee aayegee, hire vaala chhalla laayeya

godee me khilaaye sakhiya -2 sakhiya

nanha munna lalla laiyo

abb ke jo saavan aayega abb ke, abb ke, abb ke, abb ke

dusaree bidaayee dolegee dolegee, piya kee judaayee dolegee

Trish n Mukund's sister pulled HIM to the dance floor requesting for a dance n HE danced with them uncomfortably as if not to hurt them almost n ignore their pleadings. Trish pulled me n Mukund for dance I was almost lost in HIM n started dancing just few steps smiling to myself forgetting I was actually dancing with that guy but even b4 I knew n react I found myself being twirled by mtukund n I lost my balance n HE came to my rescue n hold me caringly and possessively.

(chhalka chhalka re kalasee kaa panee

chhalka chhalka re o aankh naa manee) - (2)


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=1IDQnJ0307w[/YOUTUBE]

(Just imagine the sequence as per my explanation n here Madhu is not happy coz of Mukund but every emotion in here is just for RK)

We were lost in each other n forgot the surroundings once again but were brought back when Trish came to check if I am alright or not. After all these high dramas n tensions the ceremony came to end n I took leave from everyone n rushed to one of the rooms there which was actually reserved for us to take rest. We can vacate the place @10 am next morning n hence I know everyone will b busy removing the decorations and cleaning the place n arranging next day shoot settings.

I can listen that Mukund n his relatives took leave n few of our chawl elder n kids left for day n few women n men were there to help Mom n Shammu in the chores. All I can do is to dream about HIM n all our antics from night till last moment. I was soo tired with all the rituals n function. But the only relief is that I don't have to remove HIS ring n wear the other. I now got the faith that even God is on our side. When I was about to slip into slumber I found a noise from back door which will open into the garden area of the studio. I opened the door n pulled HIM in b4 quickly close it. I don't need to think now who will b around me. Coz HE is not yet done with this caressing n nursing my wound which I almost forgot.

HE didn't talk much but simply hugged me tight n slipped beside me almost resting on me with HIS head in the crook of my neck n holding me tight around my waist . I felt sooo reveled feeling HIM this close. I didn't question or talked except cocooning HIM in my embrace n soothe HIS unknown pain n tension. I slipped into peaceful sleep hugging n hiding HIM in my arms waiting for a new phase n morning in my life with HIM.

Hope u like it.

Precap: Madhu's Intro as heroine to media'Trip to Goa for outdoor shoot..Socho RishBala with few kaba mein haddis'

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Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 12 years ago
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Amazing..>~!!!! RIshab is seriously very adorable here...his 1st pririty here is only Madhu..which is very sweet..Goa tripp...Inetersting...Hey dont add lots of hurdels(haddi's😆) Waiting for the next..:)~!!

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