IPKKND OS - Coalescence [Romance]

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blayde

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Posted: 12 years ago

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mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was awesome!!! Amazing!!! You described their longing for eachother so brilliantly!!!😃

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

OH MY GOD.

RES RES RES. :O

P.s. THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE EVER BEEN ON ANYBODY'S FIRST PAGE! How cool is that?

UNRES -

Firstly I don't know how this res and unres thingy works. LOL. :P ^ I wrote that SO quickly that you have no idea. Like a lightening bolt. ^_^ I couldn't have missed it for the world.

Secondly How many times will you impressive me like that? I mean you do it again and again and agian and again and again. You leave me all - OH MY GOD THIS GIRL IS AMAZING! LOL.

I had been wondering lately about your Os's, hadn't see them in a while but there you are to surprise us all! 😳 It was so amazing. Literally, I love Arnav in your stories. It was hot and I loved the way both of them were confused about one another. ^_^ Please give us another Os in the next few weeks? ._. Please? ._. I begs? ⭐️

I don't know what to say anymore. It was perfect! Khushi all pergnant and trying to control her hormones. Lol. It was funny too. Loved it over all man. You're super duper tuper buper luper amazing. :') ^_^

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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As always this was hot and passionate...

But like always I also saw the emotions behind it! :)

A pregnant Khushi's raging and frustrating hormones.

A worried Arnav's out of this world control.

The feelings Khushi went through were just, the feeling of unwant that was intensified by her hormones.

Also Arnav's want to understand yet confusion was adorable.

And finally reaching the point of understanding and fulfilling each others desires was beautiful and mind blowing!

Love,
Anjani

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW what an amazing OS!!

I just waiting to read your new OS and you just gave us one, u rock

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

oh that was a very hot update!

loved the way arnav made his pregnant wife feel even more loved and special!

it was nice having something like this to read from u. its been quite sometime from the last one:)

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a great OS...thanks for the PM.

I'm glad Arnav now knows what makes his pregnant wife happy😉

Hope you continue writing these romantic one shots, they are so nicely done!

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was an awesome OS! So glad you decided to take a break and write this for us!

How sweet that Khushi was feeling so self conscious and her insatiable appetite was bothering her. Loved their passion..

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow! Outdid yourself again! I thought he was going to tease her and be arrogant. But he was the complete opposite. WoW! Loved how he was so "accommodating" (!haha!) to her. He was so prepared to fulfill all her desires. of course, the bonus was that his desires got fulfilled, too! For in her desires, lay his! Easy to feel the love he has for her.

IF - kbtr

Thanks for a wonderful OS. Long time in coming, eh?

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

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oh my my my now dis one is simply fantastic...!
D whole concpt is beautiful...
Nd d way u've penned it down is simply marvellous...
U r truly an amazing writer who knws how to mix raw passion wit romance nd emotions...
Loved it totally...!
Awsum one...
Lovely 👍🏼

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