Virika OS - Long Lasting Relation

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IMP NOTE - No No.. I have not started writing a story on Virika😆. One of my friends on this forum have written this amazing Virika OS and she didn't want to post her story. After all the bugging, she allowed me to post her story. As much as I want to reveal her name, I can't she will kill me😆. So plz do read her story

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It was a day Jeevika looking forward, the moment when she will become Mrs Jeevika Viren Vadhera. Viren and Jeevika have known each other for more than 6 years. No matter what up and down went with them, they were always together. Every single seconds was their life. They were eachother's soul.

*Knock knock*

Jeevika look confused seeing Viren at that time and viren had been acting weird few days back, but as it was the time where Viren should in marriage hall. Viren just locked the door and told Jeevika to sit down. Viren was acting weird and Jeevika could figured it out. She was panicking as she never saw Viren like that.

J- whats wrong Viren? Is everything okay?

Viren just couldnt say anything. He just sat there looking at Jeevika. Jeevika got more panicked. Viren face was trying to tell so many things but things couldnt come out.

J- viren silent kills person. Can you please say whats wrong?

Viren saw how Jeevika was stressed when he didn't told reason. He couldnt face her. He just stared down to the floor and keeping eye out from Jeevika. But he has to say the truth.

Viren- Jee...Jeevika I cant marry you.

Jeevika just looked at him. She knews there's a reason, she even knew he was lying. But she was really pissed off and couldn't control it.

Jeevika- wow thank you for letting me know today that you cant marry me. This day would be an awesome day to tell this. Are you kidding me? Our 6 years, you know 6 years right. And you are saying you dont wanna marry me today? The day where we are meant to be together.

Viren- i know you are mad at me but Jeevika try to understand the fact that I cant marry you.

Jeevika- we are meant to be married today for god sake and you telling me to understand the fact? Like really?
Viren- i know everything but just listen to me once.
Jeevika- listen to you what Virenji? I stayed here waiting for this day to come and Now. May I know the reason why you cant marry me suddenly?
Viren- because I love someone else.

Jeevika- did you just said that? Dont you think I know you very well. We have been together for 6 years and till that time i didnt saw you with any other girl, like you didnt even flirt with anyone.
Viren- i never said because it might hurt you but i do have. I am leaving now. Hope you will have a great life ahead.
Jeevika- Viren you are not leaving until you say me everything. Can you please stop lying and say why you cant marry me.
Viren - i just said you Jeevika, everything.
Jeevika- yeah like do you think i thought it real? Your eyes tells everything.
Viren- but this time my eyes is speaking the truth
Jeevika- yeah so come on tell the truth.
Viren- Jeevika why dont you believe i love someone else and she loves me so much.
Jeevika- more than me?

There was a silent for a moment. Neither viren spoke nor jeevika. jeevika had tears in her eyes and she want someone to make her feel better. She was hoping viren could hug her but he didn't. Whereas Viren wanted to hug her but he has to leave Jeevika alone, make her realise that he is telling truth. Jeevika knew he was lying somewhere and Viren knows he cant lie anything from her. They both were in a condition where they have to understand eachother without speaking but this time Jeevika couldnt. She couldnt know the reason why at this time Viren left her. She couldnt read his mind. Viren couldnt face Jeevika. He couldnt see Jeevika like that anymore. He just went from there leaving Jeevika alone by her own.

Jeevika kept asking herself what went wrong? what made Viren left her alone? is she really pretty than me? how come Viren never told her about his other love? Jeevika didnt knew whether to believe or not. Jeevika was heart broken. She couldnt bear the pain and she couldnt help her in any way. Everyone try their best to make sure Jeevika will be able to be like before but not a single thing helped her. Everything she does used to remind of Viren.

Viren was missing Jeevika. He always used to wish if Jeevika could be there with him. But he was happy that she will find someone better than him and who will have a longer life. He was laying down in a hospital bed, thinking about Jeevika. He knew she must be crying and waiting for him but he wants Jeevika to move on. He didnt want Jeevika to know what condition he is going through.

Time passed by, Viren was at the stage where he need someone most. He was still in hospital being treated but in whole 2 months no-one came to look for him, No-one.

Dr- hey Viren. How are you feeling?
Viren- hey doctor. I'm better. Idk how much time i've left but i will be saying this till death.
Dr- nothing gonna happen to you mr vadhera. We are trying our best.
Viren- i know. I'm glad. Thank you.
Dr- no problem.

Jeevika was recovered from whatever had happened with her before 2 months but she still couldnt forget him. She still use to remember everything and somewhere her heart still wants him back.

Jeevika got a call from her friend saying she is being admitted in hospital. She hurriedly took her bag and run to the hospital. She soon reached there and tried finding her friend. While she was looking for her friend where she found Viren lying on bed.

She just stood there, didn't knew what to do. She saw him after 2 months. Jeevika eyes were full of tears. She just wanted to go inside and ask whats wrong? What happened? As she was just about to go inside, doctor stopped her.

D- hey. Are you his family member?
J- No, i'm Jeevika. Are you his doctor?
D- yeah. Well its surprised to see someone with tears standing infront of his room.
J- what do you mean?
D- he's been here for 2 months but not a single person came to visit him and ask about his health.
J- whats wrong with his health?
D- he's been suffering from Brain Tumour. And he doesnt have much time to be alive.

Jeevika just couldnt believe what she heard right now. All those moment were flashing in her mind. She was hatting herself being out of contact for two months and not searching where viren might be. She was irritated of herself. She opened the door where she saw viren in a deep sleep.

Tears were coming out of her eyes and she couldnt see Viren like that but she was told by the doctor not to wake up viren as he hardly sleeps. She just sat by the side and waiting viren to wake up.

what went wrong? When n where ? We mean to be together and he wanted us to be apart when he needed me most. How can you do this viren, how? We were supposed to tell everything to eachother. We were meant to like one souls. I know we didnt married but we promised eachother we gonna tell everything no matter how shit we went through or how busy we are. Why did you hide all this pain from me? Didnt i mean nothing to you? You know how much I love you. This two months i only know how i stayed without you, without seeing you, touching you or be able to hug you. I know you idiot have missed me more but why didnt you told me when you wanted someone. I think its my fault for not finding you in this two months. I should have looked for you keeping my ego aside. I'm really sorry for not being there when you need me. Sorry for not loving you as much as you do to me.

Jeevika suddenly say Viren moving his hands and she wiped her tears. Viren was shock seeing Jeevika by his side. He didn't knew what to do. He couldnt even start a conversation, neither did Jeevika. Both were like in an awkward situation. Doctor was there in room in some minutes.

Dr- hey Viren. How are you feeling?
Viren- im good dr. How long will the operation last for?
Dr- we cant say anything.
Jeevika- operation? What kind of?
Dr- we are having operation of Viren as he decided to do.
V- doctor ( pointing indirectly to give them space)

Doctor understand what viren was trying to say so he left the room.

Viren- how are you Jeevika?
J- i'm good and you?
Viren- as you can see me now. So did you find someone who would be perfect match for you? Remember you told me last year.
J- not really. You know i tried looking up someone through that webcam thingy where we could do chat but all boys were like retarded ones so still single. Wbu? Didnt you flirt with anyone in hospital?
V- not really. I found a 6 year old girl so cute and i asked her for marriage proposal, she said yes but she is up there waiting for me.

Jeevika just suddenly closed Viren's mouth, not letting him to say anything. Their eyes could tell everything. Viren couldnt see that pain in Jeevika's eyes so he just pushed her towards himself and hugged her tightly.

V- i love you Jeevika. I still love you. I know how i spend this 2 months without you. I didnt want you to be stress out or get worried about me anymore so i just got myself out from your life. I didnt mean to hurt you in anyway. I'm sorry but i still love you. I dont know how much time I have left i will be hugging you until my last breath.
J- Viren nothing's gonna happen to you today. You cant leave me alone. 2 months were like hell to me. I cant let you die. Remember you still need to make breakfast me? Its your turn.

Doctor came inside the room and they broke their hug. Doctor felt awkward having himself in the middle of them but it was time for Viren's operation. Jeevika was trying not to cry as she has to be strength of Viren and support him but she couldnt. She just hugged Viren while other kept looking them.

D- i'm sorry for its time for the operation.

Both broke their hug, and started moving toward the ICU. Jeevika didnt let viren go she was holding his hands and didnt even have an eye closed.

Nurse- u are not allowed in here.

Jeevika couldnt even have sense that viren was being taken inside until nurse tried calling her. She started panicking where did Viren went. But later on nurse told her.

Jeevika waited there for an hour, time passed by. Jeevika called her family over there and they all came in few mins. It was 4 hours but still no-any nurse came out. Jeevika couldn't control hereself but they the ICU light turning off. They all got up and walk through doctor.

Time passed by, it was been already 1 year that happened. Jeevika was making lunch and she started shouting.
J- viren!!!!! Are you still asleep? U have to make breakfast yet. Come on idiot. Why arent you replying seriously. Viren!!!! Seriously i'm coming up now. NOW!!!

Jeevika went up angrily in room and pushing it hard.

J- are you still up? Its already 12 and you have to make breakfast remember.
V- who eats breakfast at this time, go make lunch
J- i will show you lunch now.

Jeevika threw a bucket full of water on viren. They both were playing with eachother.

V- did you just threw water on your husband ?
J- nope you were dreaming haha.
V-i wont leave you alone. He pulled Jeevika on the bed and made her sit on a bed. I love you Jeevika. Idk what would have happened if i was dead by brain tumor.
J- viren sush let it go. Everything happens for a reason. I love you.
V i love you too.


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Kays94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the story and the concept!!!
Totally fresh and new
It's super interesting to see how their relationship changed and their love bond
No one's relationship is as pure as theirs ❤️
And the ending was just too fantastic!
They way they tease each other but in love 😳
That's what you call Virika ❤️

totally loved the way Viren hd the fact from Jeevika,
they love each other sooo much but thats what love makes you do!
Hope the writer continues this story!!!
It's tooo damn awesome 👏
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really an amazing Os
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*edited*

Vishu posted an OS?
Means she has started writing?
BUT NO!
You got me excited Vishu! 😕

But nyways, this is a show's topper!
WOW! WOW!
This is sooo awesome!
I can't tell you how much I loved this!
The love, the care, the feelings Virika share for each other,
Totally was portrayed in this!

My Viren is sooo adorable! ❤️

Who ever wrote this should have posted it herself and but SHOULD read the response!!

Hope she continue this! ❤️
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GOSHHH...Can i read a story more touching than this...really man its so heartwrenching...From the 1st to the last it was superb...viren went through so much of pain bt dint gave a little hint of it to jeevika & jeevika at his last most supported him so much & made that the 1st moment of their new life...lastly the breakfast fight was too cute...just loved it...Thanks vish for posting it & i guess ashy wrote it !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Who is the author of this?
I really want to know
What a fabulous plot and I love the way it has been penned down
Splendid job by the writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nicely written..
The Plot reminded me of a hindi movie...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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who had write this ??????
this is superbly duperbly amazing yaar
nice nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was soo adorable!! :D she should really write more stories and post them, they are soo good!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!! what an updatee..my heart just bounced back...my heart beating freakly badly... awesomeee updateee yaarrr...

aah..seriously i thut viren loved someother female!!!! what a twist..i seriously never expected the brain tumor track... but even though WORTH READING it,,,,,,,

a beautiful piece of virika..somethng realyy different and entertaining...

i loved the part whr jeevika keeeps thinking..something is wrong with him... loved jeevika's care and concern for viren... she came to meet her frnd instead landed up meeting viren... what a coincidence...

amazinggg updateee...

now i really want to know who wrote this update... 100% credit to the person who wrote this... keep continuinggg... u hv got an amazinggg talent and Vishwa..thnks for putting up this OS in this forum...seriouslyy worth reading and i absolutely loved it...


Sunita a.k.a avni_19

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