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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma



Sorry q di??
main to tang kar rhi thi.. 🤣
haha vm badhye hai i will see all the vms soon



mujhe tang karne mein mazaa ataa hai😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Irum.

very painful update.

Dhuruv ws a beast.
I wish ko os ko is se bhi zayada kadhi saza mlti.
itne saaal main bhi ose smj nahi that Nupur loves onLY mAYANK.
kISI Ko imprisoned kr k pyar nahi jagaya ja skta os k dil main.
That bas***d even wanted to kill shriya,
kaash k Mayank apney haathon se os ki phenti lagata.haath toodh deta os k.
Bt now thay r together.
yeh oon k sachey pyar ki hi taqat thi jis ne Nupur ko 3 saal tk fight krney ki himmat di.

Although Mayur scenes were
needed bt I missing Maya.

thnx for update nd PM.
How r u exams going?




Exams are going hell...
I don't know weather I am going to pass or not...

and Thanks for liking the part..
I'will certailny show some of Sgriya scene...which you wil surely loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
m jst speechless...
aapne kitneee acche se nupur ka dard explain kiya hai...!!!u r fantabulous...!!
upd8 sooonnn..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sonuluvsmayur

m jst speechless...

aapne kitneee acche se nupur ka dard explain kiya hai...!!!u r fantabulous...!!
upd8 sooonnn..!!!




Thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: shafy_MN




mujhe tang karne mein mazaa ataa hai😡



Ha bohot zada mjhe to sbko tang karne me maza ata hai 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma



Ha bohot zada mjhe to sbko tang karne me maza ata hai 🤣



mujh massom si ladki 😳 ko tang karne mein sharam nahi aati hain...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: shafy_MN




mujh massom si ladki 😳ko tang karne mein sharam nahi aati hain...😡



Masoom 🤣
nai bilkul nai balki maza ata hai..
aur jis chiz me maza aye use zarur karna chahye 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma



Masoom 🤣
nai bilkul nai balki maza ata hai..
aur jis chiz me maza aye use zarur karna chahye 🤣



Hawww...tumko sharam bhi nahi aati hain😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Here is my Next Part...


Hope you like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love Never Looses

Part 48

Shriya woke up from her deep slumber and slowly and steadily she opened her eyes'.and glanced towards her side only to see her Mamaa and Dadaa...were embracing each other'were proving the comfort to each other..she felt very happy seeing them like this'she don't know but it seems that all this they are doing is very good'she silently stood up on her place and hugged them somehwere showing her presence there'

They get little bit surprised at the sudden..hug..but soon..they brok off..and joined into their family hug'squeezing Shriya'.it was only a smile flowing on their faces'and they silently prayed to god..that happiness of their family be like this forever'.

They broke off their hug while Mayank Shriya laid down again and said,"Shona you're not well na'chalo aap lat jao..aur so jaao'.


Shriya:But ..Dadaa'nind nahi aa rahi hain'

Nupur:Shriya..shona you are not well'islye you need to rest'..

Shriya:Haan Mamma'.but abhi nind nahi aa rahi hain'.

Mayank:Ek kaam karte hain..aaj Dadaa'..Shriya ko bahut saari strories sunate hain isse Shriya bore bhi nahi hogi aur ache se rest bhi kar paayegi'

Nupur:Okay'thik hain..tun ko jo karna hain karo mein chali neeche bahut saraa kaam karna rehta hain'.

Mayank:Kya Nupur..thodi der beth jaao na'

Nupur:Mayank'ghar ki dusting karni hain..lunch ki preparation karni hain..bahut kaam hain'aur vese bhi tum ho na'isliye mujhe tension bhi nahi hain'

Saying she went down to complete her household work..while father ' daughter set to have their gala time'

He read the story book to her..more than reading it was a teaching session where Mayank correcting her most of the pronounciation'they don't know how the time spent when Nupur came to them with lunch..to them'.but they were so engrossed in each other that they didn't noticed Nupur's arrival inroom..

She stood there with her hands on her'waist and was glaring to them'she cleared her throat to brought back their attention'bit they were seem to be very busy that's why didn't noticed her'Sighing she went towards them..taking the book from Mayank's hand and placing it back to the drawer'ordered them,"Bahut ho gaya'kitni der se padha rahe ho isse'"

Mayank:Mein padha kahan raha tha..Nupur'.

She gave him stop-acting-innocent-look and then said,"Acha thik hain'lekin..tum dono baap-beti ko bhook nahi lag rahi hain'.aur vese bhi Shriya'aapki medicine ka bhi time ho raha hain..kuch kha lo..fir medicine doongi'..

Mayank:Okay'.vese aaj lunch mein kya bana hain'.

Nupur:Vo mene thoda lite bannane ka socha'you know Shriya ki tabiyet bhi thik nahi thi..to how about pullow'

Mayank:Awesome'.

He went towards her..and helped her to set the lunch on the table beside..picked up Shriya from bed..made her sit on his lap..and trio enjoy their family lunch''..

It was the start of the evening where Shriya was sleeping in the effect of medicines'and Mayank and Nupur were almost laying on the couch cuddled to themseleves'acquiring the lost warmth'were not speaking anything but just were in each other's arms'Whem Shriya called them,"Mamma'Dadaa.."

They reached towards her'"Haan shona'"

Shriya:Aaj hum park nahi jaayenge kya..!!!

Mayank'checking his forhead'fever has been subside..but still she seems to be weak..:Nahi shona you are not well na..hum kal chalenge'.

Shriya:To please neeche chalte hain na'.mujhe iss room nahi rehna'bahut bore ho rahi hoon..aap log kuch karne hi nahi de rahe ho'

They smiled..and then he picked her up'in his arms and they moved downstairs'.and instead of going in the living room..they went to the small lawn area outside their house ..as could have some fresh ir..there was swing'trio sat on that with in between them..and were sitting and chatting'

They heard a sound of car hear their gate'

Nupur:Mein dekhti hoon'.

It's Benji'and Diya'

Nupur:Benji'Diya..what a pleasant surprise''

Both the girls hugged each other..tightly'while some tears made their way out from their eyes'.

Diya ..lovingly..:Kesi hain tu'.

Nupur:Achi hoon aur tu..then she properly glanced at Diya'and shockingly looked towards her'and then a huge smile came on her face and asked her,"Oh my Goodness..!! which month'.

Diya:6th Month'.


Nupur..hugging her friend..:I am so happy'

Diya:Me too..acha mujhe bhi ab apni niece se milna..hain'.kahan hain vo'

Nupur:Ajaa..aur Benji..she turned around but Benji..was already sitting with them chatting..and making Shriya laugh with his stupid jokes

They moved towards the lawn..when Nupur said to Shriya,"Dekho Shriya tumse kaun milna aaya..hain tumhari Diya mausi'.."

Mayank too got up from his face and hugged her thanking her to come':Thank you so much for coming'!!!

Diya:C'Mon Mayank dosto ko koi thanks bolta hain..ab hatho mujhe meri doll se milna hain'.

Shriya was keenly watching them'she feared a little but seeing her parent's bein smiling with these people..she too gave her smile to them'

Diya 'sitting besides her,"Hy doll'.!!! Kesi ho'mein aapki'.Diya Mausi'..


She gave her smile and said,"Mein achi hoon Diya Mausi'.she pointed towards her tummy and said Mausi..ye 'kya hain'.

Smiling to herself and said to her,"Isme mein na'mene apni Shriya k liye bahut pyaraa sa..surprise'rakha hain'

Shriya:Kya'.

Diya:Vo abhi nahi pata chalega'abhi time lagega'.

Shriya:To kal bata dena'.

Diya:Nahi doll'.abhi bahut lagega'.

Shriya:Bahut bada gift hain kya'

Diya:Hmm..Bahut'Acha mujhe aapke Doctor uncle bataya'aap ko fever tha kal..

Shriya:Ab thik hain Mausi'..

Diya:Are waah..!! aap to bahut strong hain'..saying they both giggled and hugged each other'

Shriya became comfortable easily with Benji and Diya..and seeing her laughing with them..Nupur felt content in her heart'slowly her daughter is opening her self'

Benji:Acha Shriya'idhar aao mein aaoko ek baar fir se check kar deta hoon'.

Mayank'grabbing Shriya closer to him..:Koi Zarurat nahi hain'.

Benji:Kyu Yaar'.

Mayank:Mene dekha tha'kal raat itna ache se ilaaj kiya tha..tune'.

Benji:Dude..uski zarurat thi'.

Mayank:Shut up'.yahi per pass bethegi Shriya..yahi check kar le usse'

Benji:Okay fine..!!!

Diya..:Nupur ye Mayank bhi na...ones' a sadu..always a sadu..says they both friends high-fy each other'and moved inside to grab some eatables for them'when suddenly Shriya speak up,"Dadaa..aap sadu ho kya'"


The way she asked was so lovingly..that neither could anyone laugh nor..was in situation to answer her question'Benji was controlling his laughter atlast burst out laughing'.while Mayank glared at him'.

Shriya:Doctor Uncle'aap has kyu rahe hain'.

Mayank:Kyunki beta inka dimaag kharab ho gaya hain'

Benji:Mayank..!!! Aur Shriya..aap mujhe chahu bulao na..uncle nahi'

Shriya:Okay..to fir mein aapko..bulaongi'*thinking a bit* Doctor chachu'kesa rahega'

Benji:Bahut badiya'.

Shriya:Doctor chahu..aapko bhi fir injection lagwana padega ab to'

Benji..starlted a bit..:Kyu..mujhe kyu'

Shriya..in her more adorable voice':Kyunki'jese kal meri tabiyet kahab thi to aapne lagaya tha..na..aur abhi Dadaa ne bola..aapka dimaag kaharb hain..to ab..aapko bhi to lgwana..chahiye..fir aap bhi mere jese thik ho jaaoge'..

She was looking so cute'that even Mayank couldn't stopped himself from hugging her..and kissing her cheek and said,"Nahi shona uski koi zarurat nahi hain'.aapke doctor chahu bilkul thik hain'.


Shriya:Pakka'.Dadaa'

Mayank:Pakka'

Benji was just staring this little angel when she stood from her Dadaa's lap came to him and put her little finger's on his forhead as if checking his health like her parent's checked her'and than said,"Haan..Dadaa'Doctor Chahu to bilkul thik hain'."

Benji was just left in aww..for this little angel and involuntry he spread his arms'she first see her Dadaa..who give her assurance..to move forward..and she hugged him'

Benji..hugging Shriya..said to Mayank:Ye to sach mein angel hain teri hi nahi humari bhi'.

He moved forward hugged his friend as he know'how he has spent the dreadfull four years oh his life..without Nupur and without Shriya'.



Hope you Liked it...
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago

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