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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Ria..

beautiful update
now i want some romantic mayur scene



Okay I'll try to keep more romantic moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sara92.

lovely update shafy
mayur and their angel were fantastic



Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is mY Next Part...




Sorry..for being Delay...

Hope you like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love Never Looses

Part 47


They both were standing besides each other'practically were doing nothing'their was a complete silence prevailing'.it seems both were getting courage to speak up'

Whe took a deep breath Nupur said to Mayank,"Mayank..!!!"

Mayank:Huh..

Nupur ..in a serious tone':Iwant to alk to you'.

They both settle down on the cozy couch of their living area'sitting close to each other when Nupur begin her story..

"Uss raat Dhruv mere kamre mein ayaa tha'he said'use kisi kaam se ab jana padega'so won't be able to attend my marriag islye..vo..mujhe abhi se wish karna..aur congratulate karna chahta hain' so' I led him to enter my room'I didn't knew that I had made a monster to enter my room'who is going to change my life forever'who is going to separate me from you'she looked towards him to see her reacting'he assured her to continue'.gathering herself she said

Thodi der'aise baatein karne k baad'he started saying"Nupur Mayank se shaadi mat karo..Nupur I Love You..Mein tumhe bahut khush rakhunga'chalo bhaag chalte hain'mujhe pata hain tum iss shaadi se khush nahi ho'"and on and on'Looking at him she continued,"Mujhe samjh nai aa raha that Mayank ki vo kya keh raha hain..mujhe laga vo pagal ho gaya hain..usne soch bhi kese liya mein tumse pyaar nahi krti'mein tumhare saath khush nahi rahungi'mene use samjhaya..mene use bola ki mein tumse pyar karti hoon..sirf tum se..uske sivay kisi aur k liye mere dil mein ko jagah nahi hain'achanak se vo aggressive ho gaya'.usne mujhe bahut zor se pakad liya.." Pointing towards her left arm while Mayank held it softly and carressed in a suppose to vanish that pain caused..she furthut continued,"Mayank mene apne aap ko bahut chodane ki koshish ki'mene tumhe awaaz lagani chaahi but but usne mera muh band kar diya..and then'" She sobbed while some water droplets fall from her eyes which quickly be wiped away by Mayank'

He put his hand on her shoulder and lovngly said,"Nupur aaj himmat mat raho'.apne dil mein chupaya hua saraa dard khul k bol do..bahut acha feel karogi'"


Grabbing his hand in both her palms tightly she continued,"He slaped me'Mayank'he slapped me'I tried to shout lekin..couldn't and then..everything blank out from my eyes'and when I get concious I found my self in a different place my hands and legs are been tied up around a chair..Itried to speak but couldn't then I realized that he had even covered my mouth also so that I can't shout'"

Mayank held her both hands in his giving her courage to her heart out..and simultaneusly was wiping her tears sprinkeling from her eyes'..and said,"Aaage kya hua Nupur.."

She look towards him and saw a wait a warmth sayig share your fear'share your pain'and she does'

"I tried a lot to open the rope oe to uncover my mouth but didn't succeed'then after sometime he came in my room'and was laughing weirdly'.and said dekha aakhir kar mene tumhe tumhare Mayank se door kar diya..I want to slap him right on his face but I was helpless'my eyes filled with tears he proceed towards me and said angrily,"Kaha tha..na agar tum meri nahi hui ti kisi aur ki hone bhi nahi doonga'ab tumhe saari zindagi mere saath hi rehna padega'aur vo tera Mayank..bahut pyar karta hain na tujhse..ab vo tapega'."..I tried to fight but was very helpless Mayank'

He pitifully said to me,"Yahan se bhaagne ki koshish bhi mat karna..aur ek baat bata bhaag ker jaaogi kahan..apne Mayank k pass'apne'Maa-baap k pass'.well tumhe pata bhi hain..tumhare achanak gayab hone se kitni halchul mach gayi hain wahan per'.saying he took out the cloth piece from my mouth'.

I asked what happen'and pleaded him to leave me..he gave his evily laugh and said,"Well mein tume ek baat bata doon un sabko lagta hain ki tum shaadi nahi karna chati thi isliye darr k bhaag gayi'.vishwas nahi hota to mein to mein tumhe ek recording sunat hoon..jahan per tumhare maa-baap ne ye kahan hain ki unhe sharm aati ye kehte hue ki tum unki beti ho..tumne to unki izzat ka koi khayal hi nahi rakha'.

I was shocked Mayank I was totally shock'uske pass..recording kahan se aayi'aur mere maa-bauji aise nahi kar sakte'fir usne mujhe vo voice recording sunaayi'mein vo sun kar Mayank jitni bhi bachi hui himmat thi mere ander vo bhi toot gayi'mujhe uske plan k baare mein nahi pata tha..ki usne..koi letter choda hain aur meri engagement ring bhi vohi chod di'.

Saying she sobbed while Mayank hugged her..giving her confort..after a while they break their hug..when Mayank asked her,"Lekin uske pass vo recording aayi kese'"

Mein bhi kafi shock thi ki uske pass ye recording aayi kese'.mene poocha to usne kaha..ki usne apna ek aadmi vahan chod rakha tha..baad k saare consequences ko record karne k liye'.lekin mujhe fir bhi vishwaas nahi hua'kyunki usne jo recording sunai thi usme mere maa-bauji mujhse naraaz the tum nahi..tumne kisi ki bhi koi baat nahi maani thi'Mayank mein agar jee payi hoon to sirf aur sirf tumahre pyar k ehsaas k sahare'" She lovingly looked towards him..while he took her hand placed a kissed at the back of her hand and asked her to continue'

Jab tumne kaha ki tumhe ab bhi vishwaas hain ki mein tumhe chod k nahi gayi hoon aisa laga jesa koi nayi jaan si aagyi ho mere ander'aur Dhruv'vo to bahut hi gusse mein tha'vo hamesha kehata rehta mujhse,"Aisa kya hain tumhare pyar mein ki vo Mayank vishwaas nahi karta ki tum use chod chuki ho.."

Mayank:Aur tum kya kehti'

Nupur:Mein has kar use kehti ki ye mera nahi mere Mayank ki pyar ki takat hain jo uske vishwas mein jhalak rahi hain..saying she looked towards him a sudden old time wave of feeling passed from their eyes'and they shared a love-filled eyelock

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Kyunki Tum hi .ho .ab tum hi ho..
Zindagi ab tum hi ho'.
Chain bhi,mera dard bhii..
Meri ashiqui ab tum bhi ho..

]

Vo mujhe manali se kahi bahut door le aya tha'mene tumhe contact karne ki kafi koshish ki but Mayank mein nahi kar paayi'.ek din mauka dekh kar mujhe vahan se haagne ka chance mila'mene apne bhagwaan ka bahut thank you kiya aur vahan se nikal hi rahi ki..achanak mere saamne sab kuch ghume laga..aur fir andhera..kalaa ghangoor andhera'..jab hosh ayaa to pata chala..that I am carrying your baby Mayank..i was carrying symbol of my love'ye jaan ker mein bahut khush thi..but afsos ki baat to ye thi..ki khushkhabri mein tumhe chah k bhi bata nahi paayi..kitna yaad kiya mene tumhe us din'

Jab Dhruv ko ye baat pata chali'vo bahut gussa hua'usne kaha ki vo mere bacchi ko maar dalega'.lekin Mayank mein aisa kese hone deti'bahut mushkil mene uske saath ek deal ki'

Mayank:Kesi deal'

Nupur:Yahi ki'agar usne mere baby ko kuch nahi kiya..to mein vahan se bhaag ki kohish nahi karungi'but sach to ye hain..mein bas'apne bachi ko leke kisi bhi din vahan se bhaagna chati thi'lekin Dhruv ko meri baat per vishwaas nahi tha'.usko vishwaas mein laane k liye I waited for 9 months'when suddenly ek raat ko'mere bahut zor se labour pain hua..instead of taking me to the hospital..usne pass mein hhi ek doctor ko bulaya'delivery k baad k I get to know..ki tumhari princess aayi hain..mene uss doctor se help leni ki koshish ki..coz at that time Dhruv aas pass nahi tha'.she said she'll help me'.lekin Mayank..agle din'..

Saying she started sobbing..louding..and hugged him tightly..while he too held her strongly in his arms'breaking the hug..he wiped her tears while she continued,"Agle din mujhe pata chala..ki unki car ka accident ho gaya hain..but mein jaan gayi thi ki ye Dhruv k plan ka hissa tha'bahut mushkilo mene apni bacchi ko paal pos kar bada kiya'vo hamesha mujhe baandh kar rakhta..aur jab bhi maa-bauji..ya tumse related koi bhi baat aati to has has kar mujhe batata aur krhta tum haar chuki ho Nupur'vo phyco tha Mayank'lekin jab use gussa ataa iss baat per ki..itna waqt guzarne k baad bhi tumhara pyar kam nahi hua..vo aaker mujh per chillata aur keha'kyu karta hain vo tumse..pyar..aur mujhe uski ye halat dekh kar ek sukoon sa milta dil mein'.ki kahin na kahin..tum ho'.Mayank'.


Mayank:Mein to hamesha se hi tumahara hoon Nupur'.saying he wiped the dried tears from her face and said,"Bahut der ho gayi hai uper Shriya k pass chalte hain'.

Saying they again share a brief eyes lock'.

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Tera mera rishta hain kesa'
Ek pal door gawara anhi..
Tere liye har roz hain hai jeete
Tujhko ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans mein pe naame tera

]

Breaking their eyelock he said.,"zaayda der use akele nahi rehne dena chahiye'kahin fir se nightmares aaker use tang na kare'

[

Kyunki Tum hi ho..ab tum hi ho..
Zindagi ab tum hi ho'.
Chain bhi,mera dard bhii..
Meri ashiqui ab tum bhi ho..

]

Nupur :Haan chalo'.


After reaching room they sat beside Shriya while She was at a side and both Mayank and Nupur were sitting on a side'where Nupur was side hugging him'

"Pata hain Shriya poori tum per gayi hain.."A smile appeared on his face..while he closed her closely and she cotinued,"Jese jese Shriya badi hone lagi..Dhruv ka gussa usper bhi hone laga..lekin mein hamesha Shriya k saath reht thi'.kabhi kabhi gusse mein Dhruv mujh per haath uthata tha'to meri bacchi bahut sehem jaati thi'humari liye andhera ek kahunaak sapne se kam nahi tha..din k ujala..to roshni deta tha..but jese jese raat nazdiik aati humara darr badhta..ki pata nahi aaj Dhruv k mann mein kon sa bhoot sawar hoga'.

Ek din vo bahut gusse mein tha..kyunki'tum har jagah koshish kar rahe the mujhe dhundhne..ki'he took his belt..and..rest words dies..as Mayank hugged her tightly..she whispered while sobbing"Bahut mara Mayank'bahut..lekin mujhe utna dard nai hua..jitna dard mujhe meri bacchi ko dekh kar hua'.vo bahut sehem gayi thi Mayank'..bahut zaayeda'vo aksar meri bahoon mein apne Dadaa ko yaad kar ke so jaati thi'hum paintings karte the,,,taaki apna dard thoda sa baant sake..hum bas ek doosre ka sahara the Mayank'.."

She break the hug and said,"Lekin dheere dheere jab mujhe pata chala ki..tum ab bhi mujhe dhundh rahe ho'mene socha iss..baar mein apni bacchi k saath iss darinde ki duniya se bahar nikulngi'mein ab apni bacchi ka bhavishaya barbaad nahi kar sakti'.ek raat mene Shriya ko samjhaya'tumhari beti hain na'islye jhat mein samjh gayi ki kya karna..hain'hum chupke se uss jagah se nikal aaye' bahar aaker mujhe pata chala ki ye jagah Manali nahi hain'but koi choti si jagah thi'mere pass kuch pese the'hum Maa-beti bhagte bhagte bus-stand aa gaye'tabhi mujhe vahan manali ki taraf jaati hui'bus dikhi..vo bus nikal hi rahi thi..mein aur Shriya us per chadh gaye'.hum Manali pahuchne wale the..ki ek jagah bus ruki'Shriya ko pyaas lagi thi'mein use bus mein akela chodna nahi chati thi..aur vese bhi subh ho chuki..thi'hum bus se utre..aur saamne ek tap tha vahan se paani pee rahe the'ki achanak mujhe ek parchaayi dikhi'.mein jese hi mudi Mayank..vo mere saamne tha'Shriya bahut ghabra gayi thi'.bus ka horn bajne laga abhi..bus jaa rahi thi..Mayank..aur hum vahan phase hue the'.koi nahi tha vahan per sab jaa chuke the'humne bhaagne ki koshish ki'but Dhruv ne hume pakad lia..usne bahut Maraa..mujhe'lekin mene ek aanch bhi aane di apni bacchi per'.


Kisi tarah himaat juta kar mene use dhakaa diya aur mein aur Shriya bhaag gaye'hume nahi pata hum ktna bhaage'ek jaga jaa ker chup gaye'.tabhi mene dekha Shriya k haath mein kuch hain'to pata chala k uske haath mein Dhruv ka mobile hain..mene tumhe dial karne ki koshish ki'but'tumhara phone nahi mila..fir mene police ko call kiya..unse madad maangi'aur dekho aaj mein tumhare saamne aagyi''


Completing her story she tightly hugged him..by the time Mayank was also teary'..he too hugged her tighly and said,"I am sorry Nupur'mein tumhe itne saalon tak bacha nahi saka'"

Nupur:Nahi Mayank'kam se kam tumne koshish to ki'

Mayank:I love you Nupur'I promise'mein tmahri aur Shriya ki zindagi mein koi dhukh nahi aane doonga..ab unki koi jagah nahi hain'

[

Tere liye hi jiya mein
Khud ko jo yun de diya hain

]

Nupur:Mujhe pata hain Mayank'aur ek baat aur'.

Mayank..hugging tightly.:Kya'

Nupur'enclosing herself within him..said with a small smile on her face:I love you too'

[

Teri wafaa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamo ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hain naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adoora na rahaaa'

]

A smile appeared on his face too..finally she said after such a long time'.he burried his head in her hair'inhaling her'closing her within himself'

[

Kyunki Tum hi .ho.ab tum hi ho..
Zindagi ab tum hi ho'.
Chain bhi,mera dard bhii..
Meri ashiqui ab tum bhi ho..
Kyunki Tum hi ..ab tum hi ho..
Zindagi ab tum hi ho'.
Chain bhi,mera dard bhii..
Meri ashiqui ab tum bhi ho..
Kyunki Tum hi ..ab tum hi ho..
Zindagi ab tum hi ho'.
Chain bhi,mera dard bhii..
Meri ashiqui ab tum bhi ho..

]



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Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wah di, pata aaj jab mein car mein thi to soch rahi thi ki kuch Dino se tumne update nahi di and ghar aakar jab pm inbox khuli to dekha ki you've updated.. Isse kahte dill ka connection 😃

Ye update padhne ke baad Dhruv ke liye meri nafrat to kayi guna bar gaya.. He was a phsyco.. Aree usse to mental hospital mein rakhna chahiye tha.. Usse kya samajh me nahi ata tha ki Nupur doesn't love him.. Agar usne payar ki to sirf or sirf Mayank se.. Kya mila usse Nupur ko yun kayad karke, kya hassil kiya usne.. Nupur ki payar to kya wo to uski nafrat ke bhi layak nahi tha..

Inn sab mein bechari Shriya ko kitni takleef hui.. Usne apni papa ka payar ko kitna miss kiya..

Agar kabhi kissie se payar karna ho to Mayank jaisa hi karna chahiye.. Beintehaan.. Bina koi ummed rakh kar wo Nupur se payar karta raha.. Wo chahta tha to phir life mein agee bar bhi sakta tha, but usse bishwas tha uske payar par.. Usne uski liye wait karta raha..

Special thanks to for adding this song.. It's my current favorite.. Songs ke mamle mein hummari choice kafi milata jhulta hain.. After all it's dillogical 😳

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah !!
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So horrible and so pathetic😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Humayra

Wah di, pata aaj jab mein car mein thi to soch rahi thi ki kuch Dino se tumne update nahi di and ghar aakar jab pm inbox khuli to dekha ki you've updated.. Isse kahte dill ka connection 😃



Sahi mein...

Ye update padhne ke baad Dhruv ke liye meri nafrat to kayi guna bar gaya.. He was a phsyco.. Aree usse to mental hospital mein rakhna chahiye tha.. Usse kya samajh me nahi ata tha ki Nupur doesn't love him.. Agar usne payar ki to sirf or sirf Mayank se.. Kya mila usse Nupur ko yun kayad karke, kya hassil kiya usne.. Nupur ki payar to kya wo to uski nafrat ke bhi layak nahi tha..


Lekin..Mayank aur Nupur ko 4 saal tak ek doosre se door to rakha

Inn sab mein bechari Shriya ko kitni takleef hui.. Usne apni papa ka payar ko kitna miss kiya..


Hmm

Agar kabhi kissie se payar karna ho to Mayank jaisa hi karna chahiye.. Beintehaan.. Bina koi ummed rakh kar wo Nupur se payar karta raha.. Wo chahta tha to phir life mein agee bar bhi sakta tha, but usse bishwas tha uske payar par.. Usne uski liye wait karta raha..


Aur ek din wapis aa gaya

Special thanks to for adding this song.. It's my current favorite.. Songs ke mamle mein hummari choice kafi milata jhulta hain.. After all it's dillogical 😳


Ye mera bhi fav. song..hain...vese ye baat to tumne bilkul sahi kahi

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah !!



Love you tooo


😳


Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

So horrible and so pathetic😭😭



Kya hua update nahi achi lagi kya


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such an painful update!!
But I'm happy now mn r 2gether!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

Such an painful update!!
But I'm happy now mn r 2gether!!! 😳




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