Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus THREAD 5 Epilogue pg 19 THE END - Page 13

thats why i got inactive dear neither am i reading anything on if nor updating so i will do it after march

Originally posted by: sunshiner23

nice ff

thanks 😊

awesome evil sisss
it was superbbb
luved ittt

so so so now back to comment

OMG you are one of those writers who actually made me go on for a whirligig with your twisty writting first 3-4 chapters tak i was only on a universe trip EARTH-MARS-VENUS

pata nahi kya kya kuch samjh nahi aaya...

but baad main hushh shukar mehar baba ji ki

than comes the confession hayee koi mujhe aise confess kare to main marte marte bhi zinda ho jayungi...!!!!

hayee that was super dreamy confession actually

hushhh the way Maan took all the things tacktfully with brain and all hayee ni main marr jawan gur khaa k iss maan ne to kisi din meri jaan hi le leni hai by god ki kasam *winkiesss*

aoww the most lovely fact of you fiction was that Maan and Geet were hand in hand ALWAYS from start to en they were together and they did helped each other

hushh i na love the DL Bridge yaar mereko wo chahie sachi muchi wala hehehe mujhe bhi kisi k dreams main unwanted intruder bann na hai LoLz

and that brain link hayee main na apne uss special someone se aise baat karne k lie alien bann ne ko bhi ready hu buss wo sara day in conection rahe or kuch nahi chahie mereko heheh LoLz

hehehe than D the Destroyer LoLz

mereko na pura kisi cartoon movie ka thrilling action scene yaad aa ra tha n wo b full tashan main

and than comes that half an hour part where Dr R was knocking the door again n again n again if i was at maaneet place i would have been the first one to kill this bloody person called R hehehe ek to time watch dir pe rakhi baad main shaanti bhi nahi...not done na hehehe

and and and than the fight

tune to mereko ek 3D animated movie ka real version dikha dala ladki

mast tha

and the end how Maan opened PV'e eyes and also to destroy the destroyer

hushh am i falling again

LoLz again in there close session comes the unwanted intruder called R LoLz...

heheh much to Maan's annoyence i loved R's comment

heheheheheheh

and the epi

omg omg

SORDO ki SARDI hehehehe sachi bahut dhand hai isnt it

hehehe Maan ki AFTER PARTY k lie to bahut saare sautans the na 😆

all in all a new form of innovative work

just hats off

now waiting for ur xams to end and i can enjoy Mr Mars's season 2 😳

BY THE WAY Marsie 😃

tu to Ms Mars hai as in Maan ki behan main Ms Venus bann jaau 😉

Maan ji Jaan ❤️ 😈

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I made my baccha wait n when I comment n went back she cries tellin n net ate up so I'm commenting again...


after chimera this s d second science fictions am reading...


loved it baby start 2 parts were confusing n then it'll became superb...


loved d story of war n even more d crowning n after part ;)


waiting for season 2 with new flavours ;)

was reading your note n it cracked me...


what did u say due to board exams u r takin exile... u cheat, minutes begor d exams too u r patrolling here n fb... am hustle waiting for 20... Chun chun ke bafla loungeee ;)


chalo off to sleep!

sweet dreams baby ;)


love Mali ur pu ;)

waiting for S2 ...

Gosh a 100 se b zyada salute to u for such an un imaginable creativity thinking ke liye It was like next part padti hu toh pehla part samjh aaya ha Aaj tak meine jitne b ff padhe unme se sab se hatke sabse different is dis U have taken planets n USS par ff likh li I am happy I mean hats off to Ur capability hats off to Ur thinking Just loved it Mind blowing basanti ... God knows tuje aise idea kaha se aaya hai but kaha se b aata hai acha hai Hume aisa ff padne ko multa hai Mars Venus n wat all names bhagwan jaane Tu sachi 12 complete haina n is earth ki hai Bhagwan muje meri wifey basanti earth ki chahiye dusre planet Nai