MY ANGEL updated pg 106 13/08/14 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Nice update... wat happend to Riya??? continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Oh please NO!! No more bad things!!

Actually... Meri pehle vali baat mat maana, agar no bad things too tum kahogi k story khatam... Aur aabhi abhi to kahaani shur huyi hai!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
great update :) loved it
so riya knew it that arjun loves her
oh so that's why riya went on mission
so riya is sam's real sister :) nice
awww sam was crying 😭
but what happened to riya?
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: dashequalsd3

Oh please NO!! No more bad things!!


Actually... Meri pehle vali baat mat maana, agar no bad things too tum kahogi k story khatam... Aur aabhi abhi to kahaani shur huyi hai!

dont worry bad things will bring ariya much closer which is a good thing
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: fatima15

great update :) loved it

so riya knew it that arjun loves her
oh so that's why riya went on mission
so riya is sam's real sister :) nice
awww sam was crying 😭
but what happened to riya?
thanks for the pm
continue soon

yes riya is sam's real sister and sam is crying remebering his chutki ria
to know what happened read my next chapterrr
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
SAM AND RIA'S STORY

10 years sameer's parents died in a car accident he became mother and father for his two sisters roshni 6 years and chutki(dint name her )1 week
sammer cared for his sister's alot
he used to go to school and after coming home he used to take chutki from the servants and cared her
though he is a 10 years boy he took a very good care of his sisters
one day
roshni:bhai mandhir chaltei nain
sameer:ok
all the 3 siblings went to mandhir
after darshan they sat in mandhir
roshni:bahi dekh chutki meri vungli pakad liya
sameer:iska matlab chutki roshni se bahoth pyaar karthi hain
suddenly chutki starts crying
sameer:roshni chalo car mein chalthe hain chutki ko bhook lag rahi hogi
roshni:nahi bhai aap chutki ka bottle yahi lekar aana woh yahi peelagi
sammer:teke rosh tum yahi se kahi math jana
sameer goes to bring the bottle but he doesnt find the bottle so he goes to near by shop to buy a water bottle
here roshni ses a kulfiwala
roshni:kulfiwala mujhe ek chahiye, lekin chutki mujhe isse pakadna bhi nahi aati abh mein kya karu ,ek kaam karthi hoon mein chutki ko yaha rakkar chalthi hoon ,chutki kahi math jana
roshni goes and buys kulfi ,sam sees roshhni
sameer:rosh tum yaha chutki kaha hain
roshni:woh wahi hain,aap chintha math kijiye mein vuse kahi math jane kaho woh kahi nahi jayegi
sameer rosh tum kya kia and he ran into mandhir
but chutki was taken away by aya
sameer cried and shouted for chutki
roshni:bhai chutki kaha chali gayi mein vuse kaha naa kahi nahi jao kaha hain chutki
sameer:kisine hamari chutki kho lekar gayi rosh
roshni started crying
sameer felt that it was his mistake to give the responsibility to roshni as she doesnt know anything
sameer was angry on him self for years,he searched for her but she was never found
after growing roshni understood the mistake done by her but even she could not do anything as she herself was young to take care of days baby


This is the story how ria ended up in orphanage
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Part 4:
sameer huged arjun and is crying
arjun:sammy kya huva riyu ko tum kyun aisa ro rahi ho sab kuch teek haina
sameer:kuch teek nahi hai vuske sath kyun ki woh woh phir coma mein chali gayi
arjun was shocked its as if someone removed his soul from his body, all his emotions have been stopped and just stared at sameer listening
sameer:arjun last year may hum paake plan ke sath hyderabad ki old city mein ek building mein chali mein aur riya wha full building encapsulate kiya mein aur riya fight kar rahi thi bata nahi ria kab andhar chali gayi andhar bahoth sare log thi ,mujhe nahi bata woh andhar chali gayi ,mein bahar fight kar rahi thi ek dum achanak ek cheek suna hai mein andhar jaake deka waha ria khoon mein padi huyi tha, mein vuse dr ki paas lekar chali gayi aur to my luck chutki was out of danger but dr said she is in coma as the bullet hit her head
arjun:nahi sam vusko aisa nahi hona chahiye woh mere liye bhagvan se ladkar aaya aur bhagvna phir se yeh sab kya hai sameer aur sirf mera saath kyu

in shree's house
all the team members gathered
shree:aaj ayesha blush karke blush karke tamatar bangaya vuska face dekne layak tha
chatu:are sameer sir bhi kuch kam nahi hain
sakshi was dreaming about her wedding with arjun
liza:lagtha hain ye vuski wedding dream kar rahi hain
sakshi:haan yhar mein arjun sir ko mandap mein bhitake sharma huye arjun ko
liza:arjun sir sharma rahi hin joke of the year
ok lets do a play
shree you become arjun sir and liza you become sakshi
sheza:ok
shree as arjun:sitting in the mandap with angry face
liza s sakshi:starts to come by blushing
shree as arjun:sakshi jaldi aao case keliye jana hain waha body wait kar rahi hain
liza as sakshi:chi pora mood karab kardiya batha nahi ye suhagrath mujse yha lash se karthi hain and again she started to blush
shree as arjun:babre ye kya lagtha hain liza iski body mein kuch inject jkiya hain itni blush karne keliye
sakshi as liza:meine kuch nahi kiya sir kasm se
liza comes and sits beside shree
chotu as pandith:abh var vadhu ko mang mein sindoor lagthi hain
shree as arjun:nahi ye haq mein sirf roshni ka hain mein kisiko nahi de sakthi samjhe ya samjav
liza as sakshi:hey arju itni akdu or attitude math bana mein bhi dekthi hoon tum kyu nahi sindoor lagathi hain
and liza forcefully kkeps shrees hand on her mang
shree as arjun:tumne kya kiya sakshi tum jabardasthi kar rahi ho
liza as sakshi:mein kya karon ager tum aise nakre kar rahi ho
chotu as pandith:teek he ab mangalsutr pehna dijiya
shree does it in normal way with arjun's angry expression
chotu as pandith:abh var aur vadhu saath phere ke liye vutiye
shree as arjun:gets up and walks no fast walk(similar to jogging)
liza as sakshi:arjun aap kya kar rahi ho yaha hamari shadi horahi hain etf board ki selections nahi dhere chaliye mein bhi apke saath phere lena nahi
sakshi:wait guys abh mein boldungi
sakshi:tab meri rootne ko manane keliye arjun mujhe kissi kar ke 7 phere woh bhi slow motion mein kartha hain
liza:hiye hiye sakshi itna sharmao math ye tho sirf dream hain agar sach mein toh tum haan
sakshi hits her and everyone laughs

in rathods house
sameer:nahi juno vudas math ho ek kush kabri hain
arjun:kaise kush kabri
sameer:abh chutki apne ankhe kula diya aur woh dekh,sun sakthi hain aur woh emotions bhi express karthi hain
arjun:thanks sammy tum meri hopes increase kara diya
for hours and hours they talked about ria and how she planed and executed the mission and succede it
sameer:arjun aaj kal municipalty wale iss street lights ko high qualty use kar rahe ho dekh yeh subah lagtha hain
arjun:rathod ye subhah hi hain
sameer:kya iska mathlab hum rath bar bathe kar rahi hain aur meri suhag raath
arjun:rath tho chali gaya agar ayesha ka suhaag bachana haii tho jaldi neech jao aur mana kardo
sameer:rawte ruk mein tumhara kya haal kardoonga
and both freinds ran from their
sammer comes inside and sees ayesha sleeping in sofa covered with blanket
he lifts her and places her on bed
sameer:thank god ye so rahi hain mein is se manane keliye break fast banathi hoon
he goes into kitchen and sees the breakfast already prepeared
sameer:breakfast already prepeared
he turns back and sees ayesha fully readied
sameer:tum vut gayi
ayesha:haan meine soya kab raath bar apka wait kar kar ke
sameer:sorry ayesha mein juno ki paas thi
ayesha leaves from their and sits in the dining area
sameer comes their
ayesha:please sam aap kuch math kaho please
sameer:ayesha tumko meri bare mein yha meri family ki bhare mein nahi janthe haina
ayesha:kyun nahi janthi mujhe roshni ki bare mein pata hain
sameer:mujhe ek aur behan hai riya
ayesha opened her mouth
sameer kept a sandwitch in her mouth and said
sameer:listen meri behan Riya damsingh rathod
and he told each and every tiny bit of riya ,her entry in etf,her mission and her relation with etf members mainly with arjun
ayesha had tears in her eyes
sameer:asoo pochlo ayesha mein yeh sab tumhe rone yha kal rath ke liye nahi keh raha hoon ye toh mein isliye kehraha hoon kyun ki ayesha sameer rathod hone se tumhe haq hain jane keliye
ayesha blushed listening her new name from her love
sameer:abh mujhe maaf kardiya
ayesha:maaf no way
sameer:mein jantha hoon tumhe kaise manana
and he lifted her and took to the bedroom

in arjun's lodge
arjun:please book the tickets for todays flight
ria mein aa raha hoon
arjun goes to office he calls everyone to conference room
arjun:hello guys
every one was shocked seeing arjun in this way and he dint stop smiling
sakshi:kya baath hain sir aaj aap kuch bahothi happy lag rahe ho
arjun:kuch nahi ri i mean sakshi just like that
ok guys im here to tell a important thing
im going on a leave and i dont know when wil i be coming and rathod knew this so i came here to tell even you people
sakshi:arjun kaha jaa rahe ho
arjun:hyderabad
sakshi:wow hyderabad mein bhi aao apke saath
arjun laughed
arjun:no r (mein wait nahi kar parahi hoon riyu tumhe milne ka)
sakshi:sir app kuch bathane wala hain kya naya under cover mission hain
arjun smiling no sakshi its a holiday
etf team:kya arjun sir holiday par
arjun:haan guys holiday bye

precap:ARIYA'S meet

Edited by sonycs001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
great update :) loved it
omg poor riya is in coma 😭
love the way choree were teasing aisha
chotu was acting as pandit
and shree liza as arjun and sakshi 😆
sam and aisha scenes were lovely
precap seems awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: fatima15

great update :) loved it

omg poor riya is in coma 😭
love the way choree were teasing aisha
chotu was acting as pandit
and shree liza as arjun and sakshi 😆
sam and aisha scenes were lovely
precap seems awesome
continue soon

THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS FATHIMA
NEXT PART WILL BE NICE MAINLY ARIYA LOVERS WILL LOVE IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
great update...
the scene where shree and liza were acting as arjun and sakahi was very funny...
omg riya in coma... :( he she gets okay soon...
samsha scenes were lovely... glad he told her everything...
wow arjun smiling and going to meet riya...
continue soon...

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