AR:Journey of friendship to love[part 5 pg 24] - Page 22

Firstly, I just want to hug you for the nicknames you have given Armaan and Riddhima! Pookie and Pumpkins! That is so freakin adoreable! aahh! Now here is your biiiggg hug *hugs*🤗
Yeah I actually kinda wanted to start my comment with that, and yes I realise that I might have been a bit hyper...okay, alot! But, yeah that was just so cute! :P Ohk I will shut up with my bak bak, let me warn you I am really bad at writing comments, kabhi kabhi bande/bandi 😉ko pata hi nahi chalta ki mein kya bol rahi hun, so please try and endure my bakwaas till the end! 😛😉😆

The way you started was so bang on! That's one of the things I love about your ffs, like slowly getting the imagery in the mind and then following the turns of events that happen, I can actually visualise what's happening!And that's a great feeling as a reader,to be honest! 😃

Poor Riddhima yar, She must have been so worried for Armaan, and hummpphh! Armaan how could you stop talking to your Poookkiieee like this huh?😡 But, ok you had your reasonable reasons so I guess I can let you off the hook this time, but beaware! :P Poor Riddhima, She must have felt so disheartened by the fact that she couldn't talk to her BEST FRIEND(as of now :P) for so long!😲😭😆
OMMMGGG! I just can't get enough of the email and chatting! Seriously! It is just so friggin' cute and funny!LMAO! 😆😆😆😆

The way Armaan knew what his pookkiiee's reactions were was just brilliant!⭐️
Their friendship is amazing, they just seem to know if something is wrong in the other's life, Like Riddhima, being the clever girl she is, worked out that Armaan was having issues with his parents! Bravo, Riddhima, Bravo! :D Bravo, doc, Bravo! 😉😃😆

oohhh Gooosshhh, Riddhima's dream/nightmare was quite mysterious, who was the he guy?😲 OHo! YEh Armaan bhi na? Sidhe sidha batata nahi, and Riddhima is scared to pester him about the issue he is facing with his parents! But If I was in RIddhima's place, meri bhi fatti padi hoti yar

I would like to applaud you for the scene when Riddhima hears about Anjali's accident...WOW!👏👏👏

just totally amazingly wow! The way expressed the hurdle of emotions that Riddhima goes through is just simply beautiful! I can't get enough of saying this, but it was well done! :D
Yay! Armaan is going with Riddhima, see that's being loyal friends!too good! :')
I so want to write more, but I am afraid you will fall asleep :P
Sorry if my comment didn't make sense but there was so much in my mind for the comment so it might have messed up a little.
But overall, I loved the whole story so far, and I am sure I will love the upcomming parts too (OFCOURSE!!!) <33
All I would like to say now is , I really admire your writing skills,I am in love with it! You are too good doc!😊😃👏⭐️
Now update soon haan, warna I am not that bad at spamming! 😉😆

take care
Much Love,
Jinal <33

I am also waiting for the first chapter of Impassioned Love :P

jokes..jokes...i ll edit now :)

But, I wasn't joking about the updating part ! :P Update soon, that goes for this ff and the new one :D

to save you your energy to update later, here is the link to it -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81812295

:P

You are most welcome :D :P