ff, Tera Intezaar, New Update 80

TERA INTEZAAR

Bani-A small town girl eldest sister, of two

Pia-an ambitious girl with high dreams of bein a model

Rano- the youngest of all....tomboyish....loves school and readin mostly...

Anjani and Lila- two sisters who always took advantage of Bani, and bani considered them as her own sisters; both sisters were from a wealthy family

Harish Chacha- a servant who was very loyal to the family and decided to stay after the girl's parents's death to look after them..

The first half revolves around those who were introduced....later on other characters will arise and make the story seem more interesting....i hope u like....its my first ever.....

Summary

Bani, pia , and rano are three sisters without parents....however Bani the eldest did everything she can to fulfil their needs....she never let them notice that they didn't have parents. Little did bani's sisters know what their sister had to go through just for them.....Bani is a gurl who went through so many sacrifices to get her sisters to where they wanted to be...even if she had to lose her everything....name, body, and even herself....she had friends in school who only used her....but she considered them as her sisters.....and her wellwishers....

New Characters after the Sisters shift!!!!

Jai Walia- an handsome muscular 23 year old man who is wealthy, as well as a very noble man.

Janki Walia- Jai Walia's elder sister who is very nice and as noble honest as Jai she is 24

Jigyasa Walia- 2nd youngest, has the biggest mouth, lies and always wants money, the spoiled sister of all.....20 years old by the way....same age as Bani

Mitali Walia-the 18 year old twin of natchiket....good as Janki and Jai.....goes to college....same age as pia, 18....Jai loves her....as well as his adopted sister....later introduced

Natchiket Walia- Mitali's twin brother....nice and kindhearted as well as sweet...18

Shivani-adopted sister of the Walia's, Jigs loves her....Janki, Jai, Nattu, Mitali, adore her.....since she is the youngest of all.....they never let her know that she is adopted....17...youngest Doctor in Rheumatology Med School London!!

Aditya Basu-Jigyasa 's loverboy, whom is gonna elope to get married.....

Dadi-the elder of the Walia mansion, sweet, noble as how she raised her

grand kids.....

Naman Jain--Janki Walia's fiancee....he is also a really good person.....kind hearted and nobel at heart....wealthy as

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rooj this is dedicated to u!!!! On ur request i did this right away today!! 😊😉

thats good 😳 maybe you should write abit more.....

cool, can't wait to read it.

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: Misangelic

thats good 😳 maybe you should write abit more.....

i know but i am scared that u guys will like it or not...so i am havin second chances...😕

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

i know but i am scared that u guys will like it or not...so i am havin second chances...😕

Hun you might as well 😃 you wont know till you try i started one not many people liked ........and today made a decision to quit.But now think maybe i should try something different and longer in next part. People do read it silently and you write it for yourself.....what i am saying is do what you want do not fear people 😳

try ure best hun,it looks really interesting i will read it 4 sure 😃 u can count on that

Part 1
Bani was 14 years old and went to Mount Abu Middle School. She had lost her parents only 4 weeks ago in a car accident, no tears with any words she would try take care of her sisters. When Pia and Rano fell asleep Bani would go up to the terrace and cry her hear out. Only that time she had a servant whom loved the three girls and lived them; he knew that he wouldn't be paid but for the sake of the girls he decided to stay. While Bani was weeping her eyes out Harish Kaka came upstairs to comfort her and tell her that everythin will be okay; he then told her to go to sleep since she and her sisters had school the next day.

In the morning Bani and her two sisters got ready to go to school while Harish Kaka prepared their breakfast. He made sure that each one them ate and left for school. While leaving for school Bani's two wretched friends came along with them. They seemed very nice but little did Bani know that they jus used her for homework assignments and when it came to dancing they used her. Bani was really very good at dancing and every year there was a show called Culture heritage day where they all performed; without bani they sucked. Bani and Anjani went their way while Pia and Lila went their way; sure they went to the same school but Lila and Pia were the same ages and had the same classes. Rano was very young and went still went to elementary school as she was only 10 years old. Bani and Anjani had and exam today which they had to pass no matter what since school was goin to be over in 10 days.

School went great that day for the girls. Culture heritage was going to come a couple days and the girls had to prepare for their dance. Anju and Lila sat on their lazy butts eating food while Bani had to think of all the dance steps and then choreograph it. Every year she had to be the choreographer, and she loved it because she enjoyed; except when Anju and Lila took the credit for it. Bani never got mad at them because she always thought of them as her best friends. This year Bani's group was going to win; their groups name was India's Finest four. Lila and Pia were Partners and Bani and Anju were partners. That night Bani and her group danced their heart out and lost their battle finally with the new girls Ashika and Anushka. When they lost the competition Anju and Lila cursed Bani out and left to be friends with Ashika and Anushka. Bani was all alone now. She had no friends, but then she wiped her tears off and said to herself that she had her sisters.

😛 see thats good ......well done 👏 👏

nice start...would be nice to see a different story... 👏
just some tips about your worry though...like misangelic said...just write...write for urself....there are plenty who read but not many to post a reply...so dont let that discourage you...i used to feel that way too...but then figured that its okay if you do not get a lot of responses becoz there are plenty who read and leave without leaving a note...

also, this might help you a lot since in my FF I haven't brought in Jai yet...Jai is big around here...so if you dont have Jai included, you might want to bring him in...I havent brought Jai yet and I am on the 10th part...people wait impatiently for Jai but again not for too long...hope this helps... 😊

Great start..... 👏 👏 👏 seems intresting .... pls do cont soon