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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aksuji

jasleen your titles r amazing ...so intriguing and for the update m enjoying this story more now...by the title I guessed deepali to be the one but u surprised me...for kids I'll have to wait n watch

plz continue soon

😆 nimmi you ought to expect the unexpected. making deepali the main antagonist. now what would the fun in that? and thank you. the titles do take work to come up with. I have written up the next chapter gimme some more time to edit and I will post it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice update...
new witch ki entry...luking furder fr it...
update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know what I love about your updates? They're the perfect length. Not too short, not too long.

Seriously, I love that ^.

LOL OMG I died reading the first line! 😆
"The cabinet requested we give them an heir."
Ahaha! The 'princess' correction he made. Good! And good for you for adding that in!


Obama approves (though we're Canadian, but let's forget that for a second!).

Mother Queen. That just sounds evil. But your title 'The Witch Is Back' probably cued me.

WOW. She's a b...I mean witch alright.

LOL illegitimate Sikky.

"May the king come out victorious", she patted his shoulder.

"May the queen pop out a child for the king".

He lowered her back into an arch and kissed her only to make a dramatic exit.


LOL! AH! JASSU! I love you! Ahahah your writing is just lovely and you always know the perfect thing to say.

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

really nice update...
new witch ki entry...luking furder fr it...
update soon dear

I am glad you liked it. thank you. I will try and update soon. Just give me some time to edit.
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Posted: 12 years ago
well thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am waiting for the price or princess to pop out 😳
u r a terrific writer jass !!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kendra

i am waiting for the price or princess to pop out 😳

u r a terrific writer jass !!!👏

aww thank you kendra. that means a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

What you are about to read is Donna Paulsen approved

(Chapter 8)

This Means War

"The great mother queen of the Kundra clan, the wife of the late king, Mohan Kundra the VII, and the mother of his majesty is here to grace us all with her presence", the royal announcer welcomed the mother queen with a sounding of drums and trumpets.

"So, this is our daughter in law", she gestured Madhubala to touch her feet.

Having no time to contemplate the orders, Madhu simply obeyed.

"Not as pretty as Deepali but, you do okay for yourself", she pulled Madhu up from underneath and smiled the most artificial of smiles. Then again, behind all the botulism and silicon injected into her skin, it was difficult to determine real from duplicate.

"Your highness", Madhubala was baffled from all saliva flying in the air.

"No, no, no", she interrupted before Madhu could finish talking. "Call me your grace, I was once the queen".

"Your grace, we have met before"

"Well, not as your mother in law. So technically, this is our first meeting. Rishabh, have you taught her nothing about royal formalities?" She scanned her son up and down uttering some not to so subtle taunts in a nasal voice. "Right, must be the impact of her father's company. He never quite realized how condescending the royals' mannerism was toward him".

"If only I inherited that trait", Madhu mumbled.

"What did you say?"

"Nothing"

"Anyways", the old woman cleared her throat and signalled Rishabh to follow her inside a conference room with clear glass doors.

As Madhubala watched from outside, she could judge a heated exchange of words taking place. The witch woman made a conscious effort to stay within in her daughter in law's field of view.

"You. Married. Against. My. Wishes", her voice was intimidating and with each step she invaded Rishabh's personal space a little more. "Your bitch wife is making the headlines whilst my son and daughter in law suffer in seclusion. Is that what you call justice, my righteous baby?" She slapped him right where he had been slapped numerous times before.

He did not retaliate when she wanted him to. Instead, he kneeled down, apologetic for a crime he was not aware of.

"You may be the king but, I hold the ultimate power. You bring them back this second. You hear me?"

This time, she went too far. Her heel pressed his chin against the floor and he grimaced in pain. Madhubala pushed open the doors but, the witch was long gone.

She carefully lifted his head in her arms and caressed his wounds.

"I am fine", he shrugged her away and retreated back to his chambers.

"From now on, I shall accompany his majesty to internal ministry meetings. Also, I shall be in charge of all political affairs in the upcoming united nations conference. The king needs to shift his focus to the domestic issues".

She strategically dressed his injury and announced her ambitions, all at the same time.

"You be careful I'.."

"This is not a request, it a declaration. I am exercising my rights as the second in command".

"I was talking about the freaking Dettol", he winked with lust threatening to overflow.

"Still no babies", she leaned in just enough for him to kiss her.

He ruffled her freshly combed hair and walked away leaving behind a sexually frustrated queen.

Here is how I see Radha (Movie is called Brazil; a brilliant piece of art)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bnx95KyQEAA[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by DonnaHarvey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ...sudden change from hurtling accusations to becoming aware of each other physically. Amazing chap.👏 I really wantd to kill tht vamp mom. Wish madhu could have kicked her ass. Too bad she escaped.
This is the first time I'm seeing an RK who is weak and a strong Madhu who will not let others have their way.
I really like it.😃

Edited by Kaya13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya13

Wow ...sudden change from hurtling accusations to becoming aware of each other physically. Amazing chap.👏 I really wantd to kill tht vamp mom. Wish madhu could have kicked her ass. Too bad she escaped.

This is the first time I'm seeing an RK who is weak and a strong Madhu who will not let others have their way.
I really like it.😃

I simply loved the way you put it😳 I always say strong is a relative word. Imagine how much strength it took for a king to endure abuse for so long. Practically all his life from a woman who shares more than half of his dna. I am glad you liked it. I simply adore where the couple have come so far given where they began was not the most ideal place.

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