You and Me........ FOREVER! Part 9 updated-pg 98 (24/04/2014)

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

'You'and'Me'

'FOREVER'

Hello People!

This is my first OS ever since...

And this is for my DEAR aka MADHU (Madhukumari)...because she asked me for a treat for something and she demanded this treat to me...

So my dear here is your treat...🤗

Enjoy!

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..Index..

Part 1 A and Part 1 B: Scroll down

Part 2: Page 6

Part 3: Page 10

Part 4: Page 51

Part 5: Page 61

Promo: Page 67

Part 6: Page 79

Part 7: Page 85

Part 8: Page 91

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Edited by Sohad3fan - 11 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yupppiee. . . .
My treat. . . . . .
M super happy . . . .
Yay . . . .yayy. . . .yayyy. . . . . . .
:-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res :-D:-D . . . . .
UNRES :-D :-D . . . . . . . .
OMG. . . . . . . . . .
The OS is superb. . . . . . .
Poor kriya. . . . . . . . .
Gosh. . .i just cnt see her like that. . . . . . .
And dat lady. . .she is so sweet. . .
Kriya ki kitni help ker rahi hai. . . .
Soha,
u r turing it into a SS. . .
Wow. . .dats awsome yr. . . .
Me toh super happy. . . .
And soha a requst. . .
Plz. . .kriya ko aisa rota hua plz show mat ker. . .
It hurts yaar plz. .plz. . .
Waiting 4 d nxt part. . .
Update super se bi upper soon. . . . . . . .
Me toh egaraly waiting 4 it. . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 1-A

Kiun...Kiun...Kia main itni bury hoon...Kia itni buri thi k mujhe aap bhool gaye..Mujhe sub bhool gaye..Maine aap sub ko hurt kiya par Maa ki baat tou maani thi naa phir wo kiun mujhe chor gaeen..

Kia unn ko bhi main achi nahi lagt thi..Kia aapki new AGS itni achi hai k aapko apni old AGS ki kabhi yaad nahi aayi.. May be wo mujh se ziada achi hai..Wo aapke saath hai per main tou aapko chor gayi... (She paused while talking to her self almost screaming with swelled teary eyes)

(She once again screamed).....Kiun...Kiun hamesha ye life mujh se hee exam leti hai...(She again wanted to scream but instead she coughed badly..Now her voice was not coming out due to hurt throat cuz of crying...She was very thirsty but was so weak to go to the kitchen and drink water..) (She tried to get up but her weak legs did not allowed het to do so...after a lot of effort she managed to get up and walked towards kitchen...She filled up a glass of water and took one sip but the glass fell from her hands and broke..She tried to gather up the broken pieces of the glass from the floor but she got hurt by the glass and her hand started bleeding..)

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Thats it fr nw..

Nxt update tomorrow..

Edited by Sohad3fan - 12 years ago

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Finally I m updating it Madhu...

Sorry 4 too late😳

Enjoy!

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Part 1-B

Her hand pained a lot but no one was there to help her...

She tried to reach a drawer in the kitchen which had the first aid things...She got a bandage from there and put it on her wound...

She was broken up totally...The incidents occurred in her life made her a lifeless soul...but still she wanted to take care of herself...It was like somewhere inside her a hope was hidden...She still had a reason to live was what her heart saying...

She did not ate something whole day and went to bed...She was just surviving on water n hope...

Tum kis cheez ki hope karti ho Kriya...(Yes u guessed it right..She is none other than our Kriya)...Kia koi hope baki bhi hai tumhari life may...Kiun...aur kis k liye zinda ho?Kia koi jawab hai tumhare pas....(This was all she thought and dozed off beacuse of the weakness)

Next morning she got up by the sound of knock on the main door...

She opened the door...A kind faced lady was standing there...

Kr: Aunty aap kesi hain??

Lady: Main bilkul theek hoon but tum buhut weak lag rahi ho..

Kr: Oh nahi nahi...Bus aaise hee...aap kub wapis aaeen??

Lady: Main kal hee aayi hoon...

Kr: Aap ne tou 2 months baad aana tha naa...

Lady: Yeah aana tou tha but mera beta idhar aaraha hai..holidays spend karne...Issi liye main wapis aagayi..

Kr: Oh cool...Aur aap andar aaen...

Lady: Nahi beta main tou tumhe bulane aayi thi...Maine socha main bhi akeli hoon aur tum bhi tou kiun naa kathe nashta kiya jaye...

Kr: Nahi aunty iss takaluf ki kia zaroorat thi...

Lady: Tumhe maar khaani hai mere se...Takuaf aur apni behan ki beti k saath aainda kehna bhi mut aaise...

Kr: ...A...Aunty...per..

Lady: Per wer kuch nahi...Chalo... Tumhari maa meri best friend thi bilkul behnon ki tarha...aur tum ho k...Mujhe tumhare andar uss kaa chehra nazar aata hai...Wo tou mujhe chor gayi per tum tou mere saath ho naa...

A tear made its way down her eye..She tried to hide it but it didn't go unnoticed by the lady...

Ummm Kriya chalo naa breakfast thunda ho raha hai...(The kind lady tried to change the topic and the two headed towards her house)

___________________The End for today:)______________________

Hello everyone..

I am turning this OS into a SS because it is getting long...

Also I can not give long updates cuz of burden of studies n lack of time..

I hope you all understand...

Sorry Madhu n I hope you don't mind...

Love u all...

Soha!

Edited by Sohad3fan - 12 years ago

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Kria itna weak feel kar rhi thi
hope she will be fine
n that lady is so kind

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kriapatel
Kria itna weak feel kar rhi thi
hope she will be fine
n that lady is so kind

Yaa she will be fine...

Thanks 4 ur comment...

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing start...
Luvd it...
Nd plzz update nxt part soon...
Thnx 4 de pm

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malificient

@malificient

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

Really good update but yeah kriya ke liye Bahut bura laga😔

As far as ur work is. Concerned I loved it ❤️

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: karanikakrey
Really good update but yeah kriya ke liye Bahut bura laga😔

As far as ur work is. Concerned I loved it ❤️

Thank you so much..😊

I m glad dat u liked it..😳

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