I have read all the chapters in just one go... and have lot of things to share--
1. Normally I hate extra-marital affair or love story of married people (however unhappy they are), so started to read with a negative mind.. but as i was reading, i found a natural flow of events between arnav and khushi and i am really enjoying the story!
2. I was happy initially to see for the first time in IF, an Arshi FF with a different kind of Arnav. Not a rich, powerful, arrogant businessman, but a nomral person like us! Just one humble request, don't make him cry so much (!). Of course, as a writer its your liberty, but i am just expressing my feelings about it. Otherwise, he is a wonderful human being!
3. What is between Arnav and La?? How cum this could be called love? Why he is considering their relationship to be love?? He should pose this question to himself?
4. Khushi's character is amazing! I lover her..
Thats all i could gather from my first reading. Please update soon! And thanks a lot for pm.