Ariya's SS: Humari adhori kahani lst pt pg 30 26-4 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
waooo both part is supub
n full imostional..
nice story plote..
lv priya concern toward her sir..
is priya arjun wife..??
is priya is riya..??
or zayu arjun son...??
lot of q running in my mind update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Third Part:
HUMARI ADHORI KAHANI:

Zayan opens his sees he observes that her Mama is still sleeping, he hugs his mother and kisses on her check, she opens her eyes by touching of his soft lips on her checks.

Zayan: Good Morning mama.

Priya: Good Morning meri jaan.

She stares watch , it's 7: 30 she sits immediately and tie her hair with band and rushes to the bathroom.

After few minute she comes out .

Priya: zay be fast jaan we are already late beta.

Zayan: Mom I am ready, see I already brushes my teeth and take bath , I am also wearing my school dresses.

Priya: how nice you my Zay? You are mama's boy.

Zayan; mama , mera breakfast kahan hai.

Priya: abhi laai..

In dining table Priya feeds zayan by her hand.

Zayan: mama mere exams start honay walay hain.

Priya: mujhe pata hai beta.

Zayan: mama aap buhat aachi ho , I love you mama.

Priya: I love you too beta.

Zayan: mama.

Priya: hummm bolo beta.

Zayan: mama aap meri birthday par bara sa cake lyan gi na.

Priya: ha beta kyun nahi.

Zayan: mama mujhe wo aaisi gun chaheay jaisi in uncle k pass hai. ( he points towards Arjun's picture in newspaper)

Priya: theek hai aapki mama aapko bilkul is uncle jaisi gun la k day gi, ye aapki mama ka aap say promise hai.

Zayan: mama ye uncle kaun hain.

She takes newspaper fromhis hand and start reads.

" ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawate nay ek baar phir India ko terrorist say bacha liya"

Priya: kash aap meri bhi problem aaisay hi solve kar saktay, jaisay sab ki karaty hai", she smiles.

In dehli:

Location: ETF office

Arjun is still lost in his thought and smiling.

Sameer enters in conference room and observes him like this.

Sameer: Arjun sab theek toh hai na, tum muskuta kyun rahay ho.

Arjun ( in dream) : wo muskuratay huway kitni hassen lagti hai na, bus maan karta hai usay dekhta hi jaun.

Sameer: kisay , tum kis ki baat kar rhay ho Arjun?

Arjun jerk his head: mei nahi kisi ki bhi toh nai ( smiles vanished from his face)

Sameer: toh case discuss Karen.

Arjun: ha kyun nahi.

In shimla.

Location: Priya office.

A man looks priya when she enters in the office and then he stares his watch.

Man: Ms Priya aaj aap phir late hain.

Priya: sorry I am really soory, wo zay ki school bus nahi aai thi isiliay mei zay ko school drop karnay gai thi.

Man: aakhir kitni baar tum excuse deti raho gi, mei thak chukka hun tumharay roz roz k excuses say, agay tum late hui toh.

Anu interferes between them.

Anu: toh aap kiya kar lyn gay Mr. Karan Tripathi.

Karan: toh isay fine dena paray ga.

Anu: kaisi fine.

Karan : Ek cup coffee, wo bhi Priya k paison say.

Priya smiles: karan tum bhi har baar mujhe dantay ho, Mei kiya karun har bar late ho jati hun, next time mei late nahi hun gi.

Karan: aacha coffee pilanay say bachna chahti ho.

Priya: nahi karan aaisi baat nahi hai.

Karan: toh chalen.

Priya: itni subha subha coffee.

Karan: Ms. Priya kiya coffee pinay ka koi time table fix hai, k is waqt nahi pi saktay, aur waisay bhi agar aap ghari par nazar dalen toh is waqt 10 baj chukay hain.

Priya: oh sorry , chalen .

Karan : ya ladies first.

Anu: Thanks karan , mujhe laga tum mei manners hi nahi hai.

Karan: toh tum mei kaun say manners hai.

Priya: bus aab tum dono phir say larna shru nahi kar dena.

Karan: tum kehti ho toh isay buksh deta hun.

Anu: ehsan nahi kar rhay ho mujh par.

Priya: anu.

In Dehli:

Location: Dream world , Hotel.

ETF SUV stops infront of a hotel, they all come out from SUV and spread in different directions, and enquiring peoples about someone.

Arjun Say nothing to them.

Shree To Chotu: mujhe ye Arjun sir bilkul nahi pasand.

Chotu: kyun ?

Shree: ab ye humain kisi baat par dantay hi nahi hain, bilkul chup chup rehaty hai, in k sath job hi huwa wo acha nahi huwa.

Chotu: ha yaar.

Sameer Shouted on them: Tum log aaisay hi kharay raho gay ya kuch karo gay bhi.

Shree: yes sir.

Arjun sees here and there and observes the people on street.

A girls comes infront of him and shows him a flower boo key.

Girl: sahib buhat aachay phool hai sahib, aap apni patni k liay lay jao sahib sahib please lay lo sahib mei do din say bhooki hun sahib please sahib lay lo na sahib.

Arjun lost in thought, an female voice echoing in his mind

" nahi mujhe ye phool chaheay , you know ye mere favorite flowers hai"

Girl voice again disturb him.

Girl: sahib.

Arjun: ha.

Girl: sahib lay lo na.

He takes out his valet from his pocket and gives some money to that girl.

Arjun: rakh lo khana kha lena.

Girl: sahib ye phool.

Arjun: mujhe nahi chaheay.

Girl: gives him back his money.

Arjun: kiya huwa.

Girl: maa kehti hai bhaik mang k mat khana.

Arjun: ye mei tumhain apni khushi say day raha hun rakh lo.

Girl: theek hai phir aap bhi ye flowers rakh lyn.

Arjun takes flowers from her and put in the SUV, Sameer sees him.

In Shimla:

Priya enters in her house and turn-on lights.

Zayan runs to her and hugs her. She bend down her knees.

Priya: zay, mama boy .

Zayan: mama mei aap k liay kuch lay k aaya hun.

Priya: kiya beta?

Zayan: pehlay aap apni ankhen band karo.

Priya closes her eyes and Zayan disappears from there.

She opens her eyes to see him, but by hearing zayan voice she closes her eyes again.

Zayan: mama no cheating.

Priya: zay my eyes are closed.

Zayan: ye aap k liay hai mama, ab aap ankhen khol lo.

Priya: wow nice flower , mere liay hai.

Zayan: yes mama ye aap k liay hain.

Priya hugs him: Thanks you so much zay..

Zayan: mama mei nay aap k liay pinto k garden say collect kiya hain.

Priya: wow zay, aap ko pata hai beta ye mere favorite flowers hain.

Zayan: mujhe pata hai mama isliay toh aap k liay laya hun.

Priya: wah mere zay ko sab pata hai.

Zayan: mama .

Priya: ha beta bolo.

Anu enters in her house.

Zayan: Anu maasi aap har waqt yahan kyun aa jati ho mujhe meri mama say kuch important baat karni thi.

Anu: oh ho aap itnay baray ho gay ho k mama say important baat karo.

Zayan: mei aap say baat nahi karun ga.

Anu: zayan lo mei nay apnay kaan band kar liay hai aap apko apni mama say jo kehna hai wok eh saktay ho.

Zayan close to Priya's ear: Mama I love you soo much, Happy Mothers day.

Priya: wow Zay mama love you too .

Anu : ho gai baa tab mei apnay kaano par say hath hatta lun.

Zayan: ha.

Anu: kiya baat thi jo itni important thi.

Zayan: uff ( By putting his plam on his forhead) oo hoo Anu maasi aap kuch nahi samjhti , important baat thi isi liay toh aap k kaan band karwaey thay, phir aap pooch rahi ho k kiya baat thi.

Anu: wow Priya tumhara zayan toh bara ho gaya hai, mujhe lagta hai k aab tumhain is k liay dulhan dhoond lena chaheay.

Zayan: mama maasi kuch nahi samjhti, unhen nahi pata pehaly khoob parhtay hai phir paisay kamatay hai phir shadi hoti hai, aap shadi kyun nahi karti aap nay bhi toh itna parh liya hai, aap k pass itnay paisay bhi hai, aap kar lo na shadi.

Priya: bus zay buhat ho gaya beta buhat bolnay lagay ho.

Zayan: sorry mama ab mei nahi bolun ga.

Priya: mei nay bolnay say mana nahi kiya hai beja bolnay say mana kiya hai.

Anu: janay day na Priya kitni aachi batein karta hai.

Priya: tu isay sir par mat charha.

Zayan: Samjh gai Anu maasi aap ya samjhaun?

Priya shock to hear these words from his mouth:

Priya: Zayan anu maasi tum say baari hai, tum un say is tarha kaisay baat kar saktay ho.

Anu: janay day na Priya.

Priya: nahi Anu is ki himmat kaisay hui tumhain dhamki denay ki.

Zayan starts weaping.

Anu: tu nay rula diya na usay.

Anu: nahi zayan mama nay aap ko danta nahi hai Wo toh aap say buhat pyar karti hai na, chalo good boy ki tarha hans k dekhao.

Zayan smiles and Anu hugs him.

Priya: Chlao zay homework kar lo.

Zayan: ok mama.

He goes to his room to collect his accessories and books .

Anu: priya tujha zay say aaisay baat nahi karni chaheay thi , wo chota hai.

Priya : mei nay jo kiya theek kiya, abhi say usay control nai karun gi toh wo bigar jaey ga, dekha kaisay baat kar raha thaw o tum say.

Anu: Priya please aainda usay aaisay nahi dantna.

Priya: ok .


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nice update.
Is that riya na?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
great update :) loved it
their morning routine is lovely
why is arjun's picture at priya's home?
awww shree doesn't like that arjun is not shouting at them anymore
zayn brought flowers for priya :)
zayn is just too cute
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so its confirmed that Zayan is Arjun's son days why Priya s shocked to hear Arjun's signature dialogue from him... but is Priya Roshini???? solve this mystry soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Thanx for the updates. Every update is really well written. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Dr it is superb update
Zay said samjhai ya samjhao so swttt
Mom son convo very nice dr
Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Priya is Sakshi, roshni or Riya,
Priya is a mystery.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Sorry Sumbal..
first accept my apologies.
read the second and the third part in one go.
it was really beautiful and lovely..
aww...
Zayan is so adorable...
sooo sweeet...
loved both the updates...
pm ke liye thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow,,,
awesome...
zayan iz so cute...
update soon...

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