OS: Albela Rahi Part 2 15/5/13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey:) i have get this idea from watching PEPSI ad! 😛 i even don't know the meaning of Albela Rahi! 😛 well, please give it a read and comment. They literally made my day! 😃 paradon me for its being short!

Short OS: ALBELA RAHI!

Arnav had been to the market at evening and there he saw a bunch of homeless kids playing here and there. Some of them were also begging from the passing by cars while others were selling flowers, or balloons or something like this. These kids were so almost near the age of Aarav, his cute big boy. He felt sad and gloomy for them and decided to do something so that these little innocent souls would enjoy their life, what childhood is made of. He remebered his childhood when he and Di was deprived of their parents and thrown out of the house. He entered home feeling down and Khushi as always realize this but didn't ask him infront of their family but as soon as he reached in room to freshen up she came and gently asked 'What happened Arnavji? Is everything Okay? Is there any problem in office or you are feeling down? Have you eaten anything? Hey DeviMaiya! You wait here, i'll come back with your food' she exclaimed in one breath. Arnav chuckled inwardly suddenly feeling better and hold her wrist in time before she could make an escape. 'I m perfectly alright Khushi and i have taken my medicine on time too. There is something else' he said and his voice lowering on last sentence. She asked worridly 'What arnavji? You can tell me you know! and then Arnav told her about what he witnessed today. She also felt sad but then an idea struck her. 'Arnavji! I have an idea. That would make them feel better definitely! I assure you. But we have to add others too in our plan. Are you ready? after Arnav nodded she told him her million dollar plan and after taking an amused yet encourging nod from her husband she went down and told her family about the plan. They agreed instantly.
Now its fun time! she thought happily and Aarav was thehappiest there while Di , Nani, Mami, Payal, NK and Akash along with Arnav started disscussing about it.



That's it for now. Leave your comment and i'll continue. I decided to write down full but then its loadshedding time! 😆 😭 Isleye gotta go! Love, Rimo! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh! I'm finally on update terms with myself! 😛
sorry for being this late and i really honestly don't remember what i wrote in 1st part and i'm gonna read it again so cope up with this crap please. pretty please.
And this part is dedicated to Maha Khan i.e. Charmz_58 because she told me the meaning of Albela Rahi and i love to be friend with her. 😃

now coming to LAST CHAPTER,

The Whole Raizada family was gathered in the hall the next Sunday's early morning to put their plan in action. They had decided to spend their weekend with them, spreading a little amount of their joyous colorful life in their dull one.
Aarav was the most active among all but how can Khushi and NK leave the competition of having fun. Anjali was doing things as far she could do and her Chotte was definitely helping her out.
They all headed toward the destination very early in 2 cars, ASR driving his SUV with Khushi and Aarav whereas Anjali, Nani and Mami was in other car with NK, after putting everything in.
They reached the pavement at 7 in morning where these children were up due to the cold weather at dawn.
---Children's POV-----
They were shocked to see 2 cars stopping in front of them, to be precise big cars with wealthy people.
Everyone get down from the car and neared the Children.
Children were watching them a bewildered expression on their face.
Their scared expression changed into shocked to happiness within span of seconds as they saw 2 beautiful women one in expensive saree and other in Anarkali suit opening break fast tifins in front of them.
Shockingly, they all had breakfast together while a little guy of their age making introduction of him as Aarav and his family while their introductions too.
Then the sweet Uncle named NK along aunty named Khushi opened the colouring books and boxes and they all enjoyed doing it except another uncle Arnav, who was busily watching them without getting involved.
They all had then goes to near by park.
The children were about 8-9 in count and they enjoyed being with someone to spend their time with.
Coming from different families and different places they have became good friends of each other and they also get well with each and every person except that Arnav Uncle. He was smiling but he was reserved. They all noticed but they didn't give heed to him as they have very very loving family. Even the Manorma Dadi, as told by their new found friend Aarav is also nice but funny.
They end the day on eating ice-cream in evening where people were giving them odd glances.
In the end, something happens that the Children hadn't expected.
A wagon came and Arnav Uncle( again) talked to them and they asked them to get in.
'Was this a trap to kidnap us?' said 5 year old Sara among them.
No! Anjali aunty explained her that they are going to get a better living with studies and one day they will achieve everything they want and make their parents proud.
Because they were goig to live in 'spreading life' named orphanage founded by the sweet and nicest family on the fae of earth.
Hence, they waved them good bye with a promise of meeting on every possible occasion.


A/N: This is crap and i know it😕 but please give it a read and tell me what should i do!!
looking forward to your comments.
Love, Rimo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue soon its an amazing idea!!👏
loved it❤️
plz pm me the nxt part🤗
p.s. albela rahi means the person who is happy in life n lives it to the fullest n brings happiness in others life n is a bit crazy(u can take the example of khushi) n albela is what i just said n rahi means musafer,a traveller...
p.p.s.i hoped it helped
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice !!
Plan kya hai KKGSR ka ?
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww let me guess she must have come with brilliant plan right
of course she would do
man this is cute
cant wait for next bit
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for reading. and part 2 is updated on pg 1! give it a read!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really thought u forgot about ur stories 😆
Thank god u continued and aww...its a sweet update
Love it !!
U really do write hatke and totally unique ... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dont worry guys arnav uncle is like that only
but the man means well and cares for others
even if he dont want to show others of this side of him
bless that was nice thing to do
and the best thing to do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was sooo lovely
Thnku sooo much for dedicating it to me
N I also just luvvv to be your frnd!!

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