Virika FF:Friend Wala Pathi#2 Ch30 PartA:B PG96,97

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Hello sweet readers... I welcome u all to my next thread of FWP.👏

I've been writing many OS's,FF's, SS's but this is the first time, i had to create a new thread, all thanks to u spammers [Sara,Ashna,Karina,Marzi, Charu,Amrita,Aaliya, candyvirika, nd everyone]😆⭐️Firstly i thought of writing this as a short story, end up within a few chapters, but now ur comments changed my mind for turning this up into an FF👏[Warna... u ppl will defo murder me? right] Thank you guys for reading my crazy updates , torturing me to 'Update Soon' , and making me in a trance reading it😃 U guys are really mad to read my dumb updates.😉
INDEX
Chapter:25:Pg1
Chapter:26:Pg13
Chapter:27:Pg23
Chapter:28: Pg.41
Chapter:29:Pg82
Chapter:30 Part A: Pg 96 Part B : Pg 97
-Navya-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hehe...m i the 1st one ? Yipeee
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*UNRES*

New thread for one of my all-time favorite stories!!!
Congratulations Navya darling!
Be ready to be spammed like crazy on this new thread of yours! 😆
You know how greedy we all are for your ideas ❤️
And as expected, this update also just flawless!!!!
Like writing to such perfect, I do not know how you do it!
The way you have such strong characterizations of Viren and Jeevika gets me so excited!
Their love yet their hatred, is just always in the perfect dose!

Thank You so much ❤️
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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i hate you 😡
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i love u too <3
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congrats navz for the new thread...& dare to say the updates dumb :P
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*UNRESERVE*

awesome👏
aww jeevs actually thought she was pregant leaving viren confused y every1 he talked abt the mood swing, called i kamina or idiot
finally they got some time on the terrace for the night n a little in the morning ith viren carryig jeevs to the room n she doesn't want to let him go, she misses him already n they keep on fighting :)

Thnx for the pm


Edited by romanticgurl070 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I HATE EVERYONE FOR BEING BEFORE ME!!!
LET ME DO SOME DANCE FIRST!
I know I kno I am not the first but I'm Not the last even! 😆
CONGRATS NAVZZ FOR THE NEW THREAD !
THE UPDATE WAS ZOOO LONG AND I LOVED IT TO THE CORE!


The bunglow of Priya was messed up with 20-25 people. They were usual gossiping, chit-chats, and our sweet couples was scattered between all this mess, not able to spend time with each other.
Why is it so that they have so much of traffic jam? Can't they give some privacy to our couple? 😡
The scene now shifts to the dining hall, where everyone are scattered around to have dinner. Priya asusual was secretly texting Sanjay, meanwhile Viren had an unsual evil smile on Jeevika...
haha boyyy he has some planss.. 😉
She looked at him bemused. She was really pissed off, because he was continuously keeping on smiling at her, during the entire session. Afterwards she gathered the plates and went to kitchen and here our prankster followed her without anyone letting know.


''Any help , sweety?'' asked Viren still with an evil smile...
''I know ur intention, so please back off, I really don't have time for u!'' replied Jeevika without facing him.
She now him so well! His intentions are clear to her! 🤣
''U always have time to stalk what i'm doing, but u don't have time to talk with me'' murmed Viren.
Jeevika faced him angrily with washing soap foam in her hand.
''Excuse me? Are u calling me as a ''stalker? Since when did i start stalking in ur matters?''
Viren came closer to her, whispered in her ear, making her heart pound.
''U know what, i really understood the reason behind ur daily mood-swings.''
He doesn't know what sense his sentence is making! 😆
She looked up at him in astonishment, suddenly caught her stomach, understanding what he meant.
Viren: i know ur... PREGNANT! (I wished) 😛
Jeevika: [interjected] No... I'm not. How can this happen? We never... Did something 😆
Viren: Its not ''we'', its you, whose behind this! [smirked Viren]
Jeevika: [thinking] God? When did this happen? [she started to recall all those moments with Viren, suddenly her mind automatically flashed out to the previous day, where she was leaving for Chandigarh, he was on top of her and... she was out of thoughts when Viren moved his hands]
Oh MY GOODNESS!
haha is she actually recalling all the moments she spent with him?
HILARIOUS!

Viren: Any problem?
Jeevika: [stuutered] No! This can't happen, i mean so early!
Viren: It has happened now... ur officially...
Jeevika: No i'm not...
Viren: Yes ur...
Jeevika: Shut up [she started shivering]
Viren: Ur jealous...
Jeevika's jaw-dropped hearing this, she gasped and sighed.
Viren: Whenever any girl talks with me, u tend to become jealous, why is that so?
Jeevika:[rolled her eyes] Viren, are u seriously insane? Back-off IDIOT!
Jeevika no need of hiding it from us, HUM TO GHAR K HI HAI! We kno you are jealous! 😛
Viren looked at her going.
''When i tried to discuss this with Aunty, she refered me as ''Kamina'' now Jeevika is calling me as an ''Idiot'' Are these people seriously over-thinking about something? Or am i over-thinking?'' Baby the reason is that you don't know what they are thinking! 🤣 😳
He went to their room and was taken aback to see a bunch of oldies sleeping in his room. He came inside and tried to find a place to sleep ,irritated. The whole night, he was unable to sleep because of the unsual snores of these people, some of them snored like a lorry, while others had their own ways of snoring. Viren threw his pillow and talked to himself...
''What am i doing, between this traffic-jam?'' RUNN TO YOUR WIFEY! 😆
He went to the terrace, and was surprised to see Jeevika drinking coffee. He went near.
Viren: Bored?
Jeevika: Ya... i really don't know why...
Viren: Jealous?
Jeevika: [glared at him] Viren? Why should i be jealous? Because you love him the most in the world and you are insecure sometimes! 😳
Viren: [sat near her] cz u can't bear to see me with anyone, inshort ur possesive about me!
Jeevika:NO
Viren: Yes, u should really learn from me, even if any guy talks with u, i'm sure i won't be jealous.
Jeevika: Is it?
Viren: Ofcourse.. Do u wanna see?
Jeevika: Ofcourse, i need too. But Viren, don't u think, we are fighting alot these days, i don't know why , eventhough ur here, i'm really missing u...
Viren: In saari logon ki chakkar mein, humari band baj gayi... [extended his hands around her shoulder, meanwhile Jeevika rested on his shoulder] Awww moment! 😳
Jeevika: U remember how fun it was when we used to be in Delhi! I miss those days...
Viren: Then we'll go back... Run back I miss them too!
Jeevika: No...marriage is next week, we have to be here, but i'm still happy cz ur always there with me! [she kissed him on his cheek] I love u! BLUSH 😳
They kept on talking, finally both slept. Next day Viren woke up, she was still sleeping in his arms. He tucked the strands of her hair and looked at her admiringly. Finally he carried her in his arms.
I seriously wished I was in her place! 😳
BL and Jasleen witnessed this.
Jasleen: How caring is Viren, Jeevika is so lucky!
BL: Ur right, munda toh bahut pyaara hai!
WE KNO BL that he is the best! 😉
He went her room and layed her down on the bed, he smiled at her and was about to go, just then she stopped him by holding his hand.
Jeevika: Kaha ja rahe ho? Please don't go!
Viren: [surprised, sat beside her] It's morning now...
Jeevika: So, i want u to be with me always... I can't miss u Virenji! I love it when sometimes she says Viren Ji...
He looked at her and hugged her tightly, she too hugged him back. He kissed her in her forehead. ''I'll be always there with u, in every problems and every happiness. I'll never let u alone.''
Jeevika: Promise?
Viren: Promise!
Jeevika: Even if those girls...
He looked up at her : Jeevika, are those girls more important to me than u? They are just admiring my looks, afterall ur husband is so handsome right... [winked at her]
Jeevika was blushing really hard. She held his hands and said ''If those silly girls come around u , thn i'll murder them into pieces''
Viren started laughing, they both started to laugh!
Viren: Jeevika, ur the most craziest person i've ever met. Talking with u, just wipes away my sorrows even if i'm in admist of any problems. U'll be always my special person.
Jeevika: And u're more than a friend to me!
He cupped her face, she closed her eyes, he gave a sweet peck on her lips.
Finally atleast a kiss! 😳
They both got ready. Jeevika was busy helping everyone. Viren was trying to do his works on laptop. He got an idea, he took his guitar and went on terrace. Jeevika was playing with kids.
Viren: Atleast we can have our own tym here?
Jeevika: No... [pointed him to the kids]
He just slapped his forehead, went near him and whispered something in their ears. Within no time, the whole children left the place.
Jeevika: [astonished] What did u tell them?
Viren: I just said them that if they 'll give some privacy for me and u, then i'll definetly play cricket with them... HE is greedy! 😆
Jeevika: [giggled] Viren... ur so...
He held her by her wrist and pulled her closer. There was no distance between them.
Jeevika: What now?
Viren: Song!
Jeevika: Me?
Viren: U sings well right...
She took off his hands and gave him a backhug!
THIS SONG IS SOOO BEAUTIFUL! 😳
''Main vaari jaawa, main vaari jaawa
Saathon ki ho ya bin kasoor re''
She came forward and encircled both her hands arounds his shoulder.
''Main vaari jaawa, main vaari jaawa
Dil toh hoya majboor
Main vaari jaawa, main vaari jaawa''

She was about to go but he held her closer and smiled at her...

''Choo liya tune labh se aankhon ko
Mannatein poori tumse hi
Tu mile jahaan, mera jahaan hai wahan
Raunake saari tumse hi''

He carried her in his arms and sang...

''Tu mile jahaan, mera jahaan hai wahan
Raunake saari tumse hi
Ho choo liya tune labh se aankhon ko
Mannatein poori tumse hi
Tu mile jahaan, mera jahaan hai wahan
Raunake saari tumse hi

Piya o re piya, piya re piya re piya ''
He encircled her, she hugged him tightly...
Viren: How was it?
Priya called out Jeevika,
Do you really need to disturb her now? 😡
viren gave her a disappointed look, she smiled at him and tweaked both of his cheeks smiling. Priya came to the terrace this time.

Priya: Oh, both of u were here, sorry for the trouble guys... Jeevs... can u tell me which of these two sarees will suit me the most? Since ur my bestie, u'll be able to identify right.

Viren sighed, she went near her and helped her... Meanwhile he took his guitar and sang..
''Inn dooriyon ne, nazdeekiyon se, sauda koi kar liya
Ho jhuk ke nighaahon ne, dil se ishq ka vaada koi kar liya''

She smiled at him, he went to the main hall. After a while, he saw Jeevika coming, he stopped her and pinned her to a pillar.

Viren: Don't u think we'll never ever get time to spend together? I think the same.. 😡
Jeevika: Not before this marriage!
Viren: But i'll definetly do before that!
Jeevika: Viren, are u silly? Do u know how many people are here?
Viren: What if i send each of them somewhere, so that u nd me can talk alot!
Jeevika: No way u can!
Viren: Yes I can! Deal?
Jeevika: Ok, if u win, i'll do whatever u asks me to do! Yeah! You'll pay for this baby 😉
Viren: [smirked at her] Sure?
Jeevika: 100% [with confidence]
Just then the sound of car made everyone get out of the house. Priya, Riya and Manvi screamed louder :''Yuvraj, is that u???''
Viren looked at Jeevika with suspicion, she peeped out and said : ''Yuvraj? But how come?''
Just then Priya called out Jeevika, she went and totally flabbergasted to see Yuvraj there, [her best friend in college]. She screamed loudly, making everyone cover their ears.
Jeevika: U idiot? Are u nuts? When did u ... Ur just a big FREAK!
Yuvraj: Anything for u!
Jeevika: Long time , stupid!
Yuvraj: Ofcourse... but if u're done with ur tantrums... can i just hug u!
Jeevika: [punched him on his chest] Ur such a ... [both shared a hug]
Meanwhile our hero eyed both of them mischievously, leaning on a pillar.
''Guess, this guy, is totally gonna create problems in my life!!!"
IF HE DID I'LL COME TO CHANDIGARH TO MURDER HIM LITERALLY! 😡

Superb update Navzzz I love it to the core!
Continue it ASAP please...
You better update before I start to spam you! 😆
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firatly congrats on the 2nd thread
The update was terrific
cute+romantic
song wala part was amazing
And my favorite the terrace and Morning scene
It was beautiful
The beginning was where Jeevika thinks that she is Pregnant 😆
I've read this update like 3-4 times
Tremendous work
cont soon
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago

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