taarey: the flame of love ch 11 pg 60 updtd

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hi today i was reading a novel and i thought that why rey has to be the best friend of sharon and swayam in every story why there can't be some other relation between them and why always swayam have to be taani's cousin or brother so i am writing a new story i hope you will like it

Character sketch
Reyansh Rizada:
known as the heartbreaker is 27 years old his friends call him rey and is a richest businessman he is known for his dance passion he owns 15 dance academies all over the world he is quite handsome and every girls dream but he is really arrogant and does not listen to anyone and does what he wants he is not interested in any girl but is in a relationship with sharon and his friends are abhi, vicky(i like vicky as rey's friend) and karan
Taani Khurana:
She is the daughter of a well known businessman but after the death of her mother his father lose all hope and started gambling and drinking and he lost all his possession in gambling except a house taani is a very sweet and innocent girl but she can be rigid when the time demands it she has learned something from his father to never back down from your promise she loves dancing she knows the dance forms like kathak, hip hop, contemporary, classical, and freestyle. she is a very good dancer best friend with swayam and know that he love sharon
Sharon Kapoor:
she is the daughter of a rich businessman (but less than rey) she is arrogant and very beautiful every guy wants to marry her but she loves reyansh deeply she can do anything for him. she also loves dance. sharon has a brother abhi who is rey's friend thats how she was introduced to rey

Swayam shekhawat:
he is the lover boy of sharon and can do anything for sharon is best friend with taani loves to dance hates reyansh rizada
Promo
Taani's father lose taani and the house in a gamble and commit suicide. swayam asks taani to marry him as soon as possible because the person to which his father has lost her is not a good person and is characterless.
who is the person to whom owns taani know and know what will taani do will she accept the proposal of swayam or will she go with that characterless person
please guys comment if u like it if not then i will not continue it
Chapter 1

Taani father was gambling in the gambling club and he lost all the money he had. He was about to leave that club when he heard a voice saying

New person: why doesn't u gamble with me maybe u will be able to get all that

Taani's dad: I donot have anything left

New person: of course u has ur house u can gamble with that

Taani's dad: felt sure that he will win this game so he said fine

New person: ok than let's start

Taani's dad again loose the gamble but he could not except his defeat this time so

Taani's dad: I will play again

New person: but now u have nothing left to give

Taani's dad: yes I have my daughter

New person: what will I have to do with ur daughter

Taani's dad: her grandfather deposited 50 lacs and for her which she will get after marriage

New person: ok r u sure if u loose u will lose ur daughter

Taani's dad: I will not lose so u don't worry

But taani's dad lost that game also and now the world was finished for him he could not believe that he gave his daughter to some stranger he was not himself he went far away from there he wanted to die so he took a pistol and shoot himself in the guilt

The person whom he won the house and taani was Reyansah Rizada

When swayam find out about that incident he immediately went to khurana manson and asked taani to marry him

Swayam: taani u don't know that person he is known as heart breaker he does not care for any one so please marry me

Taani: swayam I cant marry someone I do not love and u also do not love me

Swayam: I know but that's the only way I can save ur life from that characterless person

Taai: I know that u love Sharon will u be able to give up her I take u as a very good friend

Swayam: but taani

Taani cut swayam in between and said that papa had taught me something that never back down from ur words so I will wait for what is coming for me I will not back down

On the other hand rey's friends were teasing him may be the daughter he had won is 60 year old lady and maybe she does not have teeth and he does not even know that how much ugly she looks

It was 2 in the night when rey decided to go to Khurana manson but his friends protested that it's too late they might be sleeping but rey did not listen to anyone and said whoever want to come with me can join me otherwise he is going alone

Everyone followed rey because they wanted to see that lady whomrey had won

The bell of khurana mansion ring but no body ansered it so rey kept his hand on the door bell and the bell kept on ringing after sometime an old man opened the door and looked at rey with a questioning look

Rey spoke rudly I am the new owner of khurana mansion go and tell ur madam that I am here

After 15 minutes an old lady of above 55 entered and everyone started laughing but when she moved a side beside her an angle was standing and everyone mouth was closed by her beauty she looked so lovely and young she moved forwad and looked at every one of them and said Mr Reyansh Rizada

Rey: yes that's me rey was stunt seeing her like his friends he had also expected a women of 60

Taani: hi I am taani khurana

Promo

Rey takes taani with him to his house and the first business party that taani will attend

Please guys comment if you do not comment than I will think that you do not like this story and I will not write further

Chapter 2

Rey: we r sorry to disturbed u at that time of that night we should leave I will come tomorrow we need to talk about your future

Taani nod and rey and his friends left

In the morning after breakfast taani was waiting for rey around 12 in afternoon rey came

Rey: hi miss khurana

Taani: please u can call me taani

Rey: smiled and said ok ab hamay kam ke baat kerni cahiye sine u r my responsibility now so u cannot stay here

Taani almost panicked she does not want to leave that house she loves that house in this house us ke buchpan ke us ke mama papa ke yaday hai she said no she want to stay here in her house

Rey raised his eyebrow and said that now this house including her belong to him so she will have do what he says

Taani with a sad expression said ok

Rey: why do u want to stay here don't worry rizada manson is more bigger and beautiful than khurana manson

Taani : with proudness replied that no house can be beautiful than her house

Rey smiled and said that be ready by 4 he will come and pick her up and her maid will with her because she cannot live alone with a bachelor and said that the made will go in separate car and she will go with him

Taani replied ok she will be ready

Taani was ready around 3:50 and rey came to pick her up at 4:10

Taani and rey were on the way to dehli (khurana manson is in Mumbai and rizada in dehli)

On the way home rey tried to talk to taani but taani avoided him because she was sad about leaving her home and does not wanted to talk to anyone

When they reached rizada manson taani was introduced to rey's mom rey's mom attitude towar taani was rude and she(rey mom) asks rey that shewant to talk to rey alone

Rey mom: rey what is this who is that girl and what is she doing here

Rey tells his mom everything and rey mom felt relaxed because she does not want rey to get married

Rey mom: do u want to marry her

Rey: no u know very well that I do not want to marry any one

Rey mom: than we should find someone for her and get her married

Rey: ok whatever u want u can do and lefts

A business party was arranged because rey was in delhi and this way taani can be introduced to people and this can help in finding a husband for taani

Party started but Taani was really confused and she fees really when she saw a figure coming whom she know very well rey was watching taani expression

When taani could see swayam clearly with Sharon, abhi and rey's other friend the rey's friend and Sharon move toward rey but swayam cames and hug taani taani too hug him back that make rey jealous

Promo

Taani find a secret door(that door contains the biggest secret of rizada family) in rizada manson and rey sees taani dancing for the first time

please comment should i continue

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Chapter 1 & 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept! Well. quite confusing! Continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept but tell me plz one thing that taani sirf rey ki hai na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: taareylove

nice concept but tell me plz one thing that taani sirf rey ki hai na

for that u will have to wait i dont knew may be or may be not
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: flicka

for that u will have to wait i dont knew may be or may be not


NoNO.. She mean ki TR story hi hain na.. I mean at the end..Taarey r going to b together na??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Curvmars


NoNO.. She mean ki TR story hi hain na.. I mean at the end..Taarey r going to b together na??


of course taarey story hi hai (when i am a taarey fan how can i write about something else😉) so don't worry taarey will be together in the ending
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Originally posted by: Curvmars


NoNO.. She mean ki TR story hi hain na.. I mean at the end..Taarey r going to b together na??


ishu tum mujhe kitna samajhti ho

@ flicka -- yaa thnaks for that ki taani sirf rey ki hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg gr8 cncept update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hai ya.just amazing concept, i m lovng it..add me as ur buddy and pm me when updatd...wow u mesd up wit original characters, i lovd dis concept.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome concept, lovely CS and promo plz continue soon

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