TR-TUJHE BHULA DIYA(updated CHAP-12-pg127) - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taareylove

😭


it's really emotional plz krishna ji kare taani ko kuch na hoye


PLZ STOP CRYING DEAR ,
PLZ SORRY 2 MAKE U CRY ,
KRISHNA JI HAMESHA SABKI WISHES PURI KARTE HAIN ,
AND HOPEFULLY SHAYAD ISBAAR BHI HEARTY WISH PURI KARDE

UPDATE KE LIYE AAPSABKO SMILE KARNA HOGA ,OK😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shriya_taarey

really nice one m really very sorry for late comment but i had exams so ...pls frgv me
upd soon cant see rey like dis...pls usko uski taani wapas dila do


IT'S OK DEAR , I CAN UNDERSTAND ,
I WILL UPDATE ASAP ,TILL THEN LET'S HOPE D BEST 4 THEM

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

wow nice it was damm emotional

u bring treas in my eye n per-cape
is scary thanks for PM n do put nxt prt
soon n yeah do PM me again kkk


THANK U SO MUCH DEAR 4 YOUR PRECIOUS COMMENT
SORRY PLZ ,SACCHI SORRY 2 MAKE U CRY
IF U WANT UPDATE THEN U HAVE 2 SMILE OK😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm yaar 😛rey ke ashoo kitne bahte hai story or d3 dono mein n atlest rey ko story mein hi sahi realize toh hua usne taani ko heart kiya 😆😉 oh god taani *scream* nhi nhi yeh nhi ho sakta plz jaldi update krna 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG so sorry Chinu yaar muje bahut bura lag raha hai yeh next update tumne muje dedicate ki but ma hi last ma comment kar rahi hu I AM SO SORRY YAAR 😔 But u know na mere exmas chal rahi hai so sorry and your update was really awsome yaar loved it alottt and thanks for the update pleasee ab jaldi se chap-3 be update kardo mere lia😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lavi_taarey

awsm yaar 😛rey ke ashoo kitne bahte hai story or d3 dono mein n atlest rey ko story mein hi sahi realize toh hua usne taani ko heart kiya 😆😉 oh god taani *scream* nhi nhi yeh nhi ho sakta plz jaldi update krna 😭


😆😆😆 very funny ,
ya at least he realized
ok my dear friend i will update very soon
thanks 4 this sweet comment 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ria_Taareyfan

OMG so sorry Chinu yaar muje bahut bura lag raha hai yeh next update tumne muje dedicate ki but ma hi last ma comment kar rahi hu I AM SO SORRY YAAR 😔 But u know na mere exmas chal rahi hai so sorry and your update was really awsome yaar loved it alottt and thanks for the update pleasee ab jaldi se chap-3 be update kardo mere lia😉😉


EXACTLY , I WAS BEING SO ANGRY ON U SANA , MAINE YEH ESPECIALLY AAPKE LIYE JALDI UPDATE KIYA , AND AAP HI NE ITNA LATE READ AND COMMENT KIYA VERY BADDD , HMMM,
😆😆
😆DON'T WORRY , JOKING YAAR, IT'S OK DEAR I UNDERSTAND ,😛
THANK U AND I AM HAPPY THAT U LIKED MY UPDATE
OK DEAR I WILL UPDATE ASAP ,😊😊😊
Edited by chinudolly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ue welcum n update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry my dear friends , i am making u cry by my story , i seriously don't want that but i also can't help it as i am writing this story from a painful heart and as i told u that this will be an emotional story but plz keep smiling my sweet dear friends and ,


thank u all so much 4 your support and precious comments , but plz continue your support in future also if u really want my updates as
your comments and great support encourage me a lot and also force me 2 update fast


and i also don't want taani 2 die not even in my story😉ok
so anything can happen but not her death ,
so smile and cheer up now 😃


oyee hello kahan ja raha ho update nahi chahiye kya , to chalo scroll down 2 next post, and

do like and comment from your sweet little heart
nahi to no update ok 😊
Edited by chinudolly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tujhe bhula diya
chapter 3

they r rushing d car
all crying , and shocked , unable 2 think , they want it 2 be a worst dream but unfortunately it was a truth and not a dream,
they have 2 face it even if they don't want 2 , they want 2 erase and remove d last day from their life which has almost broke them ,
sharon also had 2 use inhalers a no. of times due 2 tension , crying , guilt , fear of losing someone , but simmi take care of her health and give her inhaler , water whenever needed
because swayam ko na us waqt kuch samajh aaraha tha na hi vo kuch bol raha tha , sirf ro raha tha , guilt se , apni behan ko khone ke fear se , usko sirf aur sirf apni behan hi dikh rahi thi , usko sirf uski chinta ho rahi thi ,
rey bhi sirf ro raha tha taani ki diary , uske ehsaas ko apne dil se lagaye , ankho main uske pyaar ke aansoo bhare hue the ,
but other boys ki aankho main bhi aansoo bhare the par unke mind main bahut saare questions , aur confusions bhi the ,, unko ye samajh nahi aaraha tha ki ye sab hua kaise , aur taani ko goli lagi kaise aur kisne maari usko goli , aur kyun par insabse zyada unko uski chinta ho rahi thi
jabtak taani thode hosh main ambulance main thi tab tak uski aankho ke aage sirf uski uski life ki kuch meethi aur khatti yaadein , kuch acchhi to kuch buri yaadein , hi ek film ki tarah chal rahi thi , par vo bhi zyada der nahi ruki , kyunki goli ki vajaah se jaldi hi vo bilkul faint ho gayi , apni yaadein ko dil main basaye , un yaadon ko phirse jeene ki chah mein ,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCpiAdtk3WQ

the gang reach d hospital , and at d same time taani in d ambulance also reached followed by a police jeep , they take taani on d stretcher inside d hospital and reyam was holding taani's hands on either sides , crying and calling her name again and again ,
rey(sobbing , crying and stammering in between )- taanniii , mmuujhhe maaf kardo , i love u taani , mmmainn tumhare bina marr jaongaa plz tannnii i love u the most
swayam (also crying badly , )- taani tum to meri har baat maante ho na , ekk baar apne bhaii ko maaf kar do plz , dekho kabhii phir kabbhhii tumhe hurt nahi karunga na hi kabhi kisi ko karne dunga , plzz jaldi uthoo , plzz mere liye , apne bhai ke liye

taani is taken 2 the operation theater , and nurse stopped the gang and asked them 2 stay outside ,
rey was standing like a statue crying outside d OT and watching her with teary eyes through d glass of d door
he was also standing near d OT door
and police comes and asks swayam what is his relation with taani
swayam (crying and stammering) - cousin bhai hun main uska ,(goes 2 OT AND speaks while seeing taani through d glass of ot door )
par rakhi bandhti hai vo mujhe par maine us rakhi ka farz nahi nibhaya , main uski raksha nahi kar paya , i am sorry taani plz mujhe maaf kar dena , par aage se jaisa tum chahoge vaisa hi hoga ,tum bas jaldi se thik hoke ghar aajao ,
and then swayam hug rey tightly - taani ko kuch nahi hoga na ,
rey- crying - nahi ,ussse kuch nahi ho sakta , hum aur uske krishna ji usse kuch hone hi nahi denge and then they broke d hug
rey turns 2 d police - par ye sab hua kaise
inspector- par aap kaun
sw- ye uska boyfriend hai aur usse bahut pyaar karta hai and (pointing 2 d gang) ye sab bhi hamare friends hain
inspector-told swayam , rey and gang everything that how taani saved a little boy putting her life in danger
and swayam and rey was angry 2 d zenith and wanna kill that kidnapper
rey in a loud crying angry voice ) - to aap log kya kar rahe the , aapka to kaam hota hai na citizens ko protect karna , aur usne to aap hi ki help ki , to aapko bhi to apni duty thik se karni chahiye thi , aur jald se jald vahan pahunchna chahiye tha
sw - bilkul thik keh raha hai ye , meri behan ne sirf aapki help , ek little boy ki life save ki par return main usse kya mila ,
us kidnapper ko zyada zyada saza milni chahiye , infact he should be hang till death jiski vajah se meri behan aaj is haalat main hai ,
rey- agar taani ko kuch bhi hua na , to na to vo kidnapper bachega aur nahi aap log ,
inspector - dekhiye aap hamein hamari duty mat sikhayiye , and kidnapper arrest ho chuka hai ,main aapki haalat samajh sakta hun , main chalta hun , doc ke aate hi mujhe inform kar dijiyega ,
rey (still crying) again goes and sees taani through d glass of d door struggling every second 4 life ,drips on her both hands , oxygen mask and doctors trying to control her bleeding from d forehead ,
( sorry unable 2 get better song or video)but do listen this song i loved it a lot
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Du8BO6B24PU
rey ke dil ki heartbeats already bahut zyada fast chal rahi thi , vo taani ka dard bilkul dekh nahi paa raha tha , uska heart , uska soul sab vo dard mehsoos karke ro raha tha ,
usse apni taani ki har choti choti baat yaad aa rahi thi , uska mukurana , uski masti , uska pyaar , taani rey ka aur rey taani ka unforgettable , indifferent , part tha , hai aur hamesha rahegi , they both r one soul and 2 bodies ,
vo ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte the vo khud bhi nahi jante the , shayad infinite ,
misunderstandings hoti , nok- jhok hoti , fights hoti but unmein bhi unka pyaar hi hota tha
and swayam sits crying holding his face in his hands , everyone trying 2 calm reyam by saying - taani ko kuch nahi hoga , vo bilkul thik ho jayegi , usse kuch nahi ho sakta ,
uske krishna ji usse bachaenge,
just then doc comes and says - uski bleeding nahi ruk rahi hai , abhi kuch kaha nahi jasakta , lekin hamein 2 bottles B+ blood chahiye hoga aur vo bhi jaldi varna hamein bacha nahi payenge ,
rey shouts - what do u mean bacha nahi payenge( holds doc's collar in anger)- dekhiye agar taani ko kuch bhi hua to meri death ke liye bhi aap hi responsible honge , samjha
gang asks and somehow manages rey 2 leave doc's collar ,
doc- dekhiye hum apni puri koshish kar rahe hain , par aap bhi god se pray karte rahiye ,
she needs a lots of prayers and blessings as well ,
plz arrange 4 d blood fast
swayam - doc mera blood B+ hai , aap mera blood le sakte hain ,
doc- thik hai , aap mere sath chaliye kuch tests , ke liye , if tests r ok then we will take your blood and he goes with doc 4 some tests and then 2 give blood ,

and rey was crying more , sobbing and folding hands and saying - plz taani ke krishna ji
plz taani ko bacha lo , plz krishna ji usse bacha lo , main uske bina nahi jee sakta , plz
i promise main aage se usse kabhi bhi hurt nahi karunga , nahi kabhi usse akela chodunga ,pakka promise , bas aap usse bacha lijiye

precap - don't know but not taani's death
so smile and don't worry ok😊😊

DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM YOUR SWEET LITTLE HEART 4 NEXT UPDATE


Edited by chinudolly - 13 years ago

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