TAAREY ff 'lost and lonely' on present track

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hie... guys this is not my first ff on taarey actually meri id mein kuch problem aa gyi thi so mujhe id change krni padi...
######INDEX######
chapter 1:page 1
chapter 2:page 3
bdw i here with new taarey ff...guys this ff made by me is based on the present track
~~~~~~~LOST AND LONELY~~~~~~~
~~~~~~CHAPTER 1:~~~~~~
{r-rey...t-taani...s-swayam...sh-sharon}
R- par tumne mujhe bataya kyun nai ki sharon ne khud resign kiya hai??
T-coz mujhe lga ki aapki best friend ne aapko khud hi bta diya hoga
R-wow!! na meri best friend ne mujhe kuch bataya na hi meri gf ne
T-sorry rey...but in fact achcha hi hua jo maine aapko nai bataya...at least mujhe yeh to pta chal gya ki aap mujhe kitna easily misunderstand kar skte hai
{taani picks up her bag and starts to go but suddenly she is stopped by a voice}
R-nai taani baat itni badi bhi nai hai...
T-sahi kha rey baat itni nai bht bdi hai...jaiye rey aapke friends aapka wait kr rhe honge aap apna time yahan kyun waste kr rhe hain..??
R- taani tum pls aise mat bolo tum mujhe hurt kr rhi ho
T-{she smiles painfully}hunh...hurt...aapne toh abhi tak is word ko mehsus bhi nai kiya rey...aur aap toh shayd iska matlab bhi nai jaante{and then she leaves}
{taani decides to go to home because she feels very uneasy at the college...she was just on the way to get out of the college but the gang stopped her}
V-excuse me taani!!
N- wait !! wait wait ...not just taani yaar vickey .she's ms. GS
B- teri himmat bhi kaise hui sharon ko CS ki post se hatane ki?? haan
Am- haan tum hoti kaun ho usko nikalne waali
N- yaa neha agrees...taani doing so u must not!
Si- jo bhi tumne kiya hai na bht galat kiya hai taani... u will have to pay for it...
Ri- taani humein nai pta tha ki tum apni bhadas is tareeke se nikalogi...i ditched us
AS- haan tumhe yeh types nai krna chahiye tha...swayam ko kitna bura types lga hoga...
{and swayam reaches the scene where every1 was busy blaming taani for everything ...he sees towards her but then ignores...and yes she notices that gaze...and she feels like crying hell out but then hid her emotions...and she wanted to prove them that she had done nothing which was wrong}
S- guys yaar let's go...y d hell r u pple wasting ur tym over here.humein kal ke event ke liye practice bhi toh krni hai... chalo yeh sab faltu ke kaamon mein dhyan mat do guys
{taani was shocked at the first instance but then after a while she made herself understand that yes his bhai has changed...the "so called possessive bhai of her's was no longer her's now"she felt so lost and lonely even when she was surrounded by so many pple around her...she couldn't help it...she felt it every time she thought she was living ...and again she prepared herself to give out the answers of questions asked to her by her "so called friends"(enemies are better than so-called friendz)and she once again gave the same painfull ,hurt,irritated smile to them}
T- yaa guys y d hell r u pple wasting ur time with a nobody,a non dancer, and most of all y r u wasting ur time on person whom u don't even consider ur friend ...{again she turns back to go but she is stopped by a sudden voice}
S-taani tum jaa kahan rahi ho??
T- kyun aap jaao na...aap kyun apna time waste kr rhe ho...man toh krta hai ki kahin bht door chali jaaun jahan se kabhi wapas na aa paaun but it's not possible..{and she goes}
{taani goes from there and reaches taayam's house...she closes the door firmly as though she was lost in something...as she enters she looks from one corner of the house to the other corner}
T-kabhi socha nai tha ki itna akela feel karungi.maine socha tha ki woh sab mere friends hain...but no they betrayed me...kisi ke liye bhi main important nai hun...i m just a nobody for them .shayd woh kabhi mere friends they hi nai ..may b they were just pretending to be my friend aur toh aur bhai aur rey ne bhi...{and she starts crying ...yeah that was normal after all she was hurt ...yaa hurt but not physically..bdw mentally hurt matters even more..it pricks 10 times more than physically hurt does}

guys this is it for today...i hope u liked it main next part jaldi hi post kar dungi...guys pls omment and yeah silent readers at least like hi kr dena aap log
with love "SWASTI"
PRECAP:taani tries to harm herself although she's saved and does hurt herself too much ...reyam try to pacify her after knowing the real truth but then she leaves the home for a walk saying "i m sorry bhai main kam se kam hi aapke bhr pe aaungi"

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ver nicely done ... pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

nic one do cntinue :-)

yeah...sure...i will n thnxx for the comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing...!! =D
do continue soon...eagerly waiitng =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ossom swasti... u expalined their emotions very well...
nd i hope aapke iss story main toh situation handle ho jaaye!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: taanibaby

ossom swasti... u expalined their emotions very well...

nd i hope aapke iss story main toh situation handle ho jaaye!!!

thnxx taanibaby a lot...but i m sorry becoz i havn't understood wht u meant by saying ki "aapki is story me situation handle ho jaaye"
n bdw thnxx again 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its awsm babez,do cntinue sn.Wl be lkng frwd to rd it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome starting
it's very emotional feeling bad for taani 😔
gang is too rude including swayam
continue soon and pm me .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow. nice start
u explaind the situatns really well
plz continue soon😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Emotional one...but shown very nicely!!
A very good beginning!

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