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anagha107

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Amma think for some time and say to herself ''for time being I will keep it with me only. But I have to hide this from Chulbuli. I don't know what is written in this diary, not good for my daughter to read it. and she just keep the book in her cupboard.

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Vikram roaming in the market goes into a shop purchase bread and some tea for himself come out of the shop, sit on the steps of a near by temple and finish his food. His mind is keep on reminding Chulbuli's face in front of his eyes. His thoughts are stoping at one point that how he is going to proove that Amma's Chulbuli is in fact his Sugni only. Suddenly he saw Bunty entering a garland shop. Vikram calls out bunty to come to him. Bunty comes to him seeing surprised saying that ''Usthadji, aap yahaan kaise?(Master, how come u here?) Hum ko lagah ki aap vaapas apne ghar chale gaye honge(I thought that u went off back to ur home). Vikram smiling ask bunty to sit down with him. and...

Edited by anagha107 - 12 years ago

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

No I am not gone I am still here , I told you bunty I will leave but that too with My Sugni only ... I am here to see she is safe and fine Any ways Bunty I forgot some thing with sugni I asked her to keep it in her bag because it was raining so I didnt want it to be wet can u bring that from her please.. Bunty - Ustad Je... (Master)... oh No I dont know..😕 I dont know and moves from there start walking.. vikram after him saying you are hiding something from me ? did she open it ? bunty I am talking to u... bunty - please master go home please dont stay here she will kill u ... vikram - who .. bunty - amma jee please u leave please.. vikram - are u hiding some thing 4m me ? bunty - No no please im sorry dont hit me 🥱 amma jee took that from me chulbuli gave it to me to give u back but amma sow me and took it vikram - hmmm 😳 I will come and take that diary from her !

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Mouni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Amma is busy in scolding Kali as her little girl isn't letting her go & she is trying to manage her. Amma: "Ek choti si bachhi nahi sambhal jata hain tujhse.Kitne baar kaha ki mehfil mein jaane se aage use sulake jana.Ab dekh yeh kya..."( It's surprising that you can't handle a lil child.How many times I ask you to get her sleep before you leave for dancing? Now see what...)
Amma suddenly finds Kali looking at something with fearful eyes.Amma turns to find an annoyed Vikram.
"You?" ,Amma shouts.
"Yes me." Saying that Vikram calmly takes a sit on the nearby sofa."There is a thing of mine that I forgot in your house.Actually there are two..."
Amma is shocked. Kali quitely leaves with her daughter.
"What do you want to mean?", Amma asks him.
Vikram comes close to her & replies,"You know it better". Amma starts to sweat. Vikram turns his back to her & says,"I'm here to take my diary. I hope it's kept good in your locker. Bring it now ".

Edited by M0uNi - 12 years ago

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Thanks mouni for the next part .. I like it...

OK so ill go on

Amma - What diary ? 😕 I Dont have any diary that belong to u please leave now ..

Vikram - Well I knew that , I knew that u will refuse to give it back to me, If u wont give it back to me I will have to take it with my own hands , U dont want me to do so right ?

Chulbuli enters the room, Amma - Chulbul what are u doing here I told u to rest go to your room , Chulbul - Oh U (looking at vikram) what are u doing here again ... vikram staring at chulbuli and say - How are you sugni ? Chulbul again lost in his eyes *Ore Piya In BG again* Amma watching both and Shouting - Chulbul I said go to your room, Chulbul silently leaves the room, Vikram comes near Amma and say - Give me my diary and if U will refuse to do so I will take it at any cost but if u want ...Let's do a deal take the diary ill take my sugni .. what do u say ??

Amma Shocked saying ...

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anagha107

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Tumhari himmath kaise huai?(How dare u?) Phir se yahaan aaneki?(To come again here?) Thumhara koi samaan hamare paas nahin hai(I don't have any of ur items) Jaao yahaan se(Go from here). Vikram observes keys hanging from the side of her sarry and extends hand to pull them. Amma jumps back trembling says - wait I will give it to u. She will go to the almera opens the door take the dairy and gives it back to Vikram. Vikram hugs the book with his hand and says ''I own one more thing that is in ur house right now. But mean while u keep Sugni with u but treat her as my amaanat'' .Saying this Vikram starts to leave. Amma shouting ''Oh meri beti Chulbuli hai. Tumhari Sugni nahin. Suna tum ne phir kabhi yahaan nahin aana''(She is my daughter Chulbuli not ur Sugni. Did u hear me and never come back here). Vikram leaves smiling...

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

😉 Anagha =Oh Nice part I liked it Okay I continue

Vikram Leaves smiling leaving Amma Shocked and Chulbuli Hiding out of the room , Vikram close the door and start walking and then sees Chulbuli listening to their conv trying to hid, Vikram goes Near her and say - Sugni Mujhey pataa tha k tum meri sugni ho dekho kaise tum hamari batien sun rhei ho (I knew U r mine sugni see how u listening to our conv) , Again Chulbuli lost in his beautiful eyes , vikram holds her hand and both go out of the house, They start walking and walking , vikram sees a chair and make sugni sit on it and look at her and say Sugni you know My life without u is nothing , I missed you so Much and I feel My living is nothng I feel like I m dead when u r not with Me , come sugni Let's go back this is not your place and hugs her, Chulbuli Looks at him and say