My first poem in Telugu on Arshi with translation

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DurgaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Swamu
Nice dear...nicely written..koncham emotional but loved it...keep going..keep writing...

Thank you so much. Most of my poems tend to be emotional. Please do take a look. I have given the link to my index below the poem.

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supriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Why did the prince turn into a demon (rakshas)

I dreamt of sweet moments

Durga this is really good 👏 loved these 2 lines 😊

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Flora3333

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow! ⭐️
I don't know Telegu.. but the translation is just awesome! 👏

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Putija

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Hello everybody, Most of us have been watching IPK Telugu in Maa tv and we know that the intense hate marriage track has started. I have written a poem based on this track. My first ever poem in Telugu and it is based on Arshi. Hope you all like it.
This poem is about Khushi's thoughts after the hate marriage, after the Gupta family leaves her and goes away and Khushi is left alone in the hall.

Ae neraaniki naaku siksha padindi ila

Rakshasuduga maraadu rakumarudu aela neeram needi kadu premadi/dwesamadi

Madhura kshnaala kosam kalalu kannanu

Tiyyani maatala kosam eduru choosanu

Oka oopulo manasu virigipoyindi

Dwesha tufaanulo pelli ayipoyindi

Jarigina daaniki kaaranam teliyaledu

Adigina prasnaku badulu ivvaledu

Baadhato tirigi vellipoyindi sonta janamantaa

Ontariga migili poyaanu anaadhaga

ee votaritanam kodhi kalam

Translation:

For what crime did I get this punishment

Why did the prince turn into a demon (rakshas) Fault is not yours its love/hate

I dreamt of sweet moments

I waited for sweet words

In one move, my heart broke

In a hate storm, marriage took place

Did not know the reason for what happened

Did not give reply to the questions asked

With grief my own people went back

And I remained like an orphan

it will be shortlived/temprory

Link to the index for my other poems: DurgaS's Index

Durga good like all your poems my comments in blue

Edited by chalhov - 13 years ago

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Katelyn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

A very emotional piece, Durga! 👏 I could feel Khushi's pain and her broken dreams! 😭 Thanks for the translation!

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DurgaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

Why did the prince turn into a demon (rakshas)

I dreamt of sweet moments

Durga this is really good 👏 loved these 2 lines 😊

Thank you so much, Supriya. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Flora3333
Wow! ⭐️
I don't know Telegu.. but the translation is just awesome! 👏

Thanks. You can take a look at my other poems. Most of them are in Hindi. The index link is given below the poem.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: chalhov
Durga good like all your poems my comments in blue

Chalhov, thank you so much. Loved those additions above. 🤗. I think we can have a prasna - jawaabu joint venture poem, I'll ask questions, u can give the answers. 😃