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Posted: 13 years ago
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I know I said I will update yesterday but you know na? I am how much pagal !!!!! 😉😆


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Edited by preity_d - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys me here after so many days with the update...Hope you guys will like it...😃

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Part : 2

He stood up, wiped his tears. Then leaned forward to her and planted a kiss to her forehead and left just like every day.

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"Another tragic story is going to repeat the history" said a doctor nodding head right and left.

"And again we can't do anything' I am having on myself that I am a Doctor. People thinks we can make miracles happen" said a junior Doctor, who is in his late twenties little emotionally.

Virat left his chair in frustration. His veins are shivering; he can't tolerate these negative talks anymore. "Let me complete my research. I just want a Daboia russelii to give final touch of the medicine. I am sure we can give the child a new life" he said determinedly.

"Daboia russelii"??? Are you serious?? That's a very dangerous and venomous snake!!" said a fellow senior doctor. "And who will bring it for you?" he said in a sarcastic tone.

"I have already told to an aadibasi, he started searching. He will give it to me just hold some hours.

"But how are you so sure? If he can't find that?" said the elderly Doctor tensed.

"I am having instinct he has found it." He said looking at the clock lost.

"But tell me what if'" the elderly Doctor's talk halted for a sudden knock at the door.

A lower division clerk came with a cell phone.

"Sir, your phone was ringing from past fifteen minutes. Maybe something urgent. So I bring it here." The clerk said and came towards Virat.

Virat hurriedly took the phone and dialed the number. The number is of an STD booth.

"Can you please call Aghaat to the booth now?" he blurted at the moment he understand someone has took receiver.

"Which Aghaat you want? The nepali one or'" the booth owner said lazily. May be he just opened his eyes from his siesta.

"Who came to your booth just 5 minutes ago. Call him NOW" he ordered.

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Virat took the cottage near the jungle away from the town. He wanted to complete his deadly experiment in a lonely area. There was a security guard called Jung Bahadur, who helps Virat in household works.

It's raining from afternoon and there's no sign of stopping. Virat was roaming around his balcony and now and then checking the entrance of the cottage. Jung Bahadur may be in his house, because a faded tune of radio is coming from his hut.

Virat looked at his watch. It stroked 7. Half an hour ago he got a call that condition of the child is getting worse. The big wall clock danced seven times violently to make everyone knew that it was 7 pm then. Suddenlt the current went off. The entire area was covered with darkness. Only the light of thunderstorm was there, making the environment more mysterious. After searching for some minutes he found a candle and putted it to a candle stand.

kahin deep jale kahin dil'..
zara dekh le aa kar paravaane
teri kaun si hai manzil
kahin deep jale kahin dil

The radio was still on in the Bahadur's hut and the silence atmosphere was making the sound more hearable or Bahadur turned it loud.

Virat laughed a little, if Manvi would here, she surely would make fun of the atmosphere. Or maybe she would play any prank on him to make him afraid. A tear unknowingly flowed down to her cheeks. The warm touch of the liquid made him aware of the current situation. He rubbed his palm and went to grab his mobile just to call at the hospital to know about the child. Just then the door bell rang.

mera geet tere dil ki pukaar hai
jahaan main hun, vahin tera pyaar hai

The radio unbelievably sounded loud. A chilled shiver ran from his spine. He opened the door. There was nobody, and then his vision fell upon the main gate. There Bahadur was speaking with someone, actually some lady. He took a umbrella and walked towards the gate. The rain was pouring heavily that the umbrella couldn't help him to get wet.

The Bahadur was talking to her in their regional language.

"Shahabji, yeh dekhiye yeh keh rahi hain, aapne isko bulaya'Maine mana kiya par yeh he ki baat nahi maan rahi" The Bahadur said little irritated. The woman was wearing a regional Mekhla chadar drapped like a saree. The saree finished little below her knee. Small drops of rain was pouring from her saree to her navel and then downwards. She was totally drenched.

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Her face was not visible due to the darkness and she covered her head with her saree. She had a bucket made of bamboo sticks in her hands, Virat looked at that curiously and asked,

"Kaun ho tum?(Who are you?)

naa main sapna hun, naa koi raaz hun
ek dard bhari aavaaz hun
piya der na kar, aa mil

"Main Bidehi shahab ji.. Aghat mere baba hain, unhone kaha upko yeh de aau. Dekhiye na bearish shuru ho gayi phir, aur yeh aapka noukar mujhe andar jaane nahi de raha main raat bhar kaha rukungi?"

"Andar aao tum" Virat said.

She entered the cottage. She was little shivering. Virat putted the umbrella on her head. Bahadur gave an angry glance towards them and stomped back to his hut to engross himself again in the music.

When they reached the building, Virat took the bucket hurriedly from her and went to his experiment room.

There were many snakes in various shaped glass room. Some taste tubes, some funnels, a small gas-oven and some little glass jars with green and blue venom.

Virat kept the bucket on a table and started to open the thread with which the bucket was bounded. He was near about done, he heard some footsteps, and He looked up. He found the very same lady, Bidehi. She laughed. Her face was not visible due to the darkness but the mysterious smirk made him conscious about the spooky environment.

Virat looked at her and asked softly, "kya hua?"

"shahabji, andhere me baksa kholenge? Saap ne kaat liya toh?" she laughed a little more.

"Hmm" he said little embarrassed and went to search for an emergency light. Seriously he should have thought it before. He was just too excited after getting the bucket. May be his dreams are not far now.

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Edited by preity_d - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
UNRES...😊

Fabulous update preity...👏👏...really loved it...feeling bad yaar...😭...bechaaraa virat manvi ko kitna miss kar rahaa hai..😭...it was really really interesting yaar...😃...it was really scary n interesting at the same time...virat badi risk le rahaa hai...the way u described everything was superb preity...👏👏... awesome update...👍🏼ab aage kya hogaa...plz conitunue soon if possible yaar...will be eagerly waiting for the next update..😊...thank u so much for the pm..😊

Edited by yaminnthida - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
it was one scary update diii.awww poor virat misses her manvi😭
but it was a short update but i want one looonnngg update pls pls pls diii😃
Edited by keertu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res 😛
Unres 😃

Preity fantastic update yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️.. Its amazing .. Loved it so much.. Poor Virat.. He is really missing Manvi a lot 😔.. But loved his attitude.. He is going to take a big risk but he is not ready to give up .. Too good.. Loved the detailed description of that night 👏👏.. Nice song selection.. Perfect for the scene 👍🏼.. Spooky night .. So finally the entry of Bidehi.. Loved the way you have described her appearance.. Beautifully written 👏👏👏.. Looking forward for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗
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Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
yaar kita intezar karwati h preity update k liye...
intresting ab dekhna ye hai virat med bana pata h ya nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Res🤣
today i vl paka read it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Kinz PMed
love you Kinz for the superb comment
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hey preity _d how are you
hmm BIDEHI rite? your OS seriously got my attention it sound interesting.love the part where the entire area was cover with darkness and the song
kahin deep jalay kahin dil
zara daikh lay akar parvanay suchi me ko laga ubhi bhoot aye ga😆😆 plzplzplzplz update soon me ko jana hai snakes say kaisay jaan bchaiye ga bachi ki.. aur who jo bidehi larki hai who schi ki larki hai ya koi bhoot hai??? aur manvi kaisay theek ho gee theek ho ge bhi k nai??/ confusion hai yaar but good me wait karo ge next part ka thank you for pm GOD BLESS YOU😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Balle balle atlast tune update ki!!
Meri jan muah 🤗

Superb update..!! Keep writing!!!
I am bad at commenting for ff's os's etc!!
Srry bt it's really awesome update lk u!!
😉 ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
sorry preeto mein bahot late ho gayi i knw am sorry ya

And update to full on science wali thi aadhi baatein samajh nai aayi tune research ki thi kya 😉

Mazak karrahi thi
Interesting update ya
Bechara virat kitni mehnat karraha hai jst coz kisi aur ki beti na mare jaise uski mar gayi thi 😔

And manvi ko bahot miss karraha hai 😔
aur manvi wahan aaram se so rahi hai 😉

Story bahot interesting hai
Aur plz jaldi update karna

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