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Hello my beautiful readers! 😊

Firstly, congratulations, the first ever story of mine is preparing for its thread 2 and I hope it gets the same response (or even better) and appreciation from you all! ❤️

I never imagined my story reaching a new thread! Or for that matter even completing 25 chapters! I can't believe i write it all! Again, the credit goes to you all for your lovely comments!

It goes unsaid, that from now on the PM's for this story will be sent only to those people who regularly comment and like! Am sorry I have already begged off a lot many times to people for their comment's and likes!

Next, the index has been made in the very next post, so you can keep referring to it!

If you want me to add you in buddy list for messaging, kindly buddy me!
Also, I will regularly update if I get good response in no time!

This story is close to my heart, reasons being it is the first written plus it gave me my new found bff Kays94!
She is the most keen reader of this story! No doubts! She always bugged me to write more and more, and maybe she is the reason I am continuing the story too! So I love you my Keeni! ❤️

And now to Mariam and Haju! You guys have been spamming the story many times, but off lately for making it reach to 150! So if you guys are getting the update today! It is all because of these 2 people! I love you so much guys!
This is specially for Anjali aka cutiepie224, am sorry I just made this in hurry, i cannot forget how you motivate me! Am thankful to you! I love you ❤️

Urmil, sweetdollashita- You guys are too cute and thank you for loving my story so much! I am kinda overwhelmed!

THANK YOU ALL! I AM REALLY EXCITED! 🤗

Love-
Aaliya!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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|| Index ||

The link to the previous thread : Love Walked In

Part 26: Page 1
Part 27:Page 27
Edited by little.angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations for a new thread...🥳 🥳
Thanks for an index as it'll help readers like me to read it again easily...😃
Thanks for the special mention...😃
Edited by sweetdollashita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS
new thread
its surely an achievement
u deserve it my aly
i would love to ve endless threads for it
n yeah not to forget thanks for d special mention
Edited by mariarauf48 - 13 years ago
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So here it goes in continuation!
I am seriously happy that you guys showered all this love on this story of mine! Thank you ! ❤️

Special mentions : CREDIT FOR THIS UPDATE GOES TO HAJU AND MARIAM FOR SPAMMING IT!
And if you guys find this update short, well there is some reason to it, actually the next update will start off from a different scene! So that is why I could not mix it

Part 26:

The assistant came and asked them to move to ward no 5 and asked Jeevika to change her suit.

While Jeevika changed, Viren took to the doctor and told her all about her night mare. Doctor din't react then as Jeevika had entered then.

Manvi and Virat too came in before Jeevika and were horrified after listening to the dream!

A tingle ran up her spine as the gel was applied when she was asked to lay down. Subconsciously, she held onto Viren's hand more tightly. Viren could feel the excitement radiating off of Jeevika as the doctor focused on a particular part of Jeevika's non-existent bump.

Manvi started feeling too emotional then when Virat hugged her side ways and he kept his one hand on Viren's shoulder.

"Viren and jeevika , if you look towards this area right here, this little what we might call a 'blob' right here is your child. Now judging from the size, I would say that you are currently eight and half weeks along. The heart beat is strong; so far I see no cause for concern. Congratulations."

The doctor continued, "And virat and manvi, come here" they followed her instructions and the doctor showed them what exactly did she mean by this blob.

The doctor smiled at the pair, handing Jeevika a cloth to wipe the saline gel. Viren spoke first, the emotions clear in his voice.

"Thank you doctor, thank you so much."

Virat and manvi smiled to the doctor and left the couple a much needed private moment!

They couldn't fight the smiles off of their faces as they sat there hands in hands with their eyes still gazed in each other.. She sighed contentedly as the arms of her lover entwined around her waist, his breath dancing on her ear."I love you, thanks for this"

She could not help but clutch her stomach lovingly. This was the first time she felt her baby so close to herself. Even viren did!

Viren bent in for a kiss, it just started developing when there was a knock on the door

Viren: hospital mein to chodh do yaar! Getting really pissed off!

The assistant came and took Jeevika for change. Manvi and virat were outside eagerly waiting for them.

As soon as he came, both of them crashed into him, and hugged him so tight. Even they were the kids! Viren smiled and hugged them back saying "Congratulations to the most beautiful chachu and mausi"

After the scan, doctor asked viren to come in the cabin while viren asked both of them to be with jeevika till she changed.

Viren entered with a much light and sound heart now. He was so content now especially after seeing Jeevika's smile. Jeevika, who was a darling angel and his first baby's smile.

Dr: so viren, i thought of the dream you told me in the scan too.

Viren: doc, something serious? Much concerned now.

Dr: nahi viren, i was thinking that this dream is probably because of the pyschological impact of her abortion and then you were not with her from the one week.

Viren: doc,, i know, am even sorry to you for that.

Dr laughed and said: viren, its okay. I understand, you have work to do too. Don't be sorry(laughs again) to me. Well, i just needed to ask you some favors now.

Viren: anything for them doc, he smiled.

Dr: viren, firstly, dont let her be alone now. According to her case history, she is most attached to you, manvi, and virat. Try that one of them is with her always. Or if not, your mom. Secondly, after the second ultra sound, if you all find it convinient, plan a short trip some where out in a peaceful and relaxing place. You 4. This will help her a lot.

Viren was listening all this while very carefully. He was eager to do everything. He had already gained so much of knowledge from the baby books now.

He was happy to hear the second part.. A vacation, they had been longing for it so long. He knew once the baby comes they won't be able to roam about much.

Viren: doc, i find both of them suitable to me. Is flight journey ...

Dr: i know your question viren, according to me, baby is doing good. And if the second scan is much to the expectation, you can head her for flight journey. Make sure its a short one and she is not sick to air travel already.

Viren: um, one more thing, when is she supposed to join the yoga, and breathing classes? Sorry, read it some where that its good for her and our baby.

He did not even think before saying it our baby rather than the baby in public. He was proud of the fact that his wife was expecting and that their love will be playing with them soon. He was yearning to be holding their love, their baby.

Dr smiled to this cuteness of Viren: viren, yaar, mein teri dost ho! Viren smiled and looked down.

Dr: you've transformed viren! I did not know this kind of man. I knew some one least cared about love. But see yourself! Your every sentence starts from her and ends with ours. You have your life revolving around her and virat manvi. You're so addicted to her.

Mr. Viren Vadhera is now incomplete without Mrs. Jeevika Viren Vadhera

Viren continued: your right yaar, i did not know love life, i loved my family. that was all. Jeevika came into my life as an angel sent by the god to me, she walked to my life and love walked in too. She taught me to express, to love and what not. Her simplicity every time touches me. My life? Cmon, its not mine anymore. My world is my wife and my life just resides in this beautiful world of mine. Virat and Manvi? They are my babies, they are just a part of me.

He went deep in explaining this all to her. He did not even notice three people , most important people standing at the door.

Jeevika is simple, though pregnancy is showing a different face' he ended laughing but still the love and passion was sparkling in his eyes.

Dr: viren, i will surely meet u sometime except in this hospital. They laughed.

And btw, her classes will start from the 5 or 6 month, when her bump is visible.

Jeevika standing there heard it too. Her cheeks got this red pink colour and she did not need a rouge now. Her blush got wider when Viren noticed all of them standing there.

'My baby bump' Jeevika thought, looked down, smiled, blush accompanying it. And then looked straight into his eyes.

His eyes just exclaimed 'I love you' and his eyes rolled to her abdomen region 'Grow my l'il baby'.

Manvi and Virat were too happy and even they were standing there side hugging Jeevika. They made the awesome foursome always!.

Vanshika: welcome back my doll!

Jeevika and Manvi were the pampered daughter-in-laws of the Vadhera's. It was real difficult for the people from outside to figure out if they had daughters or sons?! If Viren or Virat kept busy, it was one of the other family members who took to the charge of their 2 DIL's!

These 2 sisters were the soul and heart of the family.

It wasn't just one sided. Jeevika was already colored into Vadhera's family. She knew all her duties, she would never even take them as duties. She loved doing it! Manvi too, when she came, was following the footsteps of her di and there were they! Pampered!

Sometimes, Viren and Virat, they envied both!


Guys! Don't forget to hit the like button and the comment too, I want minimum 8 pages of comment!
Edited by little.angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I so wanted to be d first one that i reserved two times
see how smart i am
proud of my self

baaki bakwaas baad mein
coming to update

is dere any need to say anything
speechless
awesome
beautiful
freaking awesome
super duper awesome

the way u started
d excitement

seeing deir baby hands in hand
howw cute n adorable

the eye talk n viren thank uu aww too cute
poor viren missed d kiss

the trio hug n virman virika babies tooo cutd

doc n viren convo
the best part
loved how viren was sooo concerned
OUR BABY <3<3
the way he described jeevika
his relation
her importance
her life her jeevika

jeevika heard all sooo cute
n d eye talk
maar daala

n THANK U for d special mention
mari loves alyy
Edited by mariarauf48 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesummm! 😊

Eager tp Read Moreee!!

Hayee!! Virikaaa!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fab
loved it yaar
mind blowin
too good continue soon

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amazing
superb
fantastic
no words or it.
first of all m so happy to see ur updates.i really wonder how ur updates r so perfet.
it was really cute when d awesum foursum were in d hospital for ultrasound.
d way viren cared for her and excited for deir baby was awesum
viren's feeling for his luv for jeevika were awwie
and jeevikas blush when she heard about her baby bump
d vadheras r so caring for deir dil
and d update was just out of d world
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations!! you're on your second thread!!
Anyway back to the uber cute update!
viren is such a darling!! i love him and jeevika!
'grow my lil baby' 😃 that was so cute!!!!
and virat and manvi are just awsome siblings!!!
i hope jeevika's nightmare doesnt come true!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!

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