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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really loved it. Waiting for the update. Plz update soon and thanx for the PM.
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Story is very interesting and awesome updates
Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago
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Salaamat Rahe Dostana Humara


part 4

Viren woke up with a painful headache
VI- ouch my head!
He cried, rubbing his head. He looked around
VI- main yahan kaise aaya?? Wait wait wait
He tried to recall last night
VI- I was in Jeevs party last night and then I got drunk, and I did something with Jeevika...and then Virat...fight...friends...
Viren gasped
VI- oh my god! I befriended Virat!? But usne meri dosti ko qubool kaise kiya?? And he saved me?
Just then Vanshika came in
VM- Viren, thank god tu teek hai. Tujhe pata bhi hai ke kal raat tune kitni pi thi!! Kitni baar manna kiya hai tujhe par tune toh kasam khayi hai na ke tu baat sunne ga hi nahi!! Woh toh shukar hai uss larke ka jo tujhe yahan sahi salaamat le aaya. Woh kya naam tha...v..Vishal?? Nahi nahi erm...
VI- Virat??
VM- haan! Virat!! Kitna acha larka hai woh. yahan ka toh nahi lagta. Woh kya tera naya dost hai??
Viren kept silent for few seconds before answering softly
VI- pata nahi mom. Pata nahi...

In college...

Viren rushed, entering the college
A- hey viren
One of his friends, Aditya came to him. Viren was looking for someone
A- erm...Viren kya hua?? Kisse dhoond rahe ho??
VI- Adi, tune usse dekha kya??
A- usse kisse??
VI- arre wohi, Virat
A- kaun Virat?? Ach acha that new guy?? Yeah dekha hai
Viren shook him by his shoulders
VI- kahan dekha hai!?
A- woh biology class mein gaya hai
Viren ran towards the class leaving Adi confused
A- viren?? Aur class?? He must be ill...

Viren walked in the class and saw Virat sitting on his seat. The teacher saw viren enter the class

T- Viren Malhotra, y r u standing there!? Jaake apni seat pe betho
VI- yes ma'am
He walked over to Virat and smiled
VI- erm...yeh meri seat hai
V- oh...sorry
He was about to get up
VI- no no its ok u sit here, main yahan beth jata hoon
He sat on the seat next to Virat.
VI- erm...from now on u can sit on this seat
Virat smirked and scoffed
V- lagta hai kal raat ki utari nahi abhi tak
Viren looked at him with raised eyebrows and confused expression
VI- matlab?? I'm fine now
V- then how come u let me sit in ur seat??
VI- what?? Look-
T- Viren Malhotra!! Virat Vadhera!! Both of u out of this class now!!
Viren and Virat were sent out of the class
VI- o thank god! Saved from the crap!
Virat raised his eyebrows
V- then y did u attend the class??
Viren looked at him innocently
VI- I..I wanted to talk to u
Virat knew why but he played along
V- and why??
VI- well...coz...last night erm...u...u...saved me and...I wanted to...thank you
V- thank me for what??
Viren sighed
VI- last night u...
Virat smirked
V- I'm just messing with u. U dnt need to thank me.
VI- no I do. After all I said to u, u still helped me. Why would u do tht??
V- coz I'm nt made of stone. I do care about people u know. And besides, after I saw how ur dad treats u, I kinda felt bad for u
Viren scoffed
VI- no need, I'm used to it.
VI- anyways forget that, besides the saving thing, did anything else happen??
He tried to bring up their friendship topic
V- er...nop
VI- really?? No I'm sure something else must of happened right??
Virat pretends that he can't remember
V- erm...I don't know what ur talking about??
Viren got frustrated
VI- oh god! Main humari dosti ki baat kar raha hoon!
V- oh! Acha!! Woh!!
Viren realized that he was just teasing him
VI- tu mazak kar raha hai na??
Virat started laughing.
V- kaisa dost hai tu?? Khud dosti karta hai aur phir bhool bhi gaya??
VI- no! Main bhoola nahi, I was just seeing if u remember
V- yes I do. But tum nashay mein the toh I thought u might have forgotten by now
VI- hey main dosti ka haath aage barha ke peechey kabhi nahi leta
Virat smiled
VI- humari mulakat achi nahi thi right. So lets start afresh. Hii I'm Viren, Viren Malhotra. Richest guy in whole Mumbai
He forwarded his hand
V- Virat, Virat Vadhera...
VI- so Virat, where r u from??
V- I'm from Delhi. I live with my small family
VI- really?? Kiske saath?? Parents and siblings??
Virat's smile faded
V- erm..no I live with my chachu chachi daadi and cousin
VI- why?? Parents se naraz ho kya??
V- nahi, shayad woh hi mujhse naraz ho kar chale Gaye
VI- kahan?? Abroad gaye hain??
V- no, wahan
He pointed up to the sky. Viren realized what he meant
VI- oh shit! I'm so sorry, I didn't know ke...
V- its ok koi baat nahi
VI- woah, now I'm kinda scared to ask u anything else
Virat started laughing
V- relax!!
Viren sighed
VI- ok so tell me, do u have a job?? Or do u work in some restaurant??
V- what?? Viren I'm a...erm...
VI- ur a what??
V- I'm...from a middle class family
He lied
VI- so u cnt have a job because of that??
V- no its not that, its just...I..I don't need a job
Viren raised his eyebrows
VI- what?? Virat at this stage we do need a job, I mean we need to earn to pay for college and stuff
V- yeah true but I don't need to I mean my company- I mean...
VI- ur company??
V- no I meant erm...company...haan kissi ki company toh chahiye na for..work
Viren looked at him confused
VI- dude ur not making any sense
V- I know
VI- acha yeh sab chor...
V- listen tell me one thing, if...I was...a businessman, then...would u have...
Viren got his point
VI- look Virat let me clarify one thing, I don't make friends according to people's status, I leave that for my dad
Virat smirked
V- maybe there actually is a difference between u n ur dad
Viren scoffed
VI- there's a lot of difference dude. N plz dont ever compare me to my dad. Its unfortunate enough that I'm related to him
V- o come on he can't be that bad
VI- yeah, whatever
V- hey listen I need to ask u something
VI- yeah go ahead
V- Teri, Teri kissi ke saath koi dushmani toh nahi??
VI- what?? Dushmani?? Meri kiske saath dushmani hogi?? Ofcourse not, well mere dad ke sivaa
Virat lightly punched him on the shoulder, viren chuckled
VI- waise kyun pooch raha hai??
V- oh, nothing, just like that
VI- ok chal anyways ab class over hone ko hai so next class is starting come
V- yeah u go main bas aata hoon
VI- ok
Viren went to his next class
Virat stood wondering
V- if Viren doesn't have any enemies then who sent those thugs?? I'll have to find out
With that thought, he went to his next class...

Outside, after college
Jeevika and Maanvi were walking outside college. Maanvi was lost in her thoughts while Jeevika was talking to her
J- mannu I think I need new shoes na, I mean these are so...
She noticed Maanvi was not listening
J- mannu
She shook her
M- ha..haan! Kya hua??
J- tujhe kya hua?? Where r u lost??
M- erm...n..nothing...just er...nothing
M in her head- iss virat ne mujhe parishaan karke rakha hai!

Few seconds later, Jeevika saw Viren n Virat walking towards them with a smile. Jeevika's eyes widened
J- mannu woh dekh! Dushman dost kab ban gaye??
Maanvi looked in Jeevika's direction and saw the boys, she sighed
M- lagta hai sab ko apne chaal mein pasaane ka PhD kiya hai
She said under her breath
M- chep kahin ka!
J- kuch kaha tumne??
M- no no!

VI- hey Maanvi! Hey...Jeevika
He greeted Jeevika hesitantly and she also replied hesitantly
J- h..hi
Maanvi gave Virat daggers and he in return gave evil smirk, she rolled her eyes at him and turned to Jeevika who was avoiding making eye contact with Viren. Maanvi noticed this
M- yeh tum dono ko kya hua?? Why are you guyz behaving so weird??
VI- what?? N...no we'r not sweety, we'r being normal. Anyways erm...I wanna introduce u to my new friend
J- yeah we know who he is Viren
VI- no, but I wanna introduce him as my friend. So guyz, this is Virat Vadhera, my new friend
V- Hi Jeevika! And...u
He looked at Maanvi in sarcasm. Maanvi glared at Virat in anger

VI- er...Jeevika cn I talk to u for a sec??
Jeevika looked at him confused but agreed
J- sure
Viren turned to Maanvi
VI- baby I'll be back in a sec ok. U enjoy with Virat
He smiled at Virat and went with Jeevika

V- so
M- so, what??
V- u ready right??
M- for what??
Virat smirked
V- for tonight, u know...night...dark...alone
M- ok stop it! Look u cnt threaten me like this ok! I'm... Not gonna come
V- ok then we can get started right now
He tried coming closer
M- hey!
Virat stopped and smirked
M- tumhe sharam nahi aati kya!? Apne hi dost ki GF pe line maar rahe ho!
Virat pretended to think
V- hmmm...no main toh besharam hoon
Maanvi sighed in frustration, Virat was enjoying it
M- agar mujhe pata hota that u were gonna be like this, then I would have never accepted ur stupid challenge!
V- well...I warned u. Anyways o wan c u tonight so be there or else...u know...
Virat left from there leaving a nervous Maanvi

Viren took Jeevika to a corner
VI- listen Jeevs erm...woh kal raat...maine tumhare saath...
J- its ok sorr kehne ki zarurat nahi hai
VI- but main sorry nahi keh raha
Jeevika raised her eyebrows
VI- I mean ke...I dnt know if that was a mistake
J- what?? Viren it was a mistake, how can u say that it wasn't!? Ur dating Maanvi for god sake!
VI- no no I'm not saying that I have feelings for u or anything relevant to that. But...(he sighed) let me ask u something and u gotta promise to be honest
J- ok promise
VI- why didn't u stop me yesterday??
J- what??
VI- I was drunk so I lost my control but u weren't, so why didn't u stop me??
Jeevika looked anywhere but at him
J- er...I..I did...
She hesitantly answered which didn't go unnoticed by Viren
J- erm...Viren mannu will be waiting lets go!
She turned around to leave
VI- do u like me??
Jeevika's eyes widened. She closed her eyes tightly and didn't turn back around
VI- Jeevika tell me
Jeevika slowly turned around but didn't make eye contact with him
J- vir..viren what r u saying?? She gave a fake smile
J- ofcourse I like u, ur amazing and a charming friend
VI- no Jeevika thats not what I meant
He said sternly
VI- ok fine, let me rephrase my question. R u in love with me!?
J- what!!? Viren what r u saying!!?? Ur my best friend's boyfriend! How can u think-
VI- then y r u freaking out??
J- because!! Ur being ridiculous!! Viren how...what r u...o god viren!!
Viren suddenly burst out laughing, jeevika look at him with confused expression
J- why r u laughing??
VI- coz ur so easy to fool! Look at ur face haha!!
J- what?? Omg that means yeh mazak tha!?
VI- yeah kyun?? Dar gayi kya?? Hahaha
Jeevika was fuming in anger
J- VIREN MALHOTRA!!
VI- oh no
J- how dare u Vinu!!! Aisa mazak koi karta hai kya!!
VI- chill I was just joking sweetheart
J- hey don't call me sweetheart! Save it for ur GF
VI- I can call u whatever I want sweetheart, honey, darling!!!
J- u know what I'm outta here!

She was about to go, suddenly Viren grabbed her wrist and pulled her close to him. Jeevika was shocked by his actions. Their faces were just inches away
VI- itna bhi kya gussa??
He whispered
VI- kyun?? Joke acha nahi laga??
J- v..Viren...yeh tum...tum k..kya rahe ho
Viren smirked
VI- tumse baat kar raha hoon, aur kya??
J- Viren...t..tum yeh sab...nahi kar sakte
VI- main toh bohot kuch kar sakta hoon, but I don't think u wanna c tht. Agar mera joke tumhe bura laga then I'm sorry
J- erm...it..its ok
Viren smiled and let her go
Jeevika blushed and walked away...

Later at 6.00pm...
Maanvi was in her room walking back and forth thinking about Virat's threat
M to herself- if I don't go, then what is he gonna do?? What shall I do?? Cant even tell anyone!!

Later at night, Maanvi went to a cafe and tried to avoid going where Virat had asked her to. She kept looking outside the door in case Virat shows up

M to herself- thank god he's not here

She turned around only to be shocked to see the person was hiding from, Virat
M- t..tum...yahan??
V- haan. Kyun?? Koi problem??
M- n..nahi...erm..I..I gotta go
She was about to go
V- u do remember ur promise right?? Coz its time to fulfill it now
Maanvi sighed and turned around to face him
M- look Mr...
V- Virat
M- yeah whatever. Look maine koi promise nahi kiya tha ok. Tum...tum zabardasti kar rahe ho!
Virat tried to control his laughter looking at Maanvi's expression
V- main koi zabardasti nahi raha. I won fair n square, we had deal tht the loser will do whatever the winner wants
M- yeah but look...its not appropriate what u want
V- what??
M- I mean, I'm dating ur friend, u just became friends with Viren and now u wanna ruin his relationship with me. U cnt do that

V to himself- yeh larki sach mein pagal hai. Kuch bhi soch leti hai. Fine I'll go along
V- well I don't care, u have to come with me or else...well I dnt think u wanna know what-
M- hey! Mujhe dhamki mat do tum!
V- fine! Ur coming with me now
He dragged her in his car while Maanvi tried to protest

They reached outside a lone room, Virat tied a strap of cloth on Maanvi's eyes. Now Maanvi was getting more scared. Virat saw fear on Maanvi's face so he decided not to trouble her anymore, he opened the cloth that was tied on her eyes. Maanvi opened her eyes. It was dark, she couldn't see anything. Maanvi felt someone near her ear

V- u wont regret coming here...trust me
He whispered
M- look v..virat...plz stop playing with me...why is it so dark?? Whats going on??
V- u'll find out just have patience
Virat turned the lights on. Maanvi got confused when she saw the view. It was an empty room with just one big table in the middle with a telescope on it. It was just under a window
M- erm...yeh sab...yeh sab kya hai??
V- kyun?? Nazar nahi aa raha kya?? Its a table n telescope
M- yes I can c tht but kis liye?? Omg u called me to show this?? I thought u was gonna...
V- I was gonna what??
Maanvi realized what she was gonna say
M- erm... N..nothing
Virat smirked

M- now what??
V- come
He dragged her towards the table
M- what??
She said annoyed
V- do u miss ur mom??
Maanvi went quite then answered with low voice
M- yes but how do u know that...
V- Jeevika told me and I'm sorry about it
M- no no, its fine, I mean yeah true I miss her a lot everyday but I'm trying to move on too.
Then she looked at him
M- but what does that got to do with this??
V- come I'll show u

Virat got the telescope ready and told her to look inside
V- do u see two stars??
M- mm hmm
She replied concentrating on the stars
V- theyr my parents
Maanvi suddenly turned to him with shocked expression
M- what?? Ur parents??
V- yeah, since I was 5
M- oh my god I'm so sorry Virat I didn't know...
Virat smiled at her
V- well I like to look up in the sky at them. I can feel them every time. Its like theyr here with me
Maanvi was overwhelmed. She never knew that this was his idea of spending a night
M- wow. Thats so beautiful. I never thought this was ur way of spending a night with...
She immediately stopped as she realized what she was gonna say. Virat raised his eyebrow
V- with who??

Maanvi looked away
M- er...n..nothing...ermm...woh tumne...mujhe...yahan kyun bulaya??
Virat smirked as she changed the topic
V- mere parents ke saath wala star nazar aa raha hai??
Maanvi looked through the telescope
M- hmm
V- thats ur mom
Maanvi looked at Virat with questioning eyes
M- how can u tell??
V- just feel it.
Maanvi looked up again and felt her mom. Maanvi had tears in her eyes. She suddenly hugged Virat, which took him by surprised but he hugged her back
M- thank u Virat!! Thank u so much...
Virat smiled...

Precap: Virat finds out who tried to kill Viren. The two best friends sneak on a film set. Jeeman talk about what it would be like if jeevika dated Viren and Maanvi dated Virat

Edited by NiShal4Life - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
finally u updated...vry nice...lovd the vvbros convo & virika scene...couldnt understand viren's feeling whether he loves jeevika or nt...bt it was an awesome part...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
vv bros frendship awesome han
Viren and jeevika falling for eachother
And virman scene was awesome luved manvi ka khayali pulao :p
Precap is so interesting jeevika nd manvi 's convo will be fun
Pls update soon
And pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Awesome update
pls pm me the next part
Continue sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
nice update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
OMG Dis is awesome,,,I luv SOTY..n dis FF reminds me of dat movie so much...I juz luv it..AMAZING...Luv evry character in it...JeeMan n VV bros..awesome,,I think Viraat is juz trying 2 irritate Maanvi cuz he kinda lyks her or sumthin...I hope m rite..😛 Gosh u better update fast, I juz luvd it..PLZ PLZ PLZ continue soon, n dn't 4 get 2 pm me...Thnks a lot 4 da pm...plz update soon..😊
Edited by Artii159 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
wooow yr reallyyy its a amazinggg storyyy
i luved virman scenees alot
update asap

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