Ariya SS: Ab aur kise na chahoonga note pg 10 23/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb cs..
waiting fr ch 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum cs...
cant wait for the update...
continue soon...
plz pm me whenever you update...
thanx...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chara change ho gye..
nyc 1.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice change..😊
continue soon dear.
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Superb CS. I am looking forward to it. So its a role reversal for Arjun and Riya...Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai...loved the CS. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
fantastic CS :)
role reversal for ariya :) nice
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Cool CS... Role reversal eh??? intresting... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
omg u reversed their characters
arjun into riya
riya into arjun😆 hehe
poor arjun now he has to listen everything from riya
it's her turn now🤣
hope riya will be ok soon
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Arjun and Riya are in the conference room. All of the others are standing outside but looking through the glass window.

Arjun: I love you Riya. Please ye mat poochna ke kab, kyun ya kaise kyunki iss ka jawab mere paas bhi nahi hai. bas mujhe itna pata hai k main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon aur ab tumhaare bina nahi jee paunga. kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?

Riya: WHAT? ACP Arjun ye aap kya keh rahe hain? kya aapko pata bhi hai k aap mujhse kis baare main baat kar rahe hain?

Arjun: Haan Riya, main jaanta hoon k ye thoda unexpected hai. magar humaare beech main ye jo bhi rishta hai main ose ek naam dena chahta hoon. Pyaar ka naam. Main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon Riya.

Riya:(looking down) Main nahi karti. I don't Arjun. Main nahi karti.

Arjun: Jhoot mat bolo Riya. maine tumhaari nazaron main vahi pyaar dekha hai, mere liye.

Riya:HOW DARE YOU? tumne galat dekha. meri nazron main tumhaare liye kuch nahi hai.

Arjun: Accha? agar aisi baat hai to tumhaari nazrein jhuki kyun hain, Riya? Meri aankhon mein dekhkar kaho! chup kyun ho Riya? kaho na!

Riya: (looks up to his eyes) main tumse pyaar nahi karti, samjhe tum? I don't LOVE you!

Riya goes from there. She goes to hers and Arjun's joint cabin and slams the door. Arjun, on the other hand is shocked. He always thought that Riya also loved him, or atleast liked him. she and he were becoming closer with each passing day. Riya's words keep ringing in his ears and he falls to his knees, heartbroken.

The other four people also see all what happened. all of them have different things running through their minds. Seeing Arjun fall, all of them rush into the conference room. they kneel down to Arjun's level and Sameer holds his face to make him look upto him. Sameer feels very sad seeing his best friend in such a condition but he can't find words soothing enough for Arjun. Arjun hugs Sameer and sheds uncountable tears. Aisha is heartbroken on seeing this. She had been fairly positive that Riya would accept Arjun's proposal and move on. But it seemed as if Riya didn't want to move on. But she, as Riya's best friend and Arjun's Best friend's girlfriend, felt that it was her duty to bring them on the correct path. She went out of the conference room and went towards Arjun and Riya's cabin. She didn't bother to knock and barged in.

Aisha: Ye kya bakwaas thi Riya?

Riya: Agar tum ACP Arjun k os chote se stunt ki baat kar rahi ho to vo bakwaas nahi thi. Vo sach tha.

Aisha: How could you? tumne kitni battameezi se baat ki Arjun se!

Riya: Aur jo osne kiya...

Aisha: (cutting Riya off) Osne sirf apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya. aur tumne kya kiya?

Riya: Pyaar ka izhaar? osne mera Mazak banaya. poori ETF ko pata hai Raj k baare main. Aur osne...

Aisha: Raj MAR chuka hai! vo tumhaara kal tha! aur agar Arjun tumhaara aaj banna chahta hai to osmein burai kya hai?

Riya: Vo Raj ki jagah lena chahta hai!

Aisha: Nahi! vo sirf tumhaare Dil main APNE liye jagah chahta hai! Khair, main kise samjha rahi hoon, osse, jisne 2 saal pehle hi Samajhna chod diya tha!

Aisha stamps out of the room, slamming the door after her, leaving a FUMING Riya behind.

So how was it?? sorry i took soo long to post... Gussa plzz comment na kar k mat nikaalna... Waiting 4 ur comments...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
great update :) loved it
arjun proposed her and she said no 😭
feeling bad for both arjun and riya
loved aish'a outburst on riya
thanks for the PM
continue soon

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