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It was afternoon when Megha hurried up stairs to collect clothes as black clouds were covered all the sky and stormy wind started blowing already. As soon as possible picking all the clothes Megha turned to go downstair when she listened a great sound. She turned back to see what happens which made her amused. It was the window of MegHan's bedroom which unfortunately unlocked by wind power. For the first time in these long 12 years Megha saw a glance of inside of her and Mohan's bedroom where she lived the bestest and most enjoyable moments of her life and bitter's too.


A mixed filling gathered in her. For sometime she couldnt even turn her eyes off. The window covers were dancing with wind's rythem. But it didnt matter much for Megha as her eyes were stuck to insider view of the room. A big wall painting of her and Mohan's was hanging on the front wall which Megha could see in a direct way. Mohan was kissing Megha's forehead in that picture. The picture brought more tears in her eyes. She was all lost in her old memories when got her senses back with her phone's ringtone. It was a call from Navi. After talking with her Megha found herself little stronger than before. Her head was talking to go away from there but it was her heart which didnt allow her to take back neither her feets nor her eyes. So the only thing she did, watching and remembering all the moments with Mohan in that house and room as well. Suddenly she felt her legs too weak to catch her weight. So she graved the 'Jhula' beside her and sat on it staring at their bedroom as Flash back of some sweetest moments with Mohan arrived in her mind and made her way to the Memory Lane.


She reminded about a night after a same rainyday as this day.


It was night when Mohan came back home lately. Megha was waiting for him at the door as children got sleep earlier. Mohan came quite late so Megha was little angry on him. But when she saw that Mohan coming top to bottom wet she forgot all her complains and ran to gave a towel to him. Then Mohan went to the washroom as per Megha's order and Megha went to kitchen to make black tea for Mohan. When Megha returned to their room she saw Mohan was not there. She also checked the washroom which was blank too. Now Megha got sudden tensed because she didnt see Mohan to go outside. Megha was about to leave the room when Mohan came behind the door and huged her from behind silently. Megha got scared and about to shout when Mohan turned her towards him and placed his fingers on Megha's lips. Megha was not very sure about the situation so she tried to say something. But Mohan warned her that if she contiues to avoid him it can be his lips to shut Megha's mouth up. With this words Mohan pulled her in his arms and placed his face on her neck leaving soft kisses. Megha moaned in pleasure but tried to pull Mohan away from herself by her hands. Mohan catched her wrist by his other hand and start rubbing his not so clean saved face in Megha's neck made Megha giggled. Now Mohan leave Megha for a while and rushed to close the door. Megha moved to the window to open it for some fresh air but Mohan came back to her and grabed her hands asking if she wants to share their personal moments with this Mohalla wale and he smirked. Megha laughs and said that nothing is gonna happen which need to close all the windows. This time Mohan lifted her in his arms and turned to the bed. Now Megha had a clear view whats gonna happen next so she start teasing Mohan which made Mohan to leave Megha on her foot. They both started laughing and Mohan pulled Megha closed to him making her crash with his chest and started walking backwards to the wall which has the painting of them on it. Megha closed her eyes tightly as Mohan kissed all over her face. Seeing Megha's eyes closed Mohan stopped kissing her and gently lifted her face and told Megha to look in his eyes. She listened him as a kid does with teacher.


In Mohan's eyes she found trust, maturity, respect everything. He was the same person whom she thought as a best friend, she knows it very well how much the person loves her and respect her. But all those feelings in her eyes seemed beyond this world today. Megha gently placed one of his hand on Mohan's face and thanked God to give such a nice person in her life and tears rolled her eyes to her chick. Mohan placed moist kisses on her eyes to her cheeks saying that he will give all the happiness to her in the world. So no need to waste her tears. Megha catchd Mohan's hand asking a promise to never let her alone in this world till her last breath. Mohan recatched her hands in his another hand and promised that he wont if she herself tells to do even not though.


They were standing lostly in each others eyes when light went off and Megha closes her eyes in fear and hugged Mohan tightly. Mohan also hugged her back in his arms making her feel safe.


Suddenly Megha opens her eyes hearing a voice. She finds herself in dark. She looks behind following the voice and watches Navi to come towards her with candle as it is evening now. Navi comes and askes her if she is fine or not. Megha takes some time to realise herself that it was her imagination and those days were different before 12 years when Mohan was there to sucure her in his arm not nowadays. Megha stands up from that Jhula and finds that all her clothes has become dirty and she runs to recollect them. Navi also helpes her and both goes downstairs.


PS...i ve just tried to penned down my thoughts. If u like it do hit the Like button and comments also. (Criticizm is also most welcomed) 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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bah peu ki likhecho...durdanto👍🏼👏
Edited by sona02 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahem ahem ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

can i breath now?
☺️ 🤣its breath stopper OS ☺️

you made my day😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amisha.Laher

ahem ahem☺️☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

can i breath now?
☺️ 🤣its breath stopper OS ☺️

you made my day😳 🤗


Oh Thank U Ami Dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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peu :



amisha is absolutely right, it's a breathstopper OS, so no question of criticizing .. rather i would suggest you to carry forward the story into an SS😃, it has enough potential for that😃. it's been fabulous so go ahead with it. good luck👍🏼 !



amisha :


dear, if you find this a breath stopper, then just go and have a peek into the numerous SS and FFs in Arjun forum and let me know your reaction, of course if you manage to stay in your right senses till then ! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@polly

Arjun forum means tv show Ajrun star plus waala? BTW mere liye MM ka OS hi kahi hai😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Polly...Thanx yaar...but right now i ve no plans to make it a SS...

But thanks for the Sujhav...agar pplz like krte hai to aage sochenge...


@Ami...maine to isse v khatarnak OSs padhi hu wo v serials ke forum me...main v likh sakti hu ...i guess wo 18+ ke group me aata hai n permission lene padhte honge...ya phir kuch Disclaimer dene hote hai...i dont know...

But Ami do u want something more than this on MM ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Peu, I'm hiding my face right now in extreme shyness. 😆 I told you to pen down your thoughts, and now I'm smiling, blushing, daydreaming and what not. ☺️

Let me gather my senses. This OS has to be sizzling, heart and breath stopper. *sigh* ☺️

I'm confessing something. I have written hotter stuff than this, but to imagine MM doing all these things is something I'd not do in my wildest dreams. 😆
Edited by -MohanKiMeera- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a passionate scene you have created Peu
It completely lead me back to NBT 1.0 and the best of Post-Marriage moment which can come in the imagination.You just made it absolutely perfect
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Megher_Palok

@Polly...Thanx yaar...but right now i ve no plans to make it a SS...

But thanks for the Sujhav...agar pplz like krte hai to aage sochenge...


@Ami...maine to isse v khatarnak OSs padhi hu wo v serials ke forum me...main v likh sakti hu ...i guess wo 18+ ke group me aata hai n permission lene padhte honge...ya phir kuch Disclaimer dene hote hai...i dont know...

But Ami do u want something more than this on MM ??



your choice babes IF ke rules bas yaad rakh na😆

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