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Ayesha A

@-ayeshabfd-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello guys, so this is my first OS ever so I know this may not reach your expectations so throw your tomatoes if you want 😆 but please comment on how you think this is.

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Part 1, page 1

Part 2, page 2
part 3, page 4

part 4a page 7

part 4b page 9

Part 5 page 12

part 6 page 15

Part 7 page 18

Part 8 page 23

Part 9 page 25

Part 10 page 29

Part 11 page 35

The Os is set in Goa Where Virika have gone for their 2nd honeymoon as virat and manvi insisted them because they wanted them to take time off the family cheos. (karans death)

Part 1

It was Viren and Jeevika's first Morning in Goa after they got to their luxurious and well decorated hotel room last night. Because of the tiring flight Virika were exhausted, therefore they slept longer than usual. The alarm set off at 8:00 am

"Jeevika.. turn it off pleaseee" moaned viren while struggling to open his eyes.

"No please viren ji i cant reach, you turn it off" Mumbled jeevika trying to hide her head in his well build chest.

Viren gave up and tried to get up when a petite hand pulled him back. 'Viren ji dont go anywhere" said jeevika while pouting cutely.

" Im just turning the alarm off hunny, just one second" He chuckled at his wife's childishness.

Viren turned off the alarm and went back to sleep while hugging Jeevika.

It was almost 1pm when suddenly virika heard a loud bang over powering the sound of aggressive cries in the background. This shocked them both making them jump out of the bed. 'V.v..viren ji what's happening' whispered jeevika' Viren cupped her face assuring that everything would be alright...

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I know this is short but I dont know if i should carry on, so if you like it please like and comment and if you dont still feel free to comment and throw sandals. 😆😊

Edited by -ayeshabfd- - 13 years ago

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KtYammie13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow wow wow...

You rocked it..

I cant believe its your first attempt..

That was a great one..

Please please please update soon...

Cant wait for the suspense...

I'll die of anxiety...

Edited by laurenza.carson - 13 years ago

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Ayesha A

@-ayeshabfd-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: laurenza.carson
Wow wow wow...
You rocked it..
I cant believe its your first attempt..
That was a great one..
Please please please update soon...
Cant wait for the suspense...
I'll die of anxiety...

Thank you, i'm glad you liked it! And dont worry ill update soon hopefully 😊

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vishwa patel

@-vish-

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome start

can't wait 2 read more

plz continue soon n do pm me

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KtYammie13

@KtYammie13

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshabfd1

Thank you, i'm glad you liked it! And dont worry ill update soon hopefully 😊

Sorry for bugging you..

but when r you gonna update it..?

I'm really getting impatient..

Please PM me..

and update super soon...

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Ayesha A

@-ayeshabfd-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: laurenza.carson

Sorry for bugging you..
but when r you gonna update it..?
I'm really getting impatient..
Please PM me..
and update super soon...

It's alright 😆 & i'm going to start writing it now so earliest is later today 😊 dw ill pm

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KtYammie13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshabfd1

It's alright 😆 & i'm going to start writing it now so earliest is later today 😊 dw ill pm

Cool...

Do update soon...

Loved you for this one... ❤️

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Henna B

@x.Henna.x

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Posted: 13 years ago

No sandals only roses and lots of them.
Can't believe this is your first OS,hats off to you, it's aweeesomeee! Really loved it, pls continue soon and pm me.
I really ❤️ it. 👏

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome

pm me when u update

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Ayesha A

@-ayeshabfd-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Part 2

"V.v..viren ji what's happening?" Whispered Jeevika, viren cupped her face assuring her that everything would be alright...

"Hmm I'll go check.." Viren uttered.

He curiously opened the door, all he could see was a croud of people rushing to the exit screaming " Get out, get out, run for your lives!"

This left viren confused and shocked at the same time, he didn't know what to do as all that was going on in his mind was that he needed to protect his life, jeevika.

He slammed the door shut.

"We're leaving right now, quickly get only your packed suit case so we can leave as soon as possible."

"O.. Ok viren ji" replied jeevika. She didn't ask him what happened because she knew something was definitely wrong by the worried expression on his face.

Soon later both viren and jeevika were ready to leave, they both held hands and looked into each others eyes showing that they would support each other no matter what happened.

All of a sudden what viren had expected happened. The loud bang came again shaking the whole room, this time it was ten times louder and more powerful. Now jeevika was petrified so she hugged viren and closed her eyes waiting for the noise to go.

Meanwhile viren was lost in his own world. He knew what had happened and why the people were screaming. He knew what the sounds were. They were bombs..

'What am I going to do if anything happens to jeev.. No! Nothings going to happen to her... I had promised that I would not let anything happen to her on our special day. Our wedding. And I will fulfill that promise even if I have to sacrifice my own life..'

Just then viren came back to his sences the when he heard jeevika cry with shock. He quickly wiped the tear off her damp cheek and shook his head, trying to tell her not to cry. As viren couldn't see her crying he hugged her as tight as he could and wished he could stay in that position untill his last breath but she was human too.

"Viren ji im scared" cried jeevika

"Jeevika hide under the bed"

"but viren ji"

"just do as I say, i promise everything will be alright."he assured her.

Viren kissed her jeevikas forehead before she agreed to hide under the bed.

"I'll be right back, don't worry," without saying anything further, viren opened the door.

Just then the furious apearance of the smoke bulged in the room but this didn't stop viren to go out. It was his only hope to find a way out of this dangerous place, to protect his angel, jeevika.

Precap

In the room.

In a flash, one of the walls crashed on to the ground, leaving unconcuous and injured jeevika...

"Jeevika!!!"

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Phew! Finally done, it took alot of effort to write this. I hope its reached up your expectations,, please comment and like, it will only take at most 2 mins😊

Edited by ayeshabfd1 - 13 years ago

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