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Okay guys I am writing a sequel for this FF. All the credits goes to Karina(Kays94). She wanted me to write a sequel. And Thanks for liking this story. I hope I get a good response for the sequel as well. And people who want a pm have to leave a comment. I hope you guys like the first update.

Part 1
Jeevika was with Hiya in her nursery.Viren was getting ready for his office. Hiya was in a playful mood. She was playing with her mother's hair and with the button's of her dress. Just then Viren entered the room and saw the two most beautiful girls spending time with each other.
Viren: Seems like someone is having fun.
Jeevika and Hiya looked at Viren. Hiya started smiling seeing her father and started jumping in Jeevika's laps. Viren sat on his feet and came near Hiya.
Viren: Hi beautiful.
Hiya smiles got wider and she hugged her mother.
Viren: Lo tareef mein ki aur pyar Mumma pe araha hai.
Jeevika hugged her: Jealous?
Viren: Jealous and me? Noways. Both of us know that she is loves me more.
Jeevika: HAHAHA Good one :P
Viren: I'm serious
Jeevika: Tumhye kaisye pata?
Viren: If my daughter's mother love me the most then obviously even my daughter will love me the most :P
Jeevika started smiling and blushing at the same time. And Viren kept on staring at her. Both of them were lost in each other's eyes. Just then Hiya started crying. (Attention Seeker :P)

Jeevika: Aww what happened? Why are you crying? Hiya ssshh. My baby.

She tried to calm her but Hiya was still crying. Viren took Hiya from Jeevika's arms and started walking around the room. Soon Hiya was asleep. He made her lay in her chot and put the blanket on her so she was warm.

He went to the kitchen, where Jeevika was busy making the breakfast. Viren hugged her from back and kissed her shoulder. Jeevika closed her eyes.

Jeevika: Is Hiya sleeping?

Viren: Yes. resting his chin on her shoulder. His eyes were closed and was trying to romance with his wife.

Jeevika: Aren't you getting late for your office?

Viren: No. nuzzling her wife's neck. Jeevika closed her eyes
Jeevika: Vir..en...
Viren: Sshhh

Viren turned her around and kissed her forehead. And started approching her lips. They were only inches apart just then Jeevika stopped whispered.

Jeevika: I have to do lots of work.


She was about to go when he held her from her wrist and moved close to her.

Viren smirk: Before going at least give me a goodbye kiss.
Jeevika blushed.
Viren whispered: I'm waiting.

Jeevika looked in his eyes and move closed to him. Viren was looking at her lips. Jeevika moved further. Viren closed her eyes but Jeevika kissed him on his cheeks and whispered: Goodbye. And ran away.

Okay guys enough for now. I hope it was long enough. And the people who'll be commenting on this ff they'll be getting the pms. So guys start liking and commenting. Guys I won't be able to update for 2 weeks as my papers are starting from Tuesday. Thats why I'll be updating all my stories today.

I'll be update the next part after at least 5 pgs.
People who want pms please add me in your buddy list.


Index
Part 1:Page 1
Part 2:Page 6
Part 3:Page 10
Part 4:Page 15
Part 5:Page 19
Part 6:Page 24
Part 7:Page 28
Part 8:Page 31
Part 9:Page 34
Part 10:Page 38
Part 11:Page 40

Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago

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..Amrita.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey !!! Brilliant start haju ... Continue this
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful start...šŸ‘
Continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woot woot! 🄳
Loved the update. :D
I can so imagine Hiya! 😳 Such a cute attention seeker. šŸ˜†
Loved the last scene. ;) Great one. :D
Viren,Jeevika and Hiya. Cute little family. <3
Edited by -Deeps- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon! and pm me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sequel to such an awesome story

hiya is soo cute

the two beaytiful girls if viren life

awesome updste
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update šŸ‘
continue soon !!!!!!!!!!!šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome restart to college life šŸ‘šŸ‘
I love it so much 😃
Continue soon šŸ˜›
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res



wow a big wala thanks to karina for its her motivation!!!!
superb update...loved the way viren called her hi beautifulšŸ˜†...
PS i love hiya's name...😳
trying to grab attention n šŸ˜†
virika romance...😳
excellent job hajru dear...as perfect as the first part itself..šŸ‘
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS...šŸ¤—
will wait for ur next update !!
..ā¤ļø


Edited by sanjana_cool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazinggg startt!

I love itt! :)))

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