fanfic

hey guys this is my frist fan fic soo please tell me how it is... i new to this type of things and excuse my hindi...

It starts off when Kaajjal is at the police station .... The police officer asks Kaajjal if she knew anyone that is respectable and Kaajjal is thinking of the hurtful things said by Dev Pratap Singh.." meri zindagi aur muja tumhari zaroorat nahi aur main tumha kabhi maaf nahi karsakthay hoon..." "Vho din meri zindagi ka saab sai karaab din tha jus din main tumsai mila tha tumsa milna sa zayda mera saath aur kuch bura nahi hosaktha.... Kaajjal keeps thinking about those last words Dev said to her when he was leaving... "aur ab hum vaisa jeeyangay jaisa jungle ke us raat milay thay do anjaana jho ek dosra sai kabhi milay na thay ek dosra ko jaanthay thaak nahi " the inspector says that she has no one to call and stop wasting her time and says to the officer to take her away just when the officer is grabbing kaajjal's hand kaajjal says that she knows someone and his name is DEV PRATAP SINGH.... the inspector thinks to herself that what a liar kaajjal is but then says fine i'll call him and if he can give me a guarntee he knows you you'll be free... Dev comes and says he knows Kaajjal and that she has nothing to do with the whole issue... Kaajjal is free.... Kaajjal runs after Dev and thanks him Dev and Kaajjal have a eye lock session where they look into eachothers eyes and Dev says in a rude tone" kabhi galthi sai mujhse milna ke koshish maat karna" and leaves.. Kaajjal is thinking that why does Dev put up an act infront of her... she is thinking to herself why does she care about Dev so much" main kyon uska baara main soch thi hoon? kyoon uski aankhen kuch aur kathi hain aur hoot kuch aur?"....

if you like it i'll keep upto it if not i'll stop...

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its good....i wanna read more...lol

thnks, it was good
can u rute more pleaseeeeee con' 😆

dont even think about stopping 😛 😛 its to good!!

OMG, eye lock session! Great choice of words! 👏 Wow, pls continue! 😊

the first fan fiction of the forum...............awsome yaar..............will wait for the next part.........

PS:this fan fic shud have a name dont u think so

Keep up the good work

Luv,

Shagun 😳

thanks everyone for letting me know you guys liked it soo now i'll continue

Recap Kaajjal runs after Dev and thanks him Dev and Kaajjal have a eye lock session where they look into eachothers eyes and Dev says in a rude tone" kabhi galthi sai mujhse milna ke koshish maat karna" and leaves.. Kaajjal is thinking that why does Dev put up an act infront of her... she is thinking to herself why does she care about Dev so much" main kyon uska baara main soch thi hoon? kyoon uski aankhen kuch aur kathi hain aur hoot kuch aur?"....
Starts off with Kaajjal walking towards radio city and asks if she can use the phone as she knows that her papa and bua are waiting for her call and must be worried... she goes and phones them and lies " papa main theek hoon meri fikar karna chor do main kush hoon mumbai main" her papa believes her and tells her to take rest... the next morning Kaajjal goes to meet the manager and he asks her where was she the knight before and that she was suppose to meet with him, Kaajjal has this scared look and doesn't say anything except that why didn't anyone pick her up at the station the manager says" app tori daar intazaar kar laythi tho driver wahaan ajatha" the girls at the radio station are very rude to Kaajjal and give her nasty looks.... Kaajjal is about to leave when Dev comes and says:" Kaajjal ek raat kaliya jail main thi, tum na kyun nahi bathaya ka is liya tum nahi ayi.." Kaajjal looks shocked as the manager says " kya tum ek raat jail main rahi" kaajjal says that she was innocent and it was an accident and the manager says" mujhe kuch nahi sunna meri office sai niklo aur tum isi waqt yeh job shor do" kaajjal is in tears and leavs. Dev is happy as he got Kaajjal back he thinks to himself" ka tum na kya socha tha Ms Kaajjal Behl ka main tumko aisa chordooga main appnay dushman ko nahi chortha" and starts to laugh.... as Kaajjal goes to the mandir to ask why gannu bhayya did this to her as he is suppose to be on her side she starts to cry and leaves.as she walks it starts to rain and she gets really wet their are these goons and they start to misbehave with Kaajjal. she starts toi run and runs right infront of Dev's car and he gets out and see's why Kajjal is running and yell's at the guys the guys leave and Dev just stares at Kajjal the background music is a very romantic "Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage Hone lage hone lage Chaahne jab lage dil kisi ki khushi
Dillagi ye nahin ye hai dil ki lagi Aandhiyon ko dabaane se kya fayda
Pyaar dil mein chhupaane se kya fayda Jaan se pyaara jab dildaar hone lage Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage Hone lage hone lage" they keep staring and the episode ends.


tell me what you guys think
😳 brownie

sweet...................lets c wht actually happens........... interesting will wait for the next part. 👏


Luv,

Shagun

Shagun its d 2nd ff there is 1 more 😊

nice ff wil wait 4 d next part 👏