When Love Comes Ur Way-P6, Pg.3Note Pg.3

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This is a new Jai-Bani fanfic with a difference.

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This is a story of six couples and their lives.

Aditya-Jiggs- A couple who have been married for more than 35 years inspite of ups and downs in their marriage it has been successful.

Ranveer-Raashi- They are known as the ideal pair. But cracks have started to appear in their marriage.

Saahil-Rano- They recently got married. Marriage to them is having a gala time. But they are about to realize that being married is not about fun and games it is also about commitment and responsiblity.

Anu-Rohit- Two people who eloped and got married. It was a instant decision and now they cannot stand each other. They have a two year old daughter and a one year old son. Will there marriage survive?

Pushkar-Pia- Two people who got married because they are in love with each other. But soon both realize there is more to marriage than love. Will their marriage survive?

Jai-Bani - Two people who have been married before. Two have been divorced. Jai and Bani are taking their marriage one day at a time as they do not want this to be unsuccessful like the last time.

Also, please note all these couples are friends. No one is related to one another. All these couples lives will intertwined with each other when all of them meet by accident one day and that sets a chain of motion which will create storm in each of the couples lifes.

Part-I

Pushkar is shouting at Pia,"What is your problem? Why is that I cannot have breakfast ever on time?" Is it too much to ask for?

Pia is yelling and saying, " Just because u r late does not mean u take it out on me." I am not ur servant mind you I am ur wife.

Pushkar just dismisses this as he does not want to get into a fight this early in the morning with her. Pia's tantrum are becoming unbearable for Pushkar. She does not do anything but expects everything.

Pushkar justs picks up his bag and slams the house door on his way out. He did not have his breakdast. Pia hears the door slam and she is like suit ur self. Who cares?

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Ranveer is sleeping in late. Raashi is waking him up. He is getting late for office. Just when she is about to wake him up she touches his forehead and finds he is suffering from high temperature.


She is worried goes to the cupboard to look for a thermometer and while searching she accidentally drops Ranveers wallet and all his belongings fall on the floor. Raashi looks Ranveer's way thinking he is going to get agitated.


But Ranveer is too ill even to react. Just as she is putting his belongings back in the wallet she sees a bill. What she sees stuns her to no end. Ranveer had recently purchased two expensive ladies cologne and sarees about a week back. But Raashi had not recieved any gifts from him in such a long time. She thinks he is having an affair. She looks at the bill keeps it with herself and takes the thermometer to see Ranveer's temperature.

She will deal with this later. Now is not the time she decides. She will not ask or confront Ranveer but will try to catch him red-handed.
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Aditya and Jiggs are having morning tea together. After 35 years of marriage life seems quiet now. They run a resort in Khandala together. Next week is going to busy that is what Aditya is telling Jiggs and then Jiggs is like I know all are rooms are booked.

But sitting at the terrace of their house they both smiled at each other and said well until then lets rest. And both cheers their tea as usual.

Jiggs thinks life was always not so rosy and nice. Thank god!!! they worked on their marriage and did not give in. She is thankful that now they are bearing the fruits of their marriage.

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Anu and Rohit two people who got married about 3 years back. They eloped and were very much in love. But then kids happened and things changed for them. Love took a back seat and responsibilities took the front seat.

They keep blaming each other for their miserable life.


Rohit cannot hold a job and Anu works two jobs to make ends meet. But Rohit sometimes goes to work or is outside with his friends and this is becoming a problem for Anu as it puts a lot of burden on her. She not only has to manage her jobs but also do the household chores and take care of the kids.

Anu keeps thinking what she thought and what she got. This is not what she expected out of marriage.

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Saahil and Rano two people who got married because they were in love and both come from a rich families so money was never problem for them. They got everything at their finger tips and do not have any value for money. For them marriage is a picnic.

It has been over 3 months of their married life. They are still on their honeymoon.
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Jai and Bani two people who got married recently after each got out of a bad relationship. They do not know whether this marriage will work or not.

Jai and Bani got married because of parental pressure. This time for both it was arranged marriage as both had burned their hands in love marriage by marrying the wrong person that is what they thought.

Both were not getting any younger. Jai was the owner of the Walia Group of Industries and Bani was the owner of Dixit Event Management Company. For them this marriage meant to keep appearance in the society as each made it clear to the other that this was just a marriage of convience and nothing more.
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Preview for the Next Part-
Pushkar sees Pia with someone else.
Raashi follows Ranveer.
Jiggs and Aditya prepare the hotel for the busy week ahead.
Anu and Rohit have a big fight.
Saahil-Rano come back from the honeymoon to get ready for a weekend away with some friends.
Jai-Bani have to go for a corporate function together.
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This is a little different ff. Close to my heart. As the couples though are the characters of KS. But the incidents depicted are real life as this has happened to some close friends of mine.
It will have its light moments and believe me u will like the twist but it will on a serious side also.
Pls bear with me.

I will give nice romantic, comic, emotional and mysterious intrigue in each couples life.

Just need to be patient with me as I am trying to build a story and present characters to u so when the onslaught begins u know why it is coming ur way.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice start 👏 ...its a six in one offer 😉

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wow six in one

awesome start

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WHOA manish...gr8 start...yaar kitni ff hai...how do u manage!
keep up the good work! 👏
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Wow.... Awsome👏👏Read 1 get 5 free😉😆

PrInCy😳

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Thank you for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-II

Jiggs and Aditya have began to get their hotel ready for the week where they will be sold out. They run a small hotel with 80 rooms and have a small restaurant. Both Jiggs and Aditya handle the hotel as a team.

They both start checking the supplies and see if they need to order things for the week ahead. They want to ensure that all their supplies and other operational aspects are in order to ensure a smooth week when the hotel is sold out and there are no unnecessary delays.

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Anu and Rohit are again in the fighting mode. The reason being the same old cribbing from Rohit that she is not taking care of his friends and their eating and drinking needs.

Anu tells Rohit she has things to do she is not free like him. Unlike him she has a job and kids to take care off. Rohit's friends try to diffuse the situation but it only aggrevates it. And things begin to heat up between Anu and Rohit.

Rohit blames Anu for ruining his life and Anu does the same. Both kids start to cry seeing and hearing their parents fight but that also does not seem to stop them.

In the heat of the moment, Rohit slaps Anu but Anu does not take lying back and she slaps Rohit.

This stuns Rohit and he leaves the room.
Anu just stands there looking furious.
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Saahil and Rano return for their extended honeymoon after 3 months. They come back from Bahamas and once they return home they start to party again.

Both Saahil and Rano's parents are not happy with this. They blame themseleves for this mess. They cannot understand when their children will own up to their responsibilty and start acting like adults. They hope against hope they will live to see that day.

At a party Saahil and Rano's friends are going to Khandala for the weekend and they invite Saahil-Rano. Needless to say they jump on the opportunity to party again and enjoy themselves.

The group begins to make plans for the trip to Khandala.
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Jai and Bani have to go for a corporate event. Jai is being honoured there as the "Entreprenuer of the Year" it is a huge ocassion for Jai Walia and the Walia Group of Industries. Jai is excited about the same.

He has worked hard to get to this position. And somewhere in his heart he is happy to share this moment with Bani but is too proud to say it.

Bani is proud of Jai. She is gloating that her husband has won this award and is proud of his achievement. She is delighted with the fact that she is sharing this moment with Jai but does not want to show her happiness to Jai Walia.

Afterall, they both think this is a marriage of convience and making appearances only.

They are about to be proved so wrong.
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It has been a week since Ranveer has recovered from his illness. He has gone to work. Ranveer decides to take Raashi out for dinner and Raashi agrees that decide to meet at a restaurant in the city.

It has been late Pushkar got out of the office. Pia decided they will go out for dinner as she did not want to cook tonight.

Pushkar was too tired and too use to it by now and decided to go with the flow.

There was no use talking to Pia as she will only do what she wants. Hurting others feeling including Pushkar's feeling meant nothing to her.

Raashi had reached a little early to the restaurant and was waiting for Ranveer she was sitting on the window table when she thought she saw Ranveer from the corner of her eyes and decided to follow him once she confirmed herself that it was Ranveer.

Pushkar was reaching at the restaurant when he saw Pia hugging another man. His world came crashing down and he could not believe this was happening. As he moved forward to take a futher look of who the man was he bumped into someone it was Raashi.

Both of them were seeing their partners hug each other and were standing still not believing the betrayal and the heart-break that was about to happen.

Raashi mumbled- I cannot believe he is with that woman.

Pushkar mumbled- Who is that man?

Both looked at each other as both had heard the last remark made by each other.

A look of surprise and sadness came to their faces as both realized that they were seeing each others spouses in embrace.
Both Pushkar-Raashi looked hurt.
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Preview for Next Part-
Raashi-Pushkar meet to discuss their marriages.
Aditya-Jiggs busy week starts at their hotel.
Saahil-Rano check in Jiggs&Aditya motels.
Anu-Rohit go to counselling to seek help in a bid to save their marriage for the sake of their children.
Jai thanks Bani for her support in his thanks speech and Bani is stunned.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

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gr88 parts plz continue sooon
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yeah sooooooooooo cool.......do continue 👏
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awesome fanfic.....i think i see where ur fanfic is going.....if i ever have any questions i will PM.......it has a great intro and an awesome starting.....continue soon and keep up the good work...... 😃 😃

CK❤️
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-III
After Rohit leaves the room leaving Anu furious things do not end here. It starts to become a war zone for both of them. Each day the slightest provocation on each others part ensures in a fight it is like they are looking for an excuse to hurl abuses at each other.

Neither Anu nor Rohit understand that their fighting is affecting there children. For small children to see their parents fighting everyday is not a childhood or atmosphere which all children dream of.

Everytime the yelling between Anu and Rohit starts the children began to cry and this time for some reason both Anu and Rohit run to their children and with love and affection of parents put them to sleep.

They both decide that life cannot go on like this. Anu suggests that they go to a marriage counseller and seek guidance as neither Anu nor Rohit want their children to grow up in a broken homes as both Anu and Rohit had grown.

This time Rohit agrees and both for once sit down and start talking about which marriage counseller to go to.
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Aditya and Jiggs busy week starts at the hotel. Since it is located in Khandala the weekend are more busy than weekdays but for some reason the entire hotel is sold out for the whole week.

Jiggs and Aditya have named their hotel,"Green Monsoon" since it is located in the midst of the mountains and greenery of Khandala.

All supplies and other essentials have come and they are well-stocked and both Jiggs and Aditya are ready to take charge of the hotel this busy week.

Both Jiggs-Aditya do not know themselves that the coming weekend will change their and six other couples lifes forever.
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Saahil and Rano tell their parents and in-laws that they are going to Khandala for a week when they come back next week then they will have a family talk. Until then they need to chill and relax.

Both Saahil and Rano's parents are stunned and do not know what to say anymore. They will wait until next Monday and if things do not work out through talks and both the parents have decided to take a recourse to make their point to their children and this time there was no turning back.

Both Saahil and Rano go to their rooms and pack and in no time are on their way with their friends to Khandala. They are going in a Sumo and all are enjoying drinking and having fun.

By the time they reach "Green Monsoon" it is late evening. They check in the hotel with a group of six of their friends and are too noisy at the reception.

Both Jiggs and Aditya see this but remain quiet thinking young generation these days seems less and less respectful of others. By the time Aditya decides to go and talk to the group they have started to move out from the hotel lobby and hence he stops.

Saahil and Rano reach their room and put their backs and relax for sometime before they get ready to party whole night.
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Jai and Bani reach the where the function is taking place. So many people from the financial and business world have come for this event.

The media is in full force and as soon as Jai-Bani step out of their car shutterbugs began to freeze every move made by Jai-Bani.

Even the television station covering this function now is showing live feedback of Jai and Bani Walia entering the event. It is all a big show for both Jai-Bani.

Jai-Bani hand in hand are smiling and facing the media and the T.V. cameras and avoiding the barrage of questions coming from the inquisitive and nosy reporters.

They keep smiling and waving to the media as they walk in the auditorium and get seated near to the stage where the event is about to get underway.

The Corporate awards are a big booster to all companies. Companies who win these awards are able to command even more respect in the market plus the image and the market value of that company rises to no end.

The award starts and lot of awards are given in various fields to lot of deserving corporate honchos.

Until the award of the evening is announced and that award is "The Enterperenuer of the Year" and it goes to Jai Walia.

Jai Walia gets up and walks on the stage with the entire corporate world is applausing him and Bani is also giving him applause in fact she stands up and encourages him. He takes the award and is asked to say a few words.
Jai Walia says- " Good evening Ladies and Gentleman, first of all I would like to thank the honoury jury members for presenting me this award. I would also like to thank all the people of the Walia Group of Industry who have worked day and night to make this possible.

This award is the sheer dedication of my team at the Walia Group of Industry and on behalf of my team I accept this award.

Also, I would like to thank my wife Bani for always been there for me and giving me her love and support. Thank you dear without you this would never have happened. And he takes the trophy and waves it around.

Bani is stunned, shocked and pleased to hear herself being mentioned in Jai Walia's thank you speech.

As Jai sits next to her both look at each other and for the first time there is an attraction between them.

Both Jai-Bani think is this the start of a relationship that they always wanted and could not have or are they just deciphering more than what is required?
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Both Raashi and Pushkar are shocked at seeing the betrayal given to them by their spouses. They decide not to confront them but before they leave to meet their spouses at the restaurant, both take each other mobile numbers and decide to meet at a nearby restaurant tomorrow for lunch.

The rest of the evening goes well for both the couples.

Next day during lunch break both Raashi and Pushkar meet. Pushkar had called Raashi to make sure that they were still meeting and Raashi had said yes.

Once they met they both discussed whether to carry on with the marriage or decide to leave their spouses. But both felt that they needed to give their relationships one last chance before deciding such an extreme step.


Raashi told Pushkar that they were going to Kahandala this weekend and to her amazement even Pushkar told that they were also going to Khandala this weekend.


Raashi tells them that they are staying at "Green Monsoon" and Pushkar is shocked as they are also staying there.

Is this a concidence or were they spouses planning to cheat on them with there presence? Anyway, both decided this weekend would decide the fate of their marriage.

They could have said it better. Infact they had hit the bulls eye and did not know about it.

Preview for Next Part-
All of our six couples land in "Green Monsoon"
Blast of the past between Jiggs-Jai-Aditya?
Saahil-Rano have their first fight.
Anu-Rohit come to Khandala in a bid to save their marriage.
Ranveer-Pia get caught by Raashi-Pushkar.
Jai-Bani things start to heat up between them.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish



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