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Posted: 13 years ago
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"12 saal pehele Indore Station se mera baccha bhi kidnap hua tha , Anu !"

"12 saal se mera beta mere se dur hai .. Aur jab tak woh mujhe nahi mil jaata, sukoon se nahi jee paaunga main .."

"Kisi ko dia hua vaada pura karna hai .. Warna issi guilt ke saath jeeta rahunga ki jin logo ko maine pyaar kia unhe hi itna dard dia .."

Mohan's words echoed in Nanhi's mind as she silently cried, looking blankly at herself in the mirror in the washroom. Her lips moved, but words could hardly escape.

Numbly, she wiped off her tears, took out her contact lenses, recycled them, and wore her pink spectacles.

**

"I need the report now .." Mohan ordered the employee in frustration on phone, and the next moment, he heard a knock at his door.

"Come in .." Mohan said in a bossy tone, and Nanhi obliged.

"Boss, kuch dena tha aap ko .." Nanhi said to Mohan in a weak voice.

Mohan, engrossed in doing some typing work in his laptop, ordered her , "Table pe rakhdo .. Aur haan , woh child kidnapping racket scam wali file laake do mujhe .."

Nanhi nodded, and kept in on the table .. Tears flowed down her cheeks again. She remembered the days of her friendship with Mohan , her Spiderman , her coolest dad. How wrong she thought of him , she thought and sighed ! How couldn't she trust him? She questioned herself ..

Without saying a word, Nanhi took out the file Mohan asked , from the shelf, kept it near his desktop , and left from there ..

**

An hour passed , and the clock struck 5 pm .. Mohan was about to leave , when he noticed a wooden box kept on his desk .. " Yeh zaroor uss ladki ne rakkha hoga .."

Hurriedly, he took it in his hand, and opened it's lid, and there he got the biggest surprise of his life. His eyes widened , and tears rolled down as he saw the photos of him , Megha, Nanhi and Addu ...

He looked at them one after one , and went down the memory lane, forgetting the world , but he had to be back in reality when he saw a photograph of Megha and the reporter ,working under him , who was wearing the pink specs of his Chawanni .. He was dumbfounded , and covered his face with his palm in speechlessness .. "Nanhi !"

He took few minutes to register the fact he knew just then, in his mind .. He was at loss of words .. Never in his dreams would he had expected to meet HIS Nanhi in this way .. How could not he recognize her? He questioned himself. He had the flashbacks of working with her , and realized that her face always looked upset or painful whenever she was with him. How could not he notice that? He wondered ...

**

Immediately , he rushed outside to Nanhi's desk , but was disappointed , not to find her there .. He ran outside in the parking lot , and sighed in relief , seeing her scooty .. He looked around in desperation , and finally the idea of calling her stuck his mind ..

As he called her , he heard the phone ringing .. He turned back , only to find her standing before him with tears in her eyes ...

" Aye chawanni .. sunna .. "
"Spiderman .. "
"Tumhe jalebis acchi lagti hai ?" "Bilkul nahi .."
"Spiderman aur meri mummy ki shaadi .."
"Maine naa khajrana mandir mein ek wish maangi thi .. "
" Tu chaahe jitni bhi badi ho jaaye .. mere liye humesha tu chawanni hi rahegi .. Mohan ka promise hai tujhse , ki woh humesha tera Spiderman banke rahega .."

The conversations , the meetings , the laughter, the promises , the hugs etc. - Mohan and Nanhi remembered their golden days as they walked towards each other ..

Nanhi , unable to hold back any longer ,started crying loudly in front of Mohan , who silently was shedding tears with her .. They both continued to cry , looking at each other .. Sheer happiness was clearly shown in their facial expressions ..

Nanhi felt relaxed to have the hate for her Spiderman OUT of her heart , while Mohan was so overwhelmingly joyful to see his Chawanni after so long !

"S - S .." Nanhi was not able to say a word even ..

Mohan , understanding what she was going through , wiped off his tears , and smiled, "Aye Ch--" He paused and took a deep breath .. "Aye Chawanni .. Roti kya hai .."

Nanhi cried more , and pulled him in a tight hug .. Mohan embraced his best friend, his daughter back and sighed , feeling himself the happiest person in the world .. In the midst of sneezing due to sobbing , he said teasingly to cheer her up , "Ladkio ki ek hi problem hai .. Koi kahe ki naa roye toh aur rone lagti hai .. Tu bhi naa .. Chawanni ! "

Nanhi broke in a slight laugh as she moved apart .. "Ab tumhari chawanni 100 rupee ban gayi hai .." she joked , making him laugh .. "Lekin mere liye tu humesha meri Chawanni hi rahegi .." he said in a firm yet loving voice , and wrapped her in his arms again !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bidzie yaar..yeh kya...kab hoga yeh sab..
You wrote it so beautifully <3
I loved the part where he realized who she was.
And moreover, the part where they approach each other, not being able to stop crying..
And his classic dialogues for his chavanni..
Continue soon..
I seriously wish this eventually does happen..
We do know it will since they'll be working together soon 😳
Edited by OnlyHope - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bidu
You made my Nav cry...aww poor Nanhi..This will be a real tear jerker moment for audience when it will be aired on our TV 😭 😭

Very nice...👏 So now Nanhi and Spiderman are on mission and again they will reach to the real truth..like last time

Waiting for next part..😳
Update fast fast fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Pals di:
Obviously the reunion is going to make the audience cry. 😭

Just imagine Nanhi's face when she will know that Mohan didn't forget them, and since the last 12 years, he too has been searching for Addu madly. First of all, she will curse herself for not trusting her Spidey. Imagine Mohan's face when he will know that the reporter who is working under him is his Chawanni only. I'm going to cry for sure. Can't wait for the moment though. 😳

Thank you so much di. 🤗 Btw I want my MN to patch up first cause they are my first love when I entered the world of NBT. Love them forever 😳

Will try to update soon. 😊

@Rinku:
Thanks dear !

@Fairy:
Unres asap ! 😛
Edited by -MohanKiMeera- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all... please mujhe bata...kya tu mere dimag mein ghus sakti hai ? 😲😕

You know after...right after first epi of this season... i started making my own story of MN meet...😆. n I exactly thought the same..😉...reached to this point where you made MN met ! Goshhh i so kill you for this..😡😆...!

But you won my heart today....thanks a ton for writing an OS on my MN yaar..😳..love youuu for this mwaaahhh ! 🤗

The way Nanhi says "Boss, kuch dena tha aap ko .." awww my heart went for her ! I know such scenes gonna come...😭

The moment Mohan saw that photo...Megha with that reporter...aww my heart wrenched...I felt like i could actually see this whole scene live!

Mohan calling her...n he could actually find her right behind him.😳😉...Awww! I so want such dramatic turns when MN gonna actually reunite..please ! Little embarassing to say..but I like filmy things! 😃😆

Then..their epic dialogues "chavanni...spiderman...wish maangi thi... roti kyun hai"... awww yaar...☺️. jaise jaise main yeh padh rhi thi... waise waise mujhe inke saare scenes yaad aa rahe the! 😭

Nanhi not being able to say...n mohan..like a true friend..father..😳 understood his chavanni...😳 their hug..the most awaited MN hug...haayeee....my heart just melting.😳...awww ! please please please..i want the same sequence in the same as well...! I'm having tears reading this yaar...its so heart-warming....I so want my MN back really soonish! 😉

Last lines..where they both said something to each...which broke into a laugh...awww MN back in full swing...😉😎 haayeee yeh kab dekhne ko milega...!

Anyways..thanks for such a wonderful treat behena...🤗 Dont know show mein aisa kab hoga...🤔 ya hoga bhi ya nahi... but i love you for getting me experienced this for a while atleast ! 😳

Continue soon...😃. wanna see Spidey-Chavanni on a mission together ! 😎


-Varshu! ❤️


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Waiting for a LOOONG comment 😉
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Very good Bids hope to see some thing similar in the show also
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Very nice Bidzie...kuch aisa hi hoga but pata nahi how long it would take... Finally u broke the block...waiting for the next part... Sorry I just couldn't make myself write anything ...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: OnlyHope

Bidzie yaar..yeh kya...kab hoga yeh sab..
You wrote it so beautifully <3
I loved the part where he realized who she was.
And moreover, the part where they approach each other, not being able to stop crying..
And his classic dialogues for his chavanni..
Continue soon..
I seriously wish this eventually does happen..
We do know it will since they'll be working together soon 😳

Fingers crossed, Fairy...I badly want for their reunion ! It's obvious that they will be finding Addu together, but before that, they need to patch up 😳 I actually wanna cry in happiness while watching their reunion ,and I'm also sure that Kunal and Jayashree are gonna nail the scene 😳

Thanks for your appreciations.. Glad you loved it ! 🤗

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